MANAN SS - ALPHA AND HIS MATE (NEW THREAD LINK ON INDEX )16 FEB - Page 31

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Angel_manan

Awesome update.
Loved it very much.
Manik is very possessive.
E wala manik toh Tumhari sab story ki manik
Se and tumhari manik se bhi full ulta hai...
Nandini ki mon also know it he is nandini's mate..
Abhi manik ki pack house pe kya hoga jaldi dikhao...
1st hidden love ko post karna...
Waiting for updates.
Keep smiling
Stay blessed
Lots of love
Purna

Thanks purna and I will
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Coolgal_muskan

Hey.!

This was a superb update!!
Loved it totally!!!
Pls update hidden love... It's been so long since u updated that,!!!
This is an amazing story!!!
Eagerly waiting for the next update

Thanks dear And I will
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: moudeb

awesome updet.
moster manik.very possessive for his mate.
nice story writing.
plz next part continue soon.
stey blessed forever.

Thanks dear And updating...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kishubedi

Thanks for pm
It was great
Enjoying reading this story
Very different
But one question how did manik come to know that Nandu is his mate n also how did nandus mom know bout him being Her mate

Am glad you like it ...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nandininiti

it was beautiful story
manan were always each other mate
manik get what he want
poor nandu
update soon

Thanks dear And updating ...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sonalmanan

Amazing!! Manik is so possessive about her... Nandu is so hurt,she don't want to go... I wud like to see how he manofies her now... Pls continue soon... Thanks for the pm... 😊 😊

Updating ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank you SooO much Guys for ur lovely comments and likes ...and yes update regular de rahi hu ...but short ha ...kyunki aap logo ke comments bhi short ha ...long long comment karo ...tabhi long long update dungi ...hehe ...so here is the update ...ENJOY😛


PART-2 (C)


Manik smirkingly looking at nandani ...While nandani was giving him disgusting look ...

Manik smirkingly said : WAR IS OVER ...

Everyone looked at him in shocked ...first nandani accept him and now this ...abhi came towards nandani and cupped her face and said

Abhi : Jaan look at me ...dekho agar tumne iss war ki vajhse yeh decision liya ha ...toh please esa mat kar ...dekh tera bhai hai ...I will protect you jaan ...dekh tu dar mat ...agar issne kuch kaha ha toh mujhe bata naa ...

Nandani eyes were filled with tears and our manik was fuming in anger ...how can he touch his mate ...he came towards them and pulled nandani towards him and placed his hand on her waist ...and gives a deadly glare to abhi and said

Manik angrily said : Don't ...Don't u dare touch her ...she is mine ...only mine ...

Abhi gave him a angry glare and said : but she is my sister too ...and I knew u said something to her ...otherwise she will never accept u ...

Manik smirkingly said : Really ...but she accepts me ...that too in front of everyone ...She is ready to come with me ...what u want to say about it ...

Abhi was numb by listening this and looked at nandani who was crying silently ...he is feeling so helplessly ...that he couldn't do anything for his Jaan ...his baby sis ...he came towards her and joined his hand in front of her and said

Abhi : am sorry jaan ...I couldn't do anything ...am sorry ...maaf karde apne iss bhai ko...

Nandani looked at abhi who was having tears in his eyes ...she felt like killing herself ...and all this just bcz of this monster who is her mate now ...she hold his hand and gestured him no and said ...

Nandani said : IT'S NOT UR FAULT ABHI ...IT'S MY FATE ...MY DESTINY ...U CAN'T CHANGE MY FATE ...U CAN'T CHANGE THE FACT ...MY MATE IS A MONSTER ...WHO KILLED PEOPLE'S ...WHO DOESN'T HAVE HEART ...U DON'T NEED TO SAY SORRY TO ME ...IT'S NOT UR FAULT ...

After listening this manik loosened his grip from her waist and was just looking at nandani with painfully eyes...While nandani was just looking at abhi ...abhi hugged her tightly and nandani to hugged him back ...a tear wss about to fall from manik eyes but manik composed himself ...a guy came towards manik and said

Guy : Alpha ...we can't leave right now as it's very late ...toh aap please jaa kar rest kar lijiye apne tent main ...

Nandani broke the hug and looked at manik who was just looking at her with painfully eyes ...

Nandani Pov :

Why he is looking at me like this ...why his eyes were so painful ...what's that pain ...is it bcz of my words or something ...

HEART : Yes it is bcz of ur words ...u shouldn't have said all these things...

MIND : What... why wouldn't I said all this ...he deserves all this ...he is a monster ...he attacked my pack ...he is about to kill my family ...

HEART : But he didn't killed right ...give him a chance ...

MIND : Chance my foot ...he doesn't deserve a chance ...chance usse diya jaata jo uske liye willing ho ...but yeh toh order chala raha ha...bloody monster ...

Nandani didn't realized she is looking at manik all the time

Manik Pov :

Kyu esa kar rahi ho mate ...am I that bad ...kya main pyar ke laayak nahi ...arre agar pata hota yeh tumhara pack ha ...toh main tumhare pack pe attack thodi naa karta ...par vaise dekha jaaye toh aacha hi hua ...agar attack nahi karta toh tum kaise milti mujhe ...aur uper se itni dheet ho ki kya batau ...gussa toh hamesha naak par rehta ha ...chalo ab dekhte ha kitni der tak naaraz rahegi meri mate ...I hope am able to make a place in her heart ...I hope she will accept me ...I hope she will love me ...

both shares a cute eye lock which is broke by guy

Guy : Alpha chaliye ...

Manik came out of the trance and looked at nandani and smirks

Manik smirkingly said : why would I stay here in tent ...when my mate house is here ...I will live over there only ...right mate😉

Nandani was just looking at him in shock

Nandani Pov :
Kaha tha maine ek no. Ka monster ha ...ab mujhe meri family ke saath ek aakhri raat bhi nahi bitane dega ...bloody hell ...Aayappaaa kya bigada ha maine ...nahi bol hi do aaj toh ...bigada kya ha ...huh ...kyu phasa dete ho mujhe ...bloody jerk ...

Manik came towards nandani while nandani was thinking all this manik came close to her ears and said

Manik : Galiyaan baad main de lena mujhe ..

Nandani looked at him in shock and said : tumhe kaise pata laga ...

Manik mumbled : perfect ab bas issi ki hi kaami thi ...

Nandani : bolo ...

Manik sarcastically said : Mujhe pata chal jaata ha ...ab galliyaan baad main dena aur ghar le chalo aur sweet khila do bahot bhuk lag rahi ha ...

Nandani gave him a disbelief look and mumbled : ZAHER NAA KHILA DOON ...

Manik listened this and said : Agar tum khilaogi toh voh bhi kha lunga meri sweet😉

Nandani looked at him in shock ...her mouth is like oO shape ...manik was like Awww over her ...

Manik : don't make these kind of faces otherwise I will kiss u right here ...aur phir mat kehna ki bataya nahi tha ...

Nandani : what the ...

Before she could say anything manik left from there ...nandani frustratingly to followed him ...




***WEREWOLVES HAVE SHARP EARS ...THEY CAN HEAR LOW SOUND THINGS TOO ***

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So how's it ...mazza aaya ...bhi toh Nandani ke ghar par jayega hamara manik ...bahot kuch hoga guys and am sure u guys will love it ...chalo now update chahiye toh comment or likes karna mat bhulna ...hehe ...
IF U GUYS LOVE IT
DO HIT THE LIKE BUTTON AND COMMENT ON IT TOO ...
Till then
Keep loving
Keep smiling
And
Keep shining For Ur loved ones
Love
Diya😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice 1.
So finally went wht manik bcz of his threat...
But m sure it won't b easy fr manik to win hr heart..

Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
lolzzz
i knw its ws an emotional one at start

bt

manan convo wss too lovelyyy


i knw there must b a reason fr manik to b a monster

nd jab nandini ko ptaa chlega to pkka fireworks hngee

lolzzz


manik guin to his sasuraaal


lolzzz


fireworks to abhi bhi hone wle h


cnt wait


abb isse lmba cmmnt kya hi kru

nxt tym no part ABC

gve a full ch 3


hehhehe


loads of love

ur stry'z bugging demanding crazy reader :P
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Posted: 9 years ago
That ws funny n cute!!! Aww... Manan as alwz maks u go awww on dm.. Yaar i wish dy cud read minds ... It wil so funny to c manan takar evn via mind... Nandu kuch sochega.. Manik javab dega.. Result iritatd nandu.. Smirkin manik.. Wowhhh!!!!😆 that ws jus a tot.. D chap ws awesme n sooo cute!!!! Thnk u ...hope u update soon...

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