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lovePANI

@lovePANI

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#571

Hahahahah. ... 🤣
Wat was that...
Manik n that dream..
Nandu was lifting his viel Hahahahah that was hilarious. ..

Enjoyed alottt
Thsnx yaa...

Thank u
Keep smiling. . Dear

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Aamikrish

@Aamikrish

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#572

Awesome update.

Manik z scared, ohh. So even boys are scared of marriage.

Oh god his dream, it soo funny. Der first night and she teasing HIM.

Vail, like really Manik z shy and all. He z scared of her dominance.

Liked the way sidd made him understand everything.

I loved it

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love_is_manan

@love_is_manan

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#573

It was hilarious...

Like seriously... Manik n shy😆😆😆

His dream is so funny...

I can't imagine Manik n Nandini like this in my dreams too🤣🤣

The way sid made him understand things that was awesome...

Continue soon

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1044737

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#574

Wow! 😃

That's Amazing.!

Teaser was damn funny.!

My friend was beside when I started reading your work by the time I completed TEASER she stood 3 feet away from me giving me ARE-YOU-MAD look.!

People in saloon were giving my friend Pity looks.! All thanks to you because I was cracking up very badly after every sentence.! I visualized Manik and Nandini while reading.! And all the rituals are beautifully penned.! Those I was damn confused with Dadi's sentences as I am poor at Hindi and Punjabi(I hope that is PUNJABI only) all combined it was fun.! Haha Nandini Unromantic person. Bechari Manik.! Haha.! I dint knew my ideas will make people laugh their heads out until I read manik's dream sequence.! Honestly this was the first time I read my idea! Now I understood why do readers tell my works are stress boosters.! Aye-aye.! Good job baby.! (Khudko praise kar rahi hyun.! Not you 😛)

Okkie okkie back to you.! I loved conversation between Sid and Manik.!

Abh basss.! Aur nahi ho saktha.! I cant write more lamba.!

You know I feel SHY😳 in telling my feelings infront on everyone.! All I could say is one word WONDERFUL!! It actually is.!

PS- I will read your other works after 19th June.! Pakka Promise FRIEND😉

TAKE CARE!

STAY BLESSED!!

KEEP SMILING!!!

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Charmi98

@Charmi98

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#575

Hey di...I knw im late...aactually I was busy spending my vacs as abhi vapis cls n ol chalu hoga. ..

D updates of bth ur stories were amazing. ...

Ek wala emotional n ek wala full on laughter se bhara

I couldn't stop laughing wn manik was imagining hus first night n d bold tigress side of nandu🤣

First thoda I got confused ki yeh laha se aaya bt it was super fun reading. ...

Nervous manik is so cute ...

In ol wonderful update...

Hope u continue soon. ..

Eagerly waiting. ..

Ik u r upset wid d low response fr ur stories. ..bt it is nt bcz ur stories r lacking smwhr dey r jus amazing n beautiful. ..bth hv a unique n different concept. ..

I guess ppl here r nt use to unique thngs isliye dey r lacking smwhr in responding. ..

Bt I swear u r really awesome writer. ..n one of d wonderful writer if d IF I really mean it its nt jus fr saeing. ..

Pls try n continue ur stories if possible fr us d regular ones pls...

Bt tn rest is on u...

Lts of luv

Take care

Bt ys il b der fr u always if needed😳

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Sonalmanan

@Sonalmanan

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#576

Wow awesome!! Manik's dream was so hilarious, I was laughing like a maniac... 😆 😆 Manik is so nervous,kuch bhi imagine kr rha h 😃 Nandu seemed to b too oblivious to everything... Cabir is so cute n adorable... I like the way Sid jiju explained Everything to him... Pls continue soon... Don't even think of ending it,its one of my favorite ff...I know I m late,but wat to do,I m really busy... Sorry for late comment... Thanks for the pm 😊 😊

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rajani_sid

@rajani_sid

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#577

Interesting new story, I like it. Keept up!

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mehak_ahuja

@mehak_ahuja

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#578

Omg... What a story... God I'm still laughing ... Hass hass k eyes me aasu aa gye hai... Seriously... I don't know yeh story meine pehle kyu nhi padhi... Just came across the story n read all the three parts... N like kya kammaaalll ka likha hai aapne ... I mean its just awesome ... Amazing... Mindblowing... Totally loved it

Esse zada adjectives I don't know... Lekin bahut hi nice story hai... The sangeet ka function 👏 specially the song selections... Ek dum situational... N Manik ka dream was hehehehehehe... Just can't stop laughing...

This is a wonderful story... Loved it.. Glad I came across this... 😃😃

If possible plz pm me next tym u update... Im sending u buddy request ... Thanxx in advance

😊

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mehak_ahuja

@mehak_ahuja

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#579

Just read the teaser... And nandini is still struck on let's be friends first... N poori titanic dekh k bechari kua smjhi... Hehehehe...

Amazing teaser... Eagerly waiting for the next update

😊

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Ammu

@Entwined_Fates

Stunner

Posted: 9 years ago

#580

OKAHE...

firstly this is full package of lauging gas...
gosshhh... you really amazed me... damn can you believe i was literally rolling on the floor while reading.. matlab each and every part isshhh... its too hilarious
so here's the comment of all parts... 😛

The pace of the story is going well.
Okay so loved this update.
Pehle meeting me hi Manik and Nandini said yes for marriage.
You have described Manik's situation very nicely. Well written
Then their meeting...good
I loved the Pandit part!! 😆
The short courtship period was also very nicely written.
pics are superb and very beautiful selection 👏👏
Then the Haldi 😆
Poor Manik 😆
And the bold Aunty...boxers nai pehne kya 🤣
Very interesting update

mind blowing sangeet...

full on masti...

samaira protecting her maamu that was so cute and adorable...cabir's punch...heheh😆😆🤣..hilarious...desperate manik haan..

cabir aur anusha ki permoance ke to kya e kehne the,,,,,,brilliant,,,,,,,kitne ache se manik aur nandu ko ek dusre ke baare mein bataya,.,,,,,,,,,

manik ka first crush maths teacher,.,,,,,wow,,,,,,,and lol...when you wrote this like chotu babies ke accent mein wo One One Sa Two, Two Two Sa Four Jab Bhi Yeh Calculate Karta, I Loved Her More☺️...loved it...miss unromantic ka first crush aur vo bhi gay nikle...😆😆finally he get the chance to sit with nandu,,,,,,,,,maa da ladla wali permoance outstanding,,,,,,,namit but for u namita,,,,,,hahah🤣...ab hamara manik hai hi itna hot n happening koi kya kare...bechare ladke bhi gaye kaam se...manik and nandu ki performance mind blowing...last mein baaji to hamare manik ne maar li.,,,,,best performance of the day... full on rajshri mode... uff ufff.. its too fun... rishabh aur anusha ke bhi lottery lag gaye... awww!!! i soo love this PREM of HSSH gosshh Ain't he cuteness ka khazaanaa

next parts ka review... i'll give after reading...
thanks for the pm's

take care 😛

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