MaNan OS: Kise Da Yaar Na Vichre..! Updated on PG8/8th-January-2016

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mona

@cmamona

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Posted: 9 years ago

#151

Hey

Very heart wrenching os...

U made me cry...
So painful yet so much bliss... Cz at d end they were together... Not only here at their death bed but they will be together forever in heaven and also away from dis cruel world...

True love stays in heaven... Forever...

Keep smiling
Stay blessed... :)

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Lizbeth

@Lizbeth

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Posted: 9 years ago

#152

Oh god.. My heart is achinggg.. It hurts.. Amazing mahn.. Oh god..

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ANGEL1708

@ANGEL1708

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Posted: 9 years ago

#153

The post is so emotional !!😭 U portrayed the two lovers love story so beautifully loved it !! The os was awesome !!👏Write such kind of os more often !! Thanks for pm !! Bcoz of it I'm in touch with ur beautiful stories !!

Write next story soon 😊

Love u lods

Angel

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Kaanika

@Kaanika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#154

A very heartiest thanks to you for writing this Os it was soo mesmerizing...it really touched my heart..

You performed your job very well..

You penned down each and every word soo beautifully..that it all seems to real..though it is a fiction.

Coming to the update..

Manan two bodies but one soul...

Both are worried for each other..

One cannot see the other in pain..

Their bond was soo pure soo blissfull..

N the intensity of this Os .It really gives me goosebumps..

Arayaman is soo cunning..he killed the most lovley couple..

It was soo emotional i really felt like crying..

Thanks once againg for writing for us..

Keep it up..

Hats off to all your efforts and hardwork to put in writing your each and every story

Well done..

Stay happy and blessed

Edited by kanika28 - 9 years ago

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Samaria

@AngelSnowflake2

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Posted: 9 years ago

#155

Amazing!

It's simply amazing!

Very emotional love story it is!

Seriously you are an amazing writer!

Writing such emotional stuff isn't an easy thing!

And no ordinary people can write such...amazing things!

Only a true..writer who writes wholeheartedly can do such wonders!

You have penned it very beautifully!

Hope to read more such stories!

Stay blessed

Love

Samira❤️

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mounicareddyc

@mounicareddyc

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Posted: 9 years ago

#156

Omg mawara..!!! I litrally had tears while reading dis chapter.. Such an emotional one.. Gosh kaise likete ho tum aise.. Ufff... Da most emotional os I hav read so far.. Gosh n I'm still crying.!!!! I hate u fr dis..fr making me cry like dis