Manan Fan Fiction:Nandini-Chapter 1:page 2

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Hello everyone!
This is my first time writing something and I hope you all will like it and if not do let me know as I don't know how this turned out!😕
Please leave your likes and comment and let me know what you think about it😊



Manan Fan Fiction:Nandini

Prologue:

As far as I remember I was always lonely and frankly speaking I liked it that way cause I've never known anything else.Its not that I had a bad childhood or my parents didn't love me,its just that they didn't know what to do with me.They tried,they really did but handling a difficult kid who refused to co-operate and communicate is never easy.I have always been very different.I was this really quite kid who was extremely particular about time.I hate chaos,uncertainties or surprises of any sort,I just hate this feeling of loosing control.

I never had any friends in school mostly because I never liked anyone and my school-mates including my seniors were a bit scared of me,why i don't know but it served my purposes well,social interactions was never my thing.

When I turned 20,my parents moved to Italy because of business expansions and since then I have been staying alone.I shifted from Malhotra Mansion to a more comfortable apartment as it was more closer to my college plus staying in such a huge house all by myself hardly made sense.

I was doing fine being alone and lonely mostly because I liked it that way but then i met Nandini and I no longer wanted to be alone or lonely.

So,what do you guys think.

Index:

1.Prologue----1
2.Chapter1----2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice n interesting pls continue n update soon
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LOVELY PROLOGUE
please cont soon
and if possible pm me please

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Very nice. Hope you continue soon.
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Nice & interesting concept...
Continue soon...
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Lovely prologue!
Looking forward for the updates!
Continue soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks a lot for liking and commenting guys.
Here's the 1st chapter.
Do tell me what you think about and please don't forget to like and comment.

Chapter 1:

"Nandini you sure about this"said Rishab,pulling out Nandini's bags from his car."One word and we are out from here plus my home is really not that far fom here".

"Bhai its okay and it'll be more better this way.Plus its just a hostel I'll be okay,don't worry"she said trying to calm her protective brother.

"I know,its just that.."he sighed,"I really don't like the idea of you staying alone so far from home".

"I am not alone bhai there will be other girls too and you're just three hours away from this place so it'll be okay"she tried to soothe him.

"I still think you should commute to and fro,but you have to promise me that you'll call every two hours and in case of any emergency you'll call me up irrespective of time without fail,deal"Rishab said pulling his pinky out towards Nandini.

"Done deal"Nandin smiled joining their pinkies."I'll miss you bhai"Nandini hugged Rishab with tears in her eyes,"I'll miss you too champ,remember I am just three hours away okay".

"Okay and drive safely,no speeding and no phone while driving".

"As you wish mom"laughed Rishab while getting to his car.

Nandini stood there misty-eyed for a few seconds till his car was completely out of sight.She sighed,"time to get your new journey started Nandini"she thought while trying to pull her heavy bags with all her might.

"Need help".

P.S.I'll try to post the next update soon.😊
Edited by wonderstar13 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey good start
loved the bro-sis convo
cont soon
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was nice but small..
Try n update a bit longer next time..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome prologue...
Sounds interesting...
Luved it...
Plz continue asap...
Take care...

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