SOCH NA SAKE-NEW OS (NEW YEAR GIFT) PART1/2/3/4/5 UPDATED PG1/2

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sameeksha

@mini_manan

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Firstly HAPPY NEW YEAR BABY...!!!
SECONDLY ALL THE BEST FOR UR EXAM..
thirdly this was my favourite song...i really cant get enough of it...
Infact the original punjabi song of this is also my fav...
Soldier's life is in danger always..
We cant even think ki what their family feel...
Missing their husband, son, brother...
With the hope that one day they will come back...
This feeling shuttered me...i to cant even imagine...
Beautifully depicted the pain nd lonliness and a wait through this story..
Love u..

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urvxshi

@urvxshi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

it was amazing dear..so full of love, very well put down ...superb..Manan together after separation..great

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ArSha_ManNan

@ArSha_ManNan

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Wowww
This was so so beautifully written...
Awesome
The separation ... The wait... The anxiousness... The fear of losing...
Very well written
The romance ... The flashbacks wow
And the happy ending... Manik back and MaNan together
Loved the lines which manik told nandu...
Superb
Thnkz 4 the pm

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Maramkhan

@Maramkhan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Gosh ! Such a bliss story loved it.

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Nandini_goyal

@Nandini_goyal

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#45

I will comment when I am done crying

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kirti0123

@kirti0123

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Just one word yr it was "pure bliss"

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neetamandaliya

@neetamandaliya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Lovely Ya.. ... Continue with ur work.. .ur stories are awesome.. .
Interesting & different.. . 😊

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SNEHA

@snow_manan

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#48

waooww...great story

awesome concept

liked it very much

you have penned it so beautifully

could feel the emotions

👏

great work

thanks for the pm

all the best

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Saswati Mohanty

@SaswatiNancy

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Wow... Totally adored the story.. It was emotional romantic one... Loved the plot... The desperation nd separation... It had a patriotic feeling too.. Nd it was different from what u hv been writing...

Keep writing some more os too...

Love reading dm...

Happy New Year...