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MONSTER MANIK

Part-10A

nandini- because I love u...
manik was shocked + happy with this sudden confession of nandini, he was not believing on his ears...
manik- wat?? kya kaha tumne???
nandini realised wat she had speak. She looked down.
she was herself unknown why she said that...
manik hold her chin and make her look at his face
manik- nandini plzz say it one time more
nandini looked towards manik and was lost in his eyes
manik- bolo
manik - chalo koi nhi we will talk inside the room, come... come inside the room chalo
nandini- room but kyun???
manik- its cold naa due to snow falling... that's why... kyun tumne kya socha ???? hmmm by widening his eyebrow
nandini- (stammering) vo... vo main
manik- ek minute... ek minute kahi tum ye toh soch nhi rhi ki, you and me are alone in the room and can come some close to each other(smirking)...
nandini- (starts looking here and there) nhi vo main...
manik- vaise I don't have a problem in dat you know I am always ready for that (by winking at her)
manik take nandini in his arms
nandini try to protest
nandini- Sir I can walk, aap
manik- kyun I can't take my FUTURE WIFE in my arms...bolo
nandani- turn red by hearing FUTURE WIFE
nandini- sir every one is seeing us
manik- toh let them see I don't have a problem in dat
nandini hide her face in his chest due to embarressment, as everyone was watching them
manik smiled at her
He brings Nandini to his room and close the door and see at her, she was still hiding her face in his chest
manik- nandini
nandini looks at manik, manik make her stand
manik- (holding his hand) U haven't eaten naa anything, come sit and make her sit on the bed
manik orders the food
manik then turns toward nandini and sees her looking at him
He goes near her and take her hands in his
manik-(caressing his hands with his fingers) nandini thanx, for coming in my life, I have not thought that u... and tears were filled in his eyes
nandini sees tears in his eyes ...
she removes the tears from his eyes and nods her head nooo
She come closer to him, holds his face with her hands and kissed her left eye
manik holds her waist
nandini then moved towards his right eye and kissed it too
while manik was closing his eyes and feeling her fragrance as she was very close to himself
then nandini moved toards his left cheek
she kissed his left cheek
Then moved towards his right cheek and kissed there too...
while manik was lost in her
nandini then kissed his forehead
manik open his eyes and sees her approaching towards his lips
He come more closer to her now they were so close to each other that air also cant pass in between them...
There noses were touching and there lips were just apart to touch
manik was holding her waist protectively, while her hands move towards his hairs pulling him close to herself...
and finally there lips meet,
both closed there eyes to feel this moment, world was stopped for them...
there lips were moving in a sync,
There kiss was so soft and pure...

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finally there lips meet,
both closed there eyes to feel this moment, world was stopped for them...
there lips were moving in a sync,
There kiss was so soft and pure
Both were not ready to parted their lips, but the knock on door disturb their private moment, nandini was all red remembering that what she had done few moment ago. manik was very happy, he was looking towards nandini while nandini was stealing glances from him

Manik open the door and their dinner had come, he takes it and places it on the table and looks toward nandini
Nandini's pov
AIYAPPA!!!!! wat I had done, but it seems that today I can't control myself. I love him, and now also I am blushing remembering our scenes. I have kissed him, it seems like a dream. He is so much caring, luving person. more ever his touch is so magical, I always get lost when he is around me. My heartbeat starts pacing loudly due to a mere presence of him
while nandini was thinking all this, manik called her for dinner
manik-(with so much love) nandini
nandini no response
manik sees her that she has lost somewhere. He goes towards her and take her hand in his
manik- nandini
nandini now looks towards him
manik- come dinner karlo
manik brings nandini near the couch and make her sit, he too sits holding her hands
manik- nandini start naa
nandini - aap ??
manik-(look towards her) tum khilado naa plzz by making a cute pout
nandini- smiled by seeing his cute pout and start feeding him.
manik- also make her eat and after some time he come in naughty mood
he come closer to her while nandini is unknown of his actions
nandini was eating dinner, but she started shivering due to his touch on her body. manik had dived his face in the crook of her neck and started giving kissing her shoulder, he was tracing his fingers on his arms
nandini was shivering due to his proximity
nandini- (stammering) sirrr
manik- hmmm
nandini has lost the words, she was not able to speak, her breathing had become heavy, she at once jerk him and stand near the window
nandini back was facing manik, manik ruffled his hair and smiles, he goes near her and hold her waist
he back hug her, and put his chin on her shoulder
she closes her eyes feeling his touch.
manik- (in teasing way) vaise nandini... I haven't expected that you can do this also
nandini- open her eyes
manik turn her towards himself
manik- bolo how have you got courage to do that hmmm
nandini- vo...vo... mera... matlab... voo... kisss
manik- Kisss... I wasn't talking about that..
I was saying that you have confessed finally... so from where you get courage to say that
but you were thinking about kisss... hmmm
nandini was embarrassed, she looked down
while manik bring her more close to himself by holding her waist
manik- vaise I must say that you also loved to kisss mee and may b you have continued your kissing session if we were not get disturbed by the knock hmmm
nandini was not able to control his teasing session and at once hug him, while he smiled broadly
manik while hugging her start giving her kisses on her neck to shoulder...he started inhaling her hair fragrance which was making him crazy
A shiver run down her spine, while she tried to pushed him only to get back banged in his chest. he place her hair on front and start giving wet kiss on her back, she was holding his one hand
He turns her and place her hands on his shoulder and give a kiss on his forehead,
nandini- vooo I...
manik placed his finger on her lips tracing her lips with his finger
manik- you deserve a reward naa.. for kissing mee so, I m just giving you your reward jaan
by hearing the word jaan an unknown blush crept on her face
manik moved towards her lips, while she closed her eyes in anticipation...

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manik moved towards her lips, while she closed her eyes in anticipation. Nandini knew what actually he wanted. she didn't protest and give in. Manik sees her closing her eyes and he smiled .
In few seconds he keeps his lips on her lips, he very softly kissed her soft petal lyk lips.
she keeps her hands on his shoulder while he holds her waist with his hand.
he took her lower lips in his and start sucking it... and in few minutes he take her upper lips. The kiss turn out to be passionate kiss.
after about 10 minutes manik feels that she is breatheless, so he leaves her lips and rested his forehead on hers...
manik- NANDANI, YOU ARE VERY SPECIAL...
nandani sees him and says
nandani- Special and meee
manik- aur nhi toh kya, you are only light in my life
nandani- light of your life, really...
tears were brimmed in her eyes
manik sees tears in her eyes
manik- Nandani why always you end up in tears, I don't want tears in your eyes. I love your smile and really you are my shinning star who works as a light in my life.
did you remember our first meeting???? hmmm
I have lost my heart that day only when I have seen you for first time
On hearing the first meeting, nandani smiled remembering their first meet
FLASHBACK SCENE:
manik has reached the restaurant to meet the girl whom his family wants him to meet at least for once for his marriage
manik was in no mood ready for marriage but for her mom he comes to meet the girl
While at other side nandani also reached there with her friend navya.
nandani- navya, don't worry main hoon naa... I will handle everything
navya- nandani mummy daddy naaa pta nhi kya jldi hain unhe hamari shaadi kii ...now only if he can rufuse for this marriage, then I will be free from this problem
nandani- vo toh thik hain... but we don't know him... then how will we identify him
navya- vo akela aayega toh dekhte hain... hmmm
vo dekho vo ladka (pointing towards manik) vo akela h... hmmm vhi hoga
nandani sees manik and says
nandani- ye toh achi family se lagta hain, you are lucky enough... ek baar baat toh kar ke dekh may b tera decision change ho jaye iss shaadi ko leke
navya- nandani tu meri help karne ke liye aayi hain... don't forget and chal plan execute krte hain
navya and nandani moves towards manik
nandani- excuse mee
manik's pov
I was getting anger as it is 10 minutes waiting for that girl, then only I hear a soft voice and look towards the owner of the voice, she was standing in front of me, she was looking like an angel, so beautiful... and my trance was broken by the louder voice of her
nandani- hello mister
manik- hii taking her hands for a handshake. her hands were very soft, I was holding them tightly so as to never leave them
nandani- leave my hands
manik- ohh yaa sorry
nandani- Are u waiting for someone?? while raising her eyebrows
manik- hmmm, waiting for a girl
navya(saying in nandani ears)- dekha humne kha tha naa
nandani- toh ab kya kre???
while nandani and navya were busy in talking, manik was seeing her girl with so much love
nandani- waiting for a girl for marriage proposal...kya???
manik- hmmm but aap ko kaisa pta, ek minute kahi aap hi toh nhi hain vo ladki
navya- at once yess
nandani look at navya in disblief
navya pleading her with eyes
manik- (was happy) achaa I am ready for this marriage
nandani- readyyy aise kaise ready... abhi toh we haven't talk either
manik- (first at least sit then only we can talk naa)
navni sits in front of him
manik- hmmm you want something??
nandani- water
manik - okk... and order the waiter
waiter brings water
manik- you want to ask something
nandani- nhiii... vooo I want to tell something to you
manik- wat??
nandani - vooo...stammering
navya- vooo actually naa she ... she is habitual of drinking and smoking
manik looks at her
nandani- I don't have problem if you reject this marriage, so wats your decision
manik- I don't have problem in that... now also I am ready for this marriage
nandani- abhii bhi ready ( looking towards navya to wat to say now...)
navya- actually naa she has a boyfriend too...
nandani- boyfrienddd in louder voice
while manik was getting angry
navya- hmm she has a boyfriend and she love her
nandani's pov
AIYAPPA!!!! ye kya kar rhi hain navya... boyfriend and love seriously how can she say this...I will not leave her
manik looking towards nandani
manik- do you love him ????
nandani- (stammering) vooo main vooo...
navya- she loves him madly
manik- then why you become ready for this marriage? looking towards nandani
navya- because of her parents
manik looking towards navya
manik- can you keep your mouth shut!!! and then looks towards nandani
manik- hmm btao do you love him????
nandani - vooo actually...
manik holds her hands in his hands
manik- I know this girl is lying... U don't seem like you can drink or smoke and I know you have no boyfriend too...hain naaa
nandani- hmm... and free her hands by him
manik- then why u guys are lying??
nandani- actually naa I am not that girl... she is that girl pointing towards navya
manik- wat ???
nandani- she was not ready for this marriage that's why we have done this...sorry
manik smiled seeing her confessing everything...
navya- ye kya kiya tumne???? You have spoiled the plan yarr
manik says listen I am... then his mobile rang
manik- excuse mee and takes call
manik- yaa mom
nyonika- beta voo actually naa aaj vo ladki nhi aa payegi restraunt main
manik- but mom voo toh aayi hain yha
nyonika- no beta abhi she is out of town... I think u have misunderstand sumone...
manik- achaa mom...okk byee
navni was looking at each other that wat happens
manik- aap dono matlab... kaun hain????
navya- I m navya and she is nandani
manik's pov
nandani... nice name... nandani manik malhotra...it seems awsummm
manik- vooo actually some problem is there... the girl I have to meet is out of town so I think ki u have misunderstood mee
navya- kyaaa shit yaar!!!! ab phir se pura drama starting se
nandani- sorry hum chalte hain...
manik- vooo, nice to meet you... I am maaa...
navya- excuse meee, we don't care who r u??? time waste kar diya chal nandani holding her hands
manik- byeee nandani
navni lefts from there...
while manik was smiling like fool
// flashback ends
manik and nandani smiled remembering their first meeting
Thank u guys for your likes and sweet comments...So, here is the part...

Love Mehak


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awesome update
first meet was very funny
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This chapter was the best till date. .
Really loved it...
Manik was so happy..
Their first meet was too cute..
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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So cute
loved it
continue soon

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