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Drashtiii

@Drashtiii

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Aawee. .
It was too emotional
i lyked it yar
both are in pain

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Atharsha

@atharsha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

its to emotional i m single but after reading your OS i felt as if i really lost ma love i was literally crying😭

Edited by atharsha - 9 years ago

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Ammu

@Entwined_Fates

Stunner

Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Jaanii
This was damn emotional update
Why you made me cry_?? 😭 😭
Jaani...I'm scared...till now i was okay but after reading this... Ek ajeeb se darr ne dil mein dastak de diye hai... 😭 😭
I shouldn't be get weak naa?? At least not now... Pheww!!! These emotions naa it will make me to end up breaking shells someday.. 😡 😡
Does anything make sense?? I don't think so 😆 😆
Chalo jii bow down for penning these emotions in such a tender age... 👏 👏

Thanks for the Pm...
Take care stay blessed

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Dua Arafat

@dua_arafat

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: Poushi
very emotional...
manik nae truth nahi bola..bina kuch bola chali gayi...
nandini ki death punishment ho gayi...

Dono ko punishment mil gai I guess which they don't deserve...

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Dua Arafat

@dua_arafat

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: AMAR_LOVE
so emotional story

Don't know how I wrote it...

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Dua Arafat

@dua_arafat

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: kanika28
Thanks for writing this OS...
You potrayed every emotion very well...
It was quite emotional..
Keep it up..
Well done.
Happy new year..

Glad u like it...

Same to you...

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Dua Arafat

@dua_arafat

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: sammy1920
Beautiful, emotional os. Loved it. Thanks for the pm. Tack care. Keep smiling 😊

Glad u like it😊

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Dua Arafat

@dua_arafat

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: parimala94
literally got tears in my eyes yar😭!!...just superb!!!...

Glad u like it and felt

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Dua Arafat

@dua_arafat

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: Fatima_mir
Han rulaa doo sabko ...😭
Butt it was awesommm
U penned it down so amazingly . ...
Manik went out for them ..she had been taking this poison from the beginning...
And finally she died in his arms ...
I wish they would have stayed happily but this wouldn't be the reality ...every time it's not necessary to have a happy ending of life
Mind blowing ...keep it upp jaannuu :-*

You are happy ending is not necessary even most of the stories don't have happy ending...

Some are incomplete or some ended

The ones got their love are the most lucky ones...