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Sujitha

@SP1208

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: dua_arafat
I really wanted to write something like this...
Hope you all will like it

Manan were in room facing each other
Nandini was shocked to him after 5 years
There was silence all around... Manik broke the silence

Nandini's POV

"Nandini can we talk?" He asked coming close to me

"No" I just simply answered in cold tone and tried to walk to be stopped by him...

He hold my hand and pulled me towards him

"But I want to talk" he said looking straight in my eyes..

"But I don't want to" I said avoiding eye contact

"But why ?" He asked making me look at him

"Manik just leave me" I Said freeing my hand

I moved towards the exit door but before me he reached and looked the door

"Nandini Plz" he pleaded

"Tumhain kia lagta hai k Tum door lock kr k zabardesti mujh se bat ke sakte ho?" I shouted in hell angry tone

"Just a chance... Sirf Ek chance de k dekho" he said in a pleading tone

I so wanted to give him that chance... I so wanted everything normal...
I so wanted... I just bloody wanted but I can't

"Chance? Mr.Manik Malhotra is asking for a chance?" I laughed in a sarcastic tone

"Tumhain kia lagta hai k main tumhain chance don gi? Not anymore" I replied in a serious tone which made his eyes moist

"But why Nandini?" He asked

"I have given you chance several time Manik... You never asked for but phir bhi diya.. And in return you cheated me you hurted me Manik" I said

"I'm sorry for that... I'm here to apologise Nandini Plz forgive me" he pleaded

"After 5 years you are here for apologise... Bhool jao Manik mujhe..." I said

"I have realised Nandini... I was wrong, stupid, Idiot jo Tumhain chor k gaya... Ab aesa Kabhi nai hoga" he stated

"It's too late Manik... Jab main tumhain realise katana chahti thi tab nai kara saki or Abhi bhi kuch nai ho sakta..." I replied looking down

"But kyun nai ho sakta.. I'm asking kyun nai?" He shouted holding me tight from my arms

"Damn it... Just once.. I know Tum bhi yehi chahti ho phir Ek bar or trust kr k dekh lo" he said frustratedly

"Tumhain pata hai, tumhare jane k bad her roz main marti thi... Ek ek din tumhari yad main tarapti thi... Likin tum nai ae... Or ab kuch nai bacha... Koi faida nai.." I explained

"Bolo kia explain karo gy??kyun chor k gae mujhe aese??" I asked holding his collar, pulling him towards me

"I wanted you to be happy... Mujhe cancer tha Nandini or main nai chahta tha tum mujhe marte hoe dekho... Isi liye door chala gaya tha tum se... Likin kismat main humara sath likha tha to wapis a gaya... And now I just only want you Nandini" he explained

"Hum ab humesha dath rahain gy or khush... Plz maaf kr do aese chor k jane k liye... " he pleaded

"I wish Manik k sab pehle jaisa ho jae" I gave a week smile to which he thought that I forgave him

POV Ended

"Maaf kr diya?" He asked with a smile and pulled her for a bone crushing hug

"Thank you Nandini... Thank you so much... You gave my life back to me..." He said pecking her hair

"I will make sure that everything will be perfect from now on... No misunderstanding nothing else... And I will love you forever... Humesha" he said still hugging her

Nandini didn't responded to the hug

"Kia howa Nandini?" He asked breaking the hug

Nandini was about to fall when again held her

"Nandini open your eyes... My love kia howa..." He said cupping her cheeks...
Not just her eyes were closed but her heart beat also stopped... She was not responding to anything... She was no more

"Nandini please kuch bolo... Aese kyun lati ho... Bolo na" He shouted

"NANDINI...

He opened her bag and and found poison and a letter...
He rushed towards hospital carrying her but till then she was no more and he got the same answer by doctors

He asked the doctors for the reason of this sudden death "she was taking poison from long... May be because don't wonna live... This poison destroyed her inner parts and till now she was finished... It can be called suside"

Manik was totally broken, he didn't died because of the cancer but he did died because she left him and He himself was the reason

He opened her letter which he found in her bag and started reading

"Manik I don't know tum kaha ho but I really miss you... And hate you for leaving me like this... I love you enough that I can't hate you, can't live without you Manik.. so I don't wonna live anymore... The pain of separation is killing me inside and soon I will be free from this pain...
I wanted to die in your arms... Take my last breathe when you must be holding me but it's not possible as you are far away.. pata nai tumhain ye letter kab mile ga.. I to even don't know k ye tumhain mile ga bhi k nai... but I just wanted to say I LOVE YOU MANIK... "

Tears were continously flowing from his eyes... he knelt down and cried his heart out

"tumhari wish puri ho gai Nandini... I was holding you close in your last moments..." he wispered looking at the letter

Main toh jiya na mara
Hai ve das main ki kara

"What I will do without you Nandini? I didn't died because I wanted to be with you and now I can't live because you are not with me"

Dil jude bina hi tut gaye hath mile bina hi chhut gaye
Ki likhe ne lekh kismet ne
Baar baar rod akhiyan tainu jo na vekh sakiyan
Khole aaye aaj kudrat ne
Kataan main ki ve din teri soth tere bin
Main toh jiya na mara

"It was our time to be together Nandini... phir kyun chor k chali gai?"

Chan Se jo tute koi sapna
JAg suna suna lage
Jag suna suna lage

"I was struggling for life... just for you.. and you left me... I'm all alone in this world Nandini all alone without you"

Koi rahe na jab apna
JAg suna suna lage

"I'm sorry Nandini I was Late... It's my fault, I lost you because of me... Main apne ap ko kabhi maas nai kr sakon ga"

"I LOVE YOU TOO NANDINI"

DO leave your precious comments and likes...
I will be waiting😊

Wow.. Just awesome..
U made me cry yaar.. ;(
So touching and emotional..
Just loved it.. :)

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samreen

@Manansamkhan

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

its amazing ...

sometime we realize but its late ..
mind blowing ..

stay blessed

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Namrata

@saradanamrata

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Awesome...👏

Very emotional..

I feel like crying..😭

Its NYC..

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RUBI

@bluelake99

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

it ws Emotional ,, nd soo perfct OS ..

srusly loved it 2 d Core ..

they both gt wht they deserved !!

Applause 2 u ..

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Geet *wink*

@dreamy_doll15

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

that's so emotional. .

oh my god..

m crying so much..
totally luved this

I just love it..
Itsss soo awesome ..
So amazing. .just love to the core. ..

Soo .fantastic. ...

Keep updating. ..

U r such a beautiful writer...
Update soon..
Waiting for next update eagerly ..
Thanks for this update
.
Thanks for pm too. ..

Love Geet