One Night Stand With A Stranger Manan ss Chapter 10,on 130 pms later - Page 51

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update really loved it , finally something good happening around nandini
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsome
Loved it
Oh god poor Manik karele ka halwa
Ewww

Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi,

I haven't read much of your and i apologise about it. Just that i came across this story and i read one of the comments written for you so harshly. It really made me worry as to how can one speak so ill about an another person whom you hardly know or whose views are not yet conveyed as it was just the start of the story...

I felt so low about it and thought aren't we living in a free nation and don't we have freedom of expression... I read the warning message you had written for that chapter and it shows you were concerned about this matter and understand the sensitivity of the content you have narrated... It clearly depicted that you had a sound reason to do it and we all should appreciate that part...

The story itself has a very mature treatment and we all need to say you this that you are brave enough to do it... I agree to one thing that kids are getting exposed to lot of things they shouldn't be, but its a forum and here you are meant to voice your feelings and thoughts. So, Girl you did nothing wrong in your part at all... Its a very difficult subject to deal with what you are writing and it really takes courage to do it.

A piece of information about certain things of your readers... Why don't these so called bashers of yours speak up when we witness in news rapes, domestic violence, molestation and god knows what everyday. They keep mum about it and here its just a fictional story and they are making a ruckus about it.

I would like to tell that reader of yours who had posted a very crap comment for you, its easy to write something here, but if you truly feel for doing social service, then please its my humble request that just put your voice ahead when there are things going on in real world and that would make a difference. I am not against that person, but i would request that person to understand that even if he/she wants to criticise your work they can do it in a more polite and humble manner.

He/she could have put up his/her point across to you in a more descent manner and i guess that would have atleast made some sense instead of just writing crap... I request other readers too that please don't bash her for just expressing her story, its not fair on our part.

There are so many incidents in our life that happen just like that and the story she is narrating might even exist in some part of the world, who knows...

So, please show some sensitivity towards your writer and if you want to question something, i think we all are matured enough to raise those questions in a more civilised manner and not just comment anything crap.

I really stand by you and i hope you will continue to write things the way you have planned, yet keeping the sensitivity in your words just as the way you have done all this while... :) I am glad you aren't getting affected with such people and you shouldn't and that shows how matured you are as an individual. So, keep writing and keep smiling.

Apologies for such a long comment but i felt i had to take your side and voice my feelings. Thanks a lot.

Take care.

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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing. .
That aunty scene was awesome. .
The bond is building between them thats gud. .
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yaar aunty ne chachi ki yaad dila di, gawd I mean karele ka halwa??
Seriously, and he did eat that also,
poor baby.
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Posted: 9 years ago


Thanks for pm.dear

This is beautiful and some peace for nandni. ..

She got little smile on her face. ..

Because of maniks very good behavior ...

Both are stranger to each other. ..

But destiny put them in one path...

This is story is heart touching. ...

And you are writing it in a very careful and interesting ways. .

I know this concept is very very sensitive and many ...more problems

they will face. ...

Thanks for sharing this story. ...

Looking forward to seeing more soon.

Stay blessed dear.




Thanks.




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Posted: 9 years ago
so nandini is staying with him
manik so caring

karela halwa was awesome


iam enjoying ur story
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update

Superb update


Fab update


Loved it


Loved the update



Waiting for the next part


Update the next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thks for the PM Aashna
Finally u wrote this one.
Awesome, funny tooo😆

1 WEEK srsly n she is still staying with Manik. Now that's something.
What HAHAHAA he forgot Nandu is living in his house, how can he
Kaam se aate hi kapade utaar dena, half Naked ghumna.

Bechari Nandu sharam se PANI PANI hogaye. 😳
Hehehe Manik ka reaction dekhne layak hoga.

GOSH !!!! Yeh aunties sabh esse kyun hoti hai ???? YYY
Zabardasti Khuch bhi khilana, eewww!!!!!
Woh bhi KARELE KA HALWA. SHiii

Hahaha Manik ne kitna lame excuse diya kitchen main khade hone ka. LOLLL

MANIK NE USKE LEYE KHUCH AACHA BOLA WHEN SHE WAS LAUGHING, NANDANI WAS SO TOUCHED BY HIS PRAISE.

Manan's POV WAS TOO GOOD.
KEEP IT UP

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Posted: 9 years ago
Cute story

Thanks for update

Very unique concept
Glad you put this story with two good people in mind instead of having a negative mean Manik we get this sweet version

Loved the humor in this update
Karela halwa reminded me of nandani's chachi and poor manik's expressions when she made okra pasta. Hehe remember the scene when chachi actually realizes what pasta looks like when Manik brought some over? Hilarious. Thanks for bringing that memory back

Oh they're living together how sweet :)

Thanks for update
Look forward to more

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