#3 *MY WORLD'S KING* (UPDATED PART 51) Pg 115 15/2/17

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45696k

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Posted: 9 years ago

#511

awesome update.both manik and nandini are very supportive of each other and this is the main fact that I love about this ff.pls don't give power to the vamp of the story to take on these love birds.I too don't like much of rona dhona.it's good this way all lovey dovey and hope u keep it this way only.pls do update the next part soon.it's one of my favorite ff.waiting eagerly for the next part.

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RainFlies

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Posted: 9 years ago

#512

hey finally u updated...

so beautiful update

loved it to d core

Manik n Nandini ki secret relationship is bliss but Nyo getting info abt secret grl of Manik.. but plz don't let her overpower MaNan..

this is simply fairlytale of a superstar n his fan.. d story is all abt their secret love n relationship n their struggle to keep their relation private. its so beautiful story n I always blush reading it..

I always get smile on my face while reading this

plz even we dont want any seperation or pain or melodrama in d story.

the story is going awesome n plz keep it that way only

lovely update

Edited by KYYian - 9 years ago

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Tanha Urmi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#513

Wow...wow... It was awsm yr...!

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Tanha Urmi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#514

Wow wow...it was awsm update...!

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musicalstars

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Posted: 9 years ago

#515

awesome update...loved it...

so nyonika is getting more suspicious day by day about manan...but loved when coz of manik's arrogant brat image dint let nyonika get on conclusions n stopped her from getting till nandini...

but i dint like the fact that nandini is still not aware of nyonika's deeds...as he never told her about that...clearly...she just knows that he did not got love till now...n has no one to love except for her...

but what about her submission it was suppose to be in 2 days...n 1 day is already gone...n she also has exams after 2 days...so what happened with the submission...?? as she was so much excited about it...

u know sometimes i forgot what all had they told about themselves to each other...like nandu had told him about her father n her leaving her house for him...but he dint share everything about him with her...is what i guess...as i am not able to remember him telling about nyonika to her...

but its not ur fault its just that its so long since they shared those talks n then even break...so just forgot little things about the story...tthink need to read it again...at some points...😕

otherwise the chapter was awesome...always love the way he act alll possessive n protective for her...n hide his concern n fear of losing her behind his anger...n her calming him down so easily...just by her mere touch...n smile n by looking in her eyes...

so finally after exams nandu will tell abhi n ahreya about them...but cant wait to see their reaction...n just hoping that nyonika doesnt find out about nandu before her telling her secret to her friends...n then nyonika inquiring abhi about nandu...

had a question what all his happening in her college...?? like she has her submission after 1 day n then after 2 days she has exams n then after 2 days u r also saying that her exams will be over...is there only one exam...?? but its her finals so it might be having more than one exam...nahi..??

update soon...