MANAN TS : YAHIN HOON MAIN CH 5 PG 88 EPILOGUE PG 98

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prathyushaeluri

@prathyushaeluri

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Posted: 9 years ago

#761

loved it

its superb

5 children

ohh god

manik na he is such an idiot

and again nandu is pregnant

but it was superb

loved it a lot

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manan FF linked by destiny

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harshadamhadgut

@harshadamhadgut

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Posted: 9 years ago

#762

Read the chap and epilogue!! Manh the chap was Sooo emotional..! Nanndini's hallucination was..God I cried so much! Later when manik comes and tells his story..!that was emotional too..sad one.!but loved the part when he actually came to her and she was denying him coz she thought she's hallucinating again...,and later their reunion was awesome!!

Coming to epilogue..I guess this is the most adorable epilogue I have ever read! Manan shit he's so cuteee!! They way he narrates the story is amazing! Papa and his...shhh...hehahaha!! Mumma gets pregnant alternate years! Hahaha lol..!!

U really did compensate for all the tears!coz this was super funny.! Manan. Has 5 children! Ohh god! :O manik is too much! :P

But all are cuteee..! Such an amazing story yaar! Take a bow..!! It was fantastic!!!!! :))

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twenkling

@twenkling

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Posted: 9 years ago

#763

beautiful epilogue. ...
manan is 14 years old...
he describes about his parents love ...
manik nd nandini has 5 sons and now again child. ..
ha ha ha ha ha. ...
stay blessed nd take care

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sreesri

@sreesri

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Posted: 9 years ago

#764

Amazing story yaar...5 children 4 manan hehe...

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RUBI

@bluelake99

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Posted: 9 years ago

#765

nyc story ..

epilogue ws funny ..

bt emotional too ..

ending last two paragraph ws apt one ..

nycly written ..

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navla

@navla

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Posted: 9 years ago

#766

superab update...
epilogue was too funny...
After cryg so much u made us laugh like manically ...
Nandini dream abt manik n this time manik tld her to b strong for manan...
manan understood tht manik is no more...
n took responsibilty n did all his wrk...
manik is back ...n navya shocked n hapy o c him...
manik is desperate to meet nandini n manan...
nandini didnt believe tht manik is really infront of her..she thaught the still she is dreaming...
nandini shocked n happy seeing manik ...both r cryg in happiness...
manan n manik bonding is too gud,,,
manik is too fast yaar..5 children...hahahah...naughty manan...
loved d story ...d best epilogue i read so far...
keep smiling ...lots of love...

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ky2manan

@ky2manan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#767

Loved the epilogue
Damn funny
5 kids and 6th is on the way
Manan is so cute
Bechare bachche ko har bar goa jana padta hai ...haha
Amazing way to compensate for all the tears
This story was the best emotional story I have read till date
Beautiful
Loved the last line when manik says Yahin hoon main kahin naa gaya tujhe chhod ke main

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Prashi26

@Prashi26

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Posted: 9 years ago

#768

Oh the chapter was damn emotional!
Every time I read the chapters I would just cry!
They are true but very sad!
I really loved reading the chapter!
The times of nandani's hallucnation were very sad!
Her dialogues were really awesome!
You described the character superbly!
Coming to the epilogue it was hilarious!
Oh it was so funny!
Gosh five children and sixth on the way!
Loved reading it after an emotional chapter!
The way Manan described it and younger version of Cabir Dhruv and Harshad were funny!
Every time when Manik said Yahin Hoon Main it was awesome!
I really enjoyed reading the whole chapter and epilogue!
It was a cluster of emotions!
Thanks for the amazing update and pm too!
Keep writing!