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Pravallika69

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Posted: 9 years ago

#171

Wow such lamba chapters too good
Awesome chapters
Nandu is being so harsh on herself n evryone
Wow Cabir the master planer superb he is
Manik can't c him in pain emotional hogayi seeing manik
Both the songs were jus wow heart touching
Manan attires are wow made for each other
Awww flashback was too cute bandariya awww
Finally nandu drunk n opening up finally can't wait to kw the truth
Kash she tel manik the truth

Waiting for next part
Thanks for PM
Lots of love
Pravallika aka PraNi

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archu_asok

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Posted: 9 years ago

#172

Awesome update. Wow cabir, aliya,Manik, muthi were all set to make nandini confess.cabir's plan was mindblowing. Nandini's POV was emotional it clearly shows how deeply she was hurt.nandini also wants mukti to hate her.the pictures in this update were amazing. manan's attire was fab.yuvraj and manik's part was fabulous. Wow nandini is druken now.hope she confess wat she was hiding.the way u penned thz update was commendable especially manan's POV. Eagerly waiting for next update. Thanks for pm.

Keep writing.

Stay blessed😊

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Chocolava14

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Posted: 9 years ago

#173

First of all toh thanku fr such a biiggg wala updateee😉😊

I lykd d sing...abhi abhii,...awwiieee😳

Mission nandu daru was on in full swingg...ahaaa😉

I lykd wat manik did wid yuvraaj...hehee😉

I so wanna knw if nandu wud say the truth!!

Always keep writing😊

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Heema Somani

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Posted: 9 years ago

#174

Superb update

finally manik got to know

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sri_valli

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Posted: 9 years ago

#175

thanks for giving us such a long updatr yaar...nandini is hiding something very serious...what happened in the party which is went some days back??

manik is in so much pain...he is not able to stand to nandinis hatered... and the promo part where nandini said i live you was a dream...u cheater...

waiting for the truth revealition from drunken nandu...plz updare soon

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manan4

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Posted: 9 years ago

#176

Hey !
I m nt new to this forum but i read ur
Story today

And

I read it in one go only

But i must appreciate the way u have written
Each n Evry part
U knw while reading curiosity level keeps on
Increasing
Yar so much suspense wow!
Loved it hats of to u
U are such a good writer
But after reading all the parts in one go the
Suspense is killing
Wat can be the truth
I hope u update soon ..

Cos i m eagerly waitng...

Read many storied liked also
But this 1 is suprb yar
World are less to describe

nandu being strong but helpless
Awww
Poor manik
But still the pure love
They love each other like crazy

Our own
Manan

Update soon dr plzzz
Cant wait more

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vani

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Posted: 9 years ago

#177

Thanks for long update .. Loved the update .. Mall scenes were emotional .. Wonder why Nandini is doing all this.. Drunk Nandini mission accomplished.. Let's see where this leads to.. Thank for pm..