Manan SS: HAPPILY MARRIED( CHAP 3: page 5UPDATED) - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
Awesome
The pics were nice
And your writing is too good
I like it
Excited for next part hehehe
That must be wedding night wow i love boldness i really do
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
Awesome update
Continue soon n pls pm me😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
Awesome update...
Just luved it...
Plz continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Please continue soon this is too shot eagerly waiting for manan romance pretty please😊😛😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Awesome concept dear
Will be eagerly waiting for your next update
Can u pls pm when you update next
Take care and stay blessed

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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Nice concept.. liked it. Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
ur story is very much interesting yaarrr...
but ittu sa chap kyun..
nxt chap thoda bara dena ookkk...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update nice story..

continue soon ... 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 3
Dhruv tried to open his room's door but found it locked from inside, so he knocked softly. The door opened immediately and alia peeped out like a thief. Finding dhruv there she opened the a little wide to let him in while she hid behind the door.As soon as dhruv got in she locked the door. Dhruv entered and without looking at her asked " what is the matter? Why r u behaving like this?" getting no reply he turned and his jaw dropped watching alia skimply dressed in a body hugging extremely short one-piece dress, she smiled like a kid and moved around showing him her dress and asked " how m i looking baby?" dhruv was just ogling at her but then he controlled himself and said " u r looking like hot chocolate, i want to have it all" alia blushed understanding his meaning and said while pushing him on the bed" then what r u waiting for?" dhruv almost lost his control but he managed to utter" mom said to sleep early as we have reception tomorrow and...i was wondering if u would...like...to ...have ur...beauty sleep ...as tomorrow u have to look the best ...u know.." alia who had unbuttoned his sherwani till then, came out of her trance thought that dhruv was right , she moved back and wished him good night and slept on one side of the bed. Dhruv was disappointed , he had hoped that she would prove him wrong but then he changed his cloth and slept hugging her from back.
Cabir entered his room brooding over manik's word that navya might change after marriage and she would boss around cabir, cabir thought he could not let this happen , so he will control navya from today itself. Determined , he looked around the room and found navya getting rid of her jewellery near the dresser. Cabir said in a bossy tone" why are u still up?, didn't u hear mom said to sleep early!!" Navya was surprised at his tone but she also knew that how great a prankster he is!! So she ignored his tone and said putting her hand around his neck " i was waiting for u darling, i m going to change in the washroom, u also change , then we can sleep peacefully" she pecked on his lips and entered the washroom smiling. Cabir melted down and thought he is overworrying , navya and he have been together for 4 years now and he loves her and she loves him too, she can never change. With these thoughts he changed and waited for navya , she came out wearing a red night gown. She was looking so gorgeous that he almost changed his plan of sleepning but he controlled himself thinking many such nights are going to follow and he should let her rest. Cabir noticed that navya had not taken off her bangles , he asked her" why don't u put them off ,they must be making you uncomfortable" navya smiled at her husbands care but she said" mom has asked me to not take them off till 1 month of our marriage, its somekind of ritual and i don't want to disobey her. Moreover they are looking good on me, aren't they?" he smiled and took her in his embrace thinking how much she cared for his mamma. And then they slept .
Abhi entered his room and found mukti already changed into her trademark pajamas and sleeveless vest, with her long hair opened with vermillion in her hair parting and the churas in her hand. She was looking a perfect blend of modern and traditional, she was looking breath taking. He just stood near the bed all dazed. She came towards him and said " u know na i can't handle heavy clothes please don't be gussa" she said it cutely and he kissed her pout and said " i m not angry , i was just admiring ur beauty, its very difficult to control my self around u but i guess we have to sleep" she blushed on his complement and said" don't worry sweetheart i will compensate for this,trust me" she said it in a seductive tone and then continued" you need to change first, shall i help u?" he was enjoying it and said " i would definitely need ur help" with this he unbuttoned his sherwani in front of her and took off his vest too. She blushed looking at his physique and passed him his night vest. Then his hands went on the dori of his pajama and watching him doing that she immediately turned around blushing hard and shouted" abhi!!!" he laughed his heart out and said in between" wat mukti i thought u r a tomboy , u wont be uncomfortable, but here u r behaving like a girl!!" he held her and turned her around , she closed her eyes tightly thinking he has not changed. He said" open ur eyes sweety look i m all dressed" she opened her eyes and examined him , thankfully for her he had changed. Mukti said" u should remember i m girl only, so obviously i ll behave like a gal" and he laughed and she punched and then they ended up on bed sleeping in each other's embrace.
MANAN ROOM
Manik unlatched the door and entered and then carefully locked it. He turned around and found the room dimly lighted with the smell of rose, lilies and his favourite scent-her perfume. He saw candles lighted around the edges of the room and there she was sitting in the middle of the bed with veil covering half of her face. She had changed into a red lehenga and the bed cover was also red with white lilies scattered all over the bed. He felt, like a fairy or even better goddess of beauty hd descended on earth just for him. Red was his favourite colour and he understood that all the arrangements in the room had been done by her just for him. He slowly moved towards her and sat in her front . he could see her red pouty lips quivering in nervousness. He put his palm on hers and squeezed it assuring her to relax. Then he removed her veil and her beautiful, childlike face came into his view and he was drinking her beauty . she did not look up so he put his finger under her chin and lifted her face, and said " NANDINI look at me jaan" she looked at him and their eyes met. Manik said" u should have changed jaan , u must be tired, u need to rest" nandini replied" i m not tired manic, this night will not come again manic and i wanted to make it special for us ,so that it becomes memorable" manik said " so r u suggesting that u don't want to sleep tonight?" nandini nodded her head and said " whatever ur naughty brain is thinking manik..i m waiting for it"...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
nice interesting
3 parts read in one go
superb storyline
thanks for pm
continue soon

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