Aiyoo Ayyappa- FF- Thread 4- Chapter 63-on pg 140-4th Feb 2016

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Aamikrish

@Aamikrish

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#741

Awesome update.

Finally Manik shared about his past, and his problems with nandini.

I loved der indirect kiss, and indirect proposal of Manik to nandini dat he want her to his girlfriend.

Last dialogue, I loved it, means her lips will b his dat too forever.

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archu_asok

@archu_asok

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#742

Awesome update. The way u penned thz update was commendable. Hats off. Love this update to core. Manan's convos and moments were beautifully penned. Manik's teasing session was mindblowing. Nandini's state was well penned. Manan's POV was well written and it was amazing. Finally manik shared his past with nandini. manik's past was well penned. Nandini's words of that's why I want to be friend with u was blissful. Manik's teasing session of boyfriend was phenomenal.totally an epic update. Eagerly waiting for next update. Continue soon.thanks for pm.

Keep writing.

Stay blessed😊

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avneetmalhotra

@avneetmalhotra

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#743

Wow manik pst n indirect kiss is amezing bhut maza aaya bt its short

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shoana

@shoana

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#744

woww...that was really awesome
nandini ne phir se manik ko hurt kiya😔though unintentionally
but loved the way manik was still sharing his pain with her😊
manik is ready to become her boyfriend...😉😆
ye friend wali baaat purani hogayi😆

manik is too adamant to kiss her😆
but nandini murthy is also smart😎...gave indirect handkerchief kiss😉
manik to ab har time wahi kerchief use karega😆
last line by manik literally gave me goosebumps...😉
manik is ready make her his...itni jaldi😳

loved the update
continue soon dear

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AsthaVerma92

@AsthaVerma92

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#745

Ohhh god an indirect kiss wid an indirect proposal...

Manan r so adorable...
I feel so bad manik pain and his lyfs truth to nandu...

Plzzz update new part soon

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Tishyy

@Tishyy

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#746

Fab update gal..
Yahan to Nandu ne hi baazi maar li lol
Love the way Manik troubles her
Looking forward to more teasing and Posessive Manik is the best hehe
Good job done gal
Kudos to u

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@ps_angel

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#747

O freak

Manik bnaa majnu

Phle itna senti ho k sbb btaa diyaaa

Or end ka dialogue

lolzzz

Mazaa aa gyaaa

Cntnue soon

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Vandyandy

@Vandyandy

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#748

Hi Priya

Awesome , lovely update.

Manik is so firm on his kiss.

Bechari Nandu kese kiss karege.😉

Awww !!!! Nandu ne phirse Manik ko nazar kar diya.

She should not take it in a wrong way.

Manijk likes her and wants to take this relation further.

He cares so much for her, she knows that , but phir bhi she is in a jiffy what to do.

Manik opened up to her about his life , which she wanted .

He without any hesitation kept on telling her about his family.

She knows that he is tuff from outside but very much soft from inside, and hurt too.

She wants to heal them by being friends first.

Haye Manik kitna naughty hai, nandani ko shy aur blush karva ke hi chodta hai.

Abh woh Jabh chaye use kiss kar sakta hai

Phas Gaye Nandu.

Good one Priya

Looking for the nx one.

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lovePANI

@lovePANI

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#749

Damn it was intense didu
bhale uuuiisshh wali kiss na hua ho..

i thought atleast cheek par will get
kiss bhari smart nikli nandu
handkerchief par..
n moreover manik kissed on that 😃

Uff manik mood swing
first hulk
second Romeo

friends..lets be friend first
aaaiik she didn't accepted him as a friendship what she was doing with him..she is confuse girl
khud toh confuse mai n also making us confuse hihi

manik past :( :( :(

aaaik his last line was awesome 😎
n after that nandu expression ufff 😃 ahahahaah..
i loved it loved it

keep smiling n take care

Edited by lovePANI - 9 years ago