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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: gtilwani45

wow..


nandu ko to aise stunning dress me dekhkr.

manik to gyaa kaam se...

pura ka pura..

poor kitni mushkil se control.

he was waiting for write.

vo impulsive hokr react nhi krna chahta..

that's so sweet of him naa.

I just love it..
Itsss soo awesome ..
So amazing. .just love to the core. ..

Soo .fantastic. ...

Keep updating. ..

U r such a beautiful writer...
Update soon..
Waiting for next update eagerly ..
Thanks for this update
.




Happy New year




with lotss of luv.


Stay blessed

Love Geet



Awww thank you so much dear 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anumanan



And your lamba lamba comments always make me smile like an idiot...thank you tho tu sunna nahi chahthi lekin am sry phir bi main kehna chahungi kyunki agar thank you nahi bolungi tho phir rath ko so bi nahi paongi sooo... thank you so much jaana your comment really means alot to me... ab main bagri byyy...



haan haan...bhag le...
wo hi better hoga tere liye abhi...
Bhaaag Mishteee Bhaaag 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nirvisha

Beautiful update dear.. .
Yr story is jst owsm.. .
U know i hv read it 4 times.. ..
Nd now also i m reading it 5th time.. .
I jst love to read yr story.. ..
Thank you for this.. .. 😊



I seriously wanna know how you are still able to read the updates...sachi itni baar padne ke baad no one would be interested in reading it...so a very big thank you for loving it and thank you tumhe nahi balki mujhe kehna chahiye for loving my work...once again thank u wo bi bada vala dil se...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: manandeeplove



haan haan...bhag le...
wo hi better hoga tere liye abhi...
Bhaaag Mishteee Bhaaag 🤣



Lolll I so knew it and yes main bhagri jaan main bhagri 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lovlytuli

<font size="2">awesome update...</font>

<font size="2">loved it so much...</font>
<font size="2">manik's acts r so cute...n also naughty...</font>
<font size="2">u r the best in writing manan's cute n romantic moments...</font>
<font size="2">tysm fr the pm...continue soon with next part...</font>



Thank u so much dear 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: MahimaSankhla

Happy New Year to u too.. After a long time.. Felt so good after reading ur update.. Kp writing..

U always mk Manan romance look so b'ful n pure..



Am really happy to know that thank you so much...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rimsha01

This always happens dat whenever i write a bada wala comment na my network acts weird nd i loose d reply nd den i hv to write everything agn. Its so irritating.

So yeah about the update i had to comment anyhow even if network is a problem cause after a long time dat i felt i am reading purana wala love is my life. Purana wala se i mean the one before the leap. Cause leap k baad sometimes i feel d story gets too much melodramatic!!
But still this is my fav ff cause :
The manan romance u write is always a treat to read. I love it when manik gets naughty.
I love the fab 4 nd nandini bond.
I totally adore kabir dhruv nd nandini's bond
But i sometimes miss abhi nd nandini's friendship nd manik's jealousy whenever he would call her jaan
But his jealousy on seeing aryamann somewhere fills for it.




Same thing happens with me dear and I know how irritating it is...am damn happy to know that and thanks alot for letting me know that and an another thank you for reading it even though feeling it as melodramatic...manan romance would surely make u happy and I promise I will try maximum not to bore you in doing so...jeoulous manik ko tum of course dekogi kyuki abi meri story baki hain...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Anu pls update soon..
Really missing ur stry...n manan nt to forget😭
D wait is killing nw...
Pls pls try n update at ur earliest convenience...
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Posted: 9 years ago


PART 188 :


Manik breaks the hug and acha chelo main bahar jatha hoon tum jaldi se ye dresses try karlo

NANDINI : hmmm

MANIK : aur haan jaldi karna I have a surprise for you

NANDINI : surprise???

MANIK : hmmm

NANDINI : tho tell me na what is it

MANIK : naaa kaha na surprise hain nahi batha saktha

NANDINI : par manik

MANIK : chup am going come down fast

NANDINI : okkk

MANIK : aise faces math banao haa tumhare liye hi hain surprise tho just wait for a while

NANDINI : hmmm

Manik nods his head smiling seeing her antics and walks out silently

knock knock knock

NANDINI : kon hain

Knock knock knock

NANDINI : batao tho sahi koun hain

Knock knock knock

NANDINI : manikkk

Knock knock knock

NANDINI : listen abi tho tum bahar gaye the na

Knock knock knock

NANDINI : manik stop knocking the door

Knock knock knock

Nandu sighs and quickly changing into normal dress walks towards irritatedly and opening the door "hua kya hain tum" and stops looking the person standing infront of her eyes and then having tears in her eyes rishu...!!!!!!

rishab smiles and quickly wiping away her tears "behna you na I hate tears then why these tears haa"

she smiles nodding her head while he continuous cupping her cheek looking her lovingly "I missed you"

She clings to him the very next second and "missed you too so much..."

Manik who was standing silently watching the brother sister duo smiles hugely but sudden ringing of his cell breaks their trance and he quickly cutting the call "sryyy"

RISHAB : its absolutely ok jeeju

NANDINI : ohhh so you people already met

manik side hugging rishab "haan kyu any problem"

NANDINI : nahi... so this was the surprise hmmm...

MANIK : yesss

Manik cell again starts ringing but he without even seeing the caller id simply cuts it and "soo kaisa laga surprise"

Nandu smiles ever so hugely and bohuth acha...par rishu thu aaya kab aur mujhe bathaya kyu aur tum dono mile kab the jo

MANIK : ruko ruko saas tho lelo ek sath itne sare sawal

Rishab smiles and wo main aaj hi aaya aur tujhe surprise dena chahtha tho isliye kuch nahi bathaya

NANDINI : ohhh par tum manik se kab mile aur

MANIK : shh kya kab kyu kaise ufff kitne sawal yar... chodo sab... itne dino ke baad milri hoo tho ache se baito bath karo... kya tum bi

NANDINI : hmm chelo neche baitke bath karthe hain

MANIK : good chelo

HALL :

RISHAB : kya hua jeeju is everything alright aap ka phone baar baar bajra hain aur

MANIK : hmm yaa everything is gud nothing to worry

NANDINI : tho manik tum call kyu nahi utare ho

MANIK : arey important nahi hain chodo na

NANDINI : par maa and stops seeing FAB 4 entering and arey wah sab ek sath

KABIR : hmm woo and stops seeing rishab

RISHAB : hiii

Everyone smiles slightly and hiii

Manik phone again rings

"Goor kya raha hain call utana" and abhi enters along with navya

Manik quickly keeps the cell in silent and tu mujhse itna pyar kyu kartha hain matlab athe athe hi mere peche shuru haa

ABHI : cheee yukkk main aisa vaisa nahi hoon aur meri vali tho yahi par hain and side hugging mukthi see

Everyone laughs loud while navya interrupts in between arey rishab tum kab aye aur hame bathaya kyu nahi

Abhi quickly jumps and hugging rishu "haan yar aur bata kaisa hain"

NANDINI : mujhe khud nahi bathaya tho tum logon ko kya bathayega

Rishab breaks the hugs and main teek hoon and nandu maine kaha na surprise tha tho phir kaise batha tha

NANDINI : acha tho ek bath batha manik ko kaise patha surprise ke bare main

KABIR : are you serious

DHRUV : buddy ko kaise patha

MANIK : yar tum phirse shuru hogayi

NANDINI : haan jab thak mujhe patha nahi cheltha

MANIK : koyi tumhe kuch nahi bathane vala hain tho please stop asking it again and again

RISHAB : exactly

NANDINI : haww rishu thu bi

MANIK : haan wo bi kyuki wo mere team hain

RISHAB : yeaaa

Manik and rishab hi five each other while nandu pouts cutely watching them

ALIA : ye kab hua

MUKTHI : haan I mean as far as we know you people tho haven't even met before right

DHRUV : so itni understanding and ek team main hone ki bath

KABIR : kuch samaj nahi aayi hame

MANIK : tum log jaan ke bi kya karloge hmmm so chill

MOHAN : kya bathe hori bi yaha

NANDINI : papaaa

Jee meri gudiya and quickly kisses her hairs

NANDINI : ab kaisa lagra hain

MOHAN : pehle se kaafi better

NANDINI : hmmm

MOHAN : rishab beta kaisa hain tu

KABIR : philal ke liye teek hain par jaldi hi sab ko ye sawal ka jawab dethe dethe zarur pagal ho jayega

MOHAN : kuch bi haan pagal

KABIR : arey sach keh raha hoon

MOHAN : chod manik wo soha ka call aya tha

MANIK : hmmm

MOHAN : wo kehri thi ki tu uska call nahi utara tha aur usse kuch zaruri bath karni hain tujhse

MANIK : main bath kar lunga usse

KABIR : sab teek tho hain na

MUKTHI : tu uska call kyu nahi utara tha

ALIA : aur usne ham main se kisi ko call kyu nahi kiya

DHRUV : kuch dino se wo yaha reh ri bi nahi

ABHI : tu tho kehra tha ki wo uske cousin ke ya hain

NAVYA : tho wo tumhe

MANIK : guys enough... itne sawal kyu... mera phone silent pe tha isliye utaya nahi bas...choti si bath hain aur patha nahi aap log huh

KABIR : itna hyper kyu hora

MANIK : aur nahi tho kya thak gaya hoon tum logon ke sawalon se yar

NANDINI : time up guys bas ab haa

Manik looks nandu while she blinks her eyes smiling cutely asking him to smile back through her eyes

He sighs and "main abi aya"

ABHI : gussa hamesha nak par kyu rehtha hain iska

NANDINI : arey tum log itne sare sawal ek sath karre the tho

ALIA : haan haan tum tho uske tharaf hi bologe na

NANDINI : guys aisa nahi hain

KABIR : shona wo normally aise chidtha nahi hain kya hua sab teek hain na

NANDINI : haan kabir wo sube se kaam bohuth tha na tho stressed hain bas

NAVYA : ye tho sahi hain kaam tho vakayi main kaafi tha

DHRUV : lo ye log ko shopping karna bi bada kaam hain

ALIA : haan tho do you even know how much difficult job is that

NANDINI : guys please don't start it again

KABIR : yar neendh badi masth ari

MOHAN : dinner hi gaya na sab ka

DHRUV : haan nahi tho zinda nahi rehthe the ab thak

NANDINI : dhruv

DHRUV : sryyy

NANDINI : tired lagre ho kuch loge kya

MUKTHI : teri hath ki bani coffee

ABHI : mujhe bi

KABIR : chup nahi shona kuch nahi chahiye its ok

NANDINI : nahi kabir mujhe do minute do main abi athi hoon

NAVYA : hmm thab thak ham rishab se bathe karthe hain

NANDINI : done and leaves

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MANIK : soha main call nahi utara hoon tho iska matlab main busy hoon

SOHA : par manik

MANIK : kitni baar kitni baar bolu haan tumhe

SOHA : manik please

MANIK : tum samaj kyu nahi rahi ho soha main tumse nahi mil saktha aur na hi main milna chahtha hoon

SOHA : manik please ek baar ek baar mujhse milo please

MANIK : soha tum

SOHA : please manik bas ek baar

MANIK : teek hain

SOHA : thank you thank you so much

Manik cuts the call and closes his eyes tightly

NANDINI : kya hua

Manik turns back and ku..kuch nahi

NANDINI : kisi se bath karre the

MANIK : aamm woo aise hi tum yaha

NANDINI : coffee banane aayi

MANIK : ohhh main pani peene aya tha

NANDINI : hooo

MANIK : wo nandini actually mujhe kuch kaam hain tho isliye mujhe bahar jana hoga

NANDINI : hmmm teek hain

MANIK : hmmm

NANDINI : der tho nahi hogi na

MANIK : hmm nahi jaldi hi aonga par tumhe agar neendh aye tho so jana

Nandu nods smiling slightly while manik walks out saying nothing

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MANIK : guys mujhe thoda kaam hain tho main bahar jara hoon

KABIR : kaam

ABHI : iss vakth

MANIK : haan

MUKTHI : aur wo kaam kya hain

MANIK : agar nahi batao tho

MOHAN : kya hogaya tujhe tu har sawal ka jawab ulta kyu de ra hain

MANIK : bacha nahi hoon dad aise interrogation karoge tho irritation hogi

NAVYA : tumhe interrogation kon karra hain

ALIA : ham tho bas ye puchre hain ki itni rath ko kya kaam hain

RISHAB : guys guys guys relax please

MANIK : acha rishab thu yaha ruk jaa na aaj rath ke liye

MOHAN : haan main raj se bath karlunga

RISHAB : nahi uncle its ok phir suba prb hogi gar main bi kaam honge tho

MANIK : hmm chel teek hain am sry mujhe der hori hain tho

RISHAB : common jeeju itne formal math baniye jayiye

Manik hugs him and byyy

RISHAB : byyy

Manik looks everyone quickly and walks out...

NANDINI : here is your coffee guys

KABIR : thank you

NANDINI : kya hua aise kyu muh phulake baite ho

MUKTHI : tere manik ki vajah se

ALIA : ek sawal pucha tha

NAVYA : jawab diye bina ham pe baras gaya

NANDINI : hmmm sryy uske tharaf se

DHRUV : tu kyu sry bolri hain

KABIR : forget it na guys bichare ki sagayi hain kal isliye pareshan hain shayad

RISHAB : acha guys I need to leave now

NANDINI : itni jaldi hamne teek se bath bi nahi ki

RISHAB : main kaha jaonga aur vaise bi ham kal phir milege na tho thab kaafi sare bathe karenge hmm

NANDINI : hmmm

RISHAB : chelo byee then byee guys

Byyy every one utters in unison

rishab hugs nandu and gud night

She hugs him back and gudd night

MOHAN : chelo ab tum sab bi so jao kal ka din bohuth bada hone vala hain

KABIR : hmmm chelo

Every one bids bye to nandini and leave to their respective rooms

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MALHOTRA MANSION

10 AM :

KABIR : kya karre ho yar tum log

DHRUV : kuch kaam teek se hotha bi ya nahi tum logon se

KABIR : wo flowers left pe nahi right pe hone chahiye

DHRUV : aur wo flowers free main utake laye ho kya halath dekho uske

MOHAN : kabir dhruv wo sab chodo aur yaha aao bohuth important bath karni hain

KABIR : haan boliye na

MOHAN : wo jo maine tum logon se kaha

DHRUV : don't worry ho gaya

KABIR : hamne bohuth si jagah par secret cameras laga diye

MOHAN : hmmm chelo teek hain

ABHI : guys main market jara hoon kuch cheze leni hain agar tum log kuch bhul gaye ho tho abi batha do

DHRUV : nahi yar abi ke liye kuch nahi

KABIR : agar kuch hain tho ham call karenge

ABHI : chel teek hain byy

KABIR : byy

DHRUV : abey ham yahi par hain teek se kar

"Jee sir sryy..!!!"

ALIA : decorations aaj katham honge bi ya nahi

MUKTHI : seriously ye log itne aram se sab karenge tho kaise hoga

NAVYA : ohhh bayya sagayi aaj hi hain do teen din ke baad nahi isliye zara jaldi hath chelayiye

KABIR : ham log bi vahi kehre hain

DHRUV : pari kaha par hain

KABIR : tum logon ko uske sath hona chahiye na

NANDINI : guys

MOHAN : agayi meri gudiya

NANDINI : hmmm

KABIR : kya hua shona tu pareshan lagri hain

NANDINI : amm wooo

DHRUV : bol na

MOHAN : sab teek hain na beta

NANDINI : papa woo manik

MUKTHI : manik???

NANDINI : cell nahi lagra uska

KABIR : offo shona jaan leli tu ne busy hoga na kisi kaam main tu ne hi tho kaha tha na kuch der pehle ki wo bohuth zaruri kaam se sube sube bahar chela gaya

Nandu looks down and nahi...maine jhut kaha tha...

DHRUV : matlab

NANDINI : wo kal se gar nahi aya

What???? and everyone shouts on top of their voice

Mohan quickly calls manik and beta tu thab se chup kyu thi bolna tha na

NANDINI : mujhe laga wo vapas ajayega

MOHAN : uska cell switch off ara hain

NANDINI : haan isiliye dar lagra hain

NAVYA : teri bath huyi kya usse kal

NANDINI : nahi jab se wo gaya hain thab se bath nahi huyi meri

KABIR : shona hadh karthi hain tu bi pehle bathana chahiye tha na hame

NANDINI : am sryyy

MUKTHI : par wo aise ja kaha saktha hain

ALIA : ye janthe hue bi ki aaj uski sagayi hain

NAVYA : kabir dhruv tum log dekho manik kaha ho saktha hain aur ham yaha sari cheze sambal lenge

MOHAN : main raj se bath kartha hoon

MUKTHI : guys ek baar abhi se bi bath karlo shayad kuch jantha ho

DHRUV : haan ham bath karlenge

KABIR : shona thu stress math le hmmm ham jaldi hi manik ko lekar ayenge

MOHAN : beta iska kayal rakna ham dekthe hain kya kar sakthe hain

NAVYA : aap tension math lijiye ham nandu ka ache se kayal rakenge

DHRUV : chelo kabir hame der nahi karni chahiye

KABIR : haan chel

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RESHMA : patha nahi kya hoga bohuth dar lagra hain do gante hogaye hain lekin ab thak manik ka kuch patha nahi chela hain

ALIA : aunty please agar aap hi aise kahenge tho kaise ho

RESHMA : kya karu beta kuch samaj nahi ara hain

MUKTHI : aunty nandu

NAVYA : kya hua laga kya call

NANDINI : nahi abi bi switched off hain

ALIA : baby don't worry sab teek hoga

NANDINI : I just want him to be safe alia thats it

NAVYA : kabir ka call

MUKTHI : speaker pe daal

NAVYA : helloo

KABIR : shona kaisi hain

NAVYA : teek hain...manik???

KABIR : nahi kuch patha nahi chela

NAVYA : teek hain aap yaha ki tension math lo

KABIR : kuch kabar milthe hi main call karunga byyy

NAVYA : byy

RAJ : kuch patha chela kya abhi

ABHI : nahi uncle kuch nahi patha chela

RAJ : acha teek hain main aur mohan manik ki location trace karne ki koshish karre hain dekthe hain kya ho tha hain

ABHI : teek hain uncle

MUKTHI : manikk yar kaha hain tu

NANDINI : guys guys guys call laga

NAVYA : ham kabir ko bathathe hain ruko

ALIA : haan aur main uncle ko

MUKTHI : kya hua

NANDINI : call uta nahi raha

RESHMA : thu phirse koshish kar na

NANDINI : haan

RISHAB : hellooo

KABIR : rishab sun manik ki location trace ho gayi hain main aur dhruv vahi jare hain tu tension math le

RISHAB : address kya hain

KABIR : wo kuch green hotel ke paas hain

RISHAB : teek hain main aur abhi bi vaha pahunch the hain

KABIR : acha teek hain

MUKTHI : abhi ne message kiya hain manik ki location trace ho gayi hain

NANDINI : chelo na chelthe hain

ALIA : baby wo log manik ko lekar ayenge na

NANDINI : nahi alia please mujhe usse dekh na hain

RESHMA : haan mujhe bi usse dekh na hain

NAVYA : acha teek hain chelo na chelthe hain

MOHAN : gar ko main sambal lunga aap jayiye

NANDINI : thnx kaka chelo guys

MOHAN : location tho yahi hain na

RAJ : haan par yaha

KABIR : andar chelke dekthe hai na

DHRUV : shayad kuch patha chel jaye

ABHI : yar ye media yaha kya karri hain kitni beed hain yaha

RISHAB : side se chelthe hain na

MOHAN : haan chelo

KABIR : baya chel kya raha yaha par

"arey kabar mili hain koyi bade kandan ka beta andar hain kisi ladki ke sath tho bas kabar ikatta karne agaye sab par hotel vale andar ane nahi dere tho ye sab thamasha"

ABHI : chel yar time nahi hain hamare paas ye sab bakwas ke liye

RAJ : suniye kya yaha manik malhotra ke naam se koyi room booked hain

"Jee ek minute"

ABHI : jaan

DHRUV : pari tum log yaha

MUKTHI : manik se milna chahthi thi

KABIR : shona ham gar ane vale the na

ALIA : chodo wo sab manik kaha par hain

"sry sir ham aapko kuch nahi batha sakthe"

RAJ : kyaa

RISHAB : kyaa matlab hain apka

"Sir ham iss booking ke details kisiko bi nahi de sakthe hain"

DHRUV : kyu

"ham apko kuch nahi batha sakthe sir sry"

ABHI : chup chap bol varna noukri jayegi teri

"Sir...ye private hain..matlab"

"kya manik malhotra ke naam se yaha per room booked hain aur agar hain tho room number kya hain" and kabir shouts making everyone shocked

Jee...jee...sir hain room no 306

glaring him angrily kabir walks inside while everyone follows him silently

ABHI : locked hain shayad

DHRUV : main spare keys latha hoon

ALIA : ek baar knock karthe hain na

Navya knocks but gets no response

Everyone stands worried while soon dhruv returns back with a spare key...

Kabir opens the door and rushes inside only to stop after taking few steps not being able to move while everyone too after rushing inside gets motionless getting hell shocked...

Nandu entering the room a little late looks everyone surprisingly and then taking a few more steps ahead gets frozed at her place seeing the view infront her...

"Manik was lying half naked on bed hugging soha who was lying under duvet keeping her head on his chest...!!!!"

everyone look nandini without blinking their eyes while she too stands looking the view in front of her without blinking her eyes...



chappal,tamatar,onions jo man main aye wo pek sakthe ho all are welcome I won't mind sachi...ek bath kehna chahthi hoon please don't jump into assumptions pretty please...main yahi par hoon aur bohuth hi jald sabko puri bath patha chel bi jayegi...so yes till then just trust me...ab nandu ka reaction kya hoga...family ka reaction kya hoga...sagayi hogi ya nahi hogi...ye sab jane ke liye stay tuned to my story...i know bohuth hi irregular hogayi hoon and am extremely sry for that...being hell busy but yes wanna promise that next update will be very soon i know you want to kill me now so am leaving tata tc byy byy...

Edited by anumanan - 9 years ago
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Omg.. Yeh kya ho gya... Plz some OK ker dena...
I'm sure .major catch hoga... Just hope koi major prob na ho n sab jaldi hi theek hi jae

The update was awesome... Like seriously Etna mystery.. Tention.. Suspense.. Loved it sachi ... Chahe jitna bhi I don't like fighting manan or misunderstandings but this update was awesome...

Plz update soon coz can't wait for long to know the whole truth

Thanxx for the ama,ing update n the pm

Keep smiling
Stay blessed

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