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Posted: 9 years ago
wow superb update fabulous ,fantastic ,mind blowing, hot, loving ,emotional ,super sensuous n super awesome... or words nhi aarhe ...
loved d update totally...
first emotional n funny part was superb ... cabir n Abhi bichare .. no kaam no breakfast...
then emotional part of rishab n manik ... manik ne Kitna ache se samjaya rishab... plz koi rishab n nandini k scene bhi dikhana...

n about d last part ... That was mind blowing super fantastic... hot n sensuous part...
manan romance was superb...

update next part jaldi jaldi...
n one more thing manik koi surprise plan kr rha h? ...
abh wait nhi hota jaldi update krna...
Thanks for d pm...
stay blessed
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update loved all the parts their sizzling romance was superb mindblowing
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow amazing updates
Aww Lovedd it soo nyc
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesomeee
Eagerly waiting for Manik's surpirse
Thanks for pm
😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Such a fab update!!
Romantic..one..
Nandu is very luck to have manik ...

N hw manik cleared rishab's mind..
U really penned down every moment nyc..!!

Plzzz update soon..
Waiting eagerly..plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
OMG this update was hell amazing can't wait to see more of this .. Update asap
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Posted: 9 years ago
waiting for d update

update soon dear


nd

HAPPY NEW YEAR
Charmi98 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey dear whr r u..eagerly awaiting fr d update pls update nxt part soon. ...
Nd...

A very Happie wala new year😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey i know I am late but still 15 min are there to finish new year first day so,


"HAPPY NEW YEAR"

Your story gives me positive feelings i really like it. thanks for such a wonderful story. And All the best to u for writing more and more different and interesting stories.

Waiting for next update and PM me.


Edited by Sony.K - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
PART 187 :

manikkk...manikkk...and nandu calls him from wash room as her duppatta was outside

shayad bahar gaya hain chelo acha hi hain and she steps out of washroom happily calming her senses...

She wears her duppatta and "hello..."

ALIA : haa baby bol

NANDINI : alia ye maroon vali dress teek hain thoda tight hain par its ok

ALIA : okk

NANDINI : okk

ALIA : what ok baki ke dresses kaise hain

NANDINI : baki ke woo

ALIA : kyaa bol na

NANDINI : wo maine try nahi kiye

ALIA : what

NANDINI : haan wo

ALIA : baby tu ek dress try karne ke liye itna vakth liya

NANDINI : haan wo ma and stops biting her lip remembering her ahem ahem with manik

ALIA : babyyy hellooo

NANDINI : hmmm alia mujhe ye dress pasandh hain main

ALIA : listen baby ab ye dress side pe rako aur baki ke try karo and jaldi karna

NANDINI : alia

ALIA : and tu pics nikal bi rahi ya nahi

NANDINI : haan wo

ALIA : tho jaldi bej na... ek bi miss nahi honi chahiye teek hain... ab phone rak aur sare dresses try kar byyy

NANDINI : alia...alia...alia tch kaat diya

she takes a selfie and then keeping her cell aside looks another dress

ayyappaa ye alia bi kya kapde beji hain and getting up starts opening her dori but stopping again suddenly looks towards door

kayi manik agaya tho...nahiii and quickly locking the door again starts changing...

ayyooo iss blouse ka tho ek hi huk hain and she closes her eyes cringing her eye brows...

designer piece designer piece kehke ye choose kiya hain alia ne huhhh alia ko nahi usse kehna chahiye jisne ye lehnga banaya hain wo bi aise blouse ke sath jisse sirf ek hook hi sambal tha ho and she stands infront of mirror finally wearing her dress...

thud...and she hears a sound before she could see herself in the mirror...

manikkk and she takes his name seeing him standing at door of balcony facing his back towards her...

she runs towards him and manik ye awaz kaisi tum teek and stops seeing his eyes closed...

she sees broken flower vase on ground and holding his hand manik tumhare hath

MANIK : main teek hoon

NANDINI : manik ye vase tuta kaise matlab

MANIK : wo hath lag gaya tha

ohhh and looking him manik tumne apne ankh kyu bandh rake

he frees his hand and with out saying anything starts walking inside

she goes behind him and manik main tumse kuch puchri hoon

seeing him not replying she goes infront of him stopping him from walking and look down

he tries to move away but she blocks him and manik kya hua tum aise kyu behave karre ho

he doesn't reply and once again tries to move aside

manik am asking you something problem kya hain tum mujhe dekh kyu nahi rahe ho and she shouts a little holding his hand

thaki sagayi se pehle hamari suhag rath na ho and he grabs her arms pulling her close shouting in the same way like her...

Her anger gets vanished don't know where and she starts blushing like hell lowering her eyes slowly...

(manik was sitting in balcony listening to songs when nandu was changing...thankfully he gets up to enter inside when she completely changes but seeing her standing wearing a green lehenga exposing her body more than before his jaw gets dropped and gets frozed at his place...

Rahi bath flower vase tutne ki tho bai ladki ko gurthe gurthe kab ladka phisal kar vase ko neche peka wo tho khud ladka bi nahi jantha hain)

Realising his words he closes his eyes and then opening them again tum pagal ho thodi der pehle agar main andar atha tho and stops looking her widening eyes which were looking him lovingly

ankhe bade karke kya dekhri ho hmm and he looks her widening his own eyes

she turns her face and maine bulaya tha tumhe par tumne jawab nahi diya tho socha tum bahar chele gaye aur isliye

isliye kya haa isliye kya and he says a little louder pulling her close

She looks him while he continuous meri jagah koyi aur balcony main hotha tho kya hotha haa koyi aur agar achanak se balcony se akar tumhe and stops looking into her eyes...

har koyi tumhari tharah nahi hotha jo achanak yu hi balcony se andar aa tapke and she answers him turning her face getting little angry...

tho tum chahthi ho har koyi balcony se akar... tumhe aise dekhe...vahi ke vahi mar jaye... and he bites his tongue while she presses her lips inside controlling her smile...

not wanting to loose a chance she smirks and then ayyappaa suna apne that means some one is literally dieing looking me...nahi...

Whatever and he leaving her starts walking ahead hiding his smile

Complement dena is not a wrong thing and she running quickly stands infront of him

MANIK : hato

NANDINI : nahi

MANIK : arey

NANDINI : nahi

MANIK : nandini

NANDINI : nahi

and their bodies touched each other making them look into each others eyes instantly

He holds her waist and tucking few hair strands behind her ear kisses her forhead lovingly while she stands closing her eyes keeping her hands on his vest...

He closes his eyes and resting his forhead on hers "duppatta pehen lo varna sach main sagayi se pehle hamari suhag rath hogi and trust me na hi tum aur na hi tumhare ayyappa mujhe rok payenge...

cursing herself for always forgetting everything infront of him she wears her duppatta blushing, pushing him away while he stands looking her not blinking his eyes for once...

NANDINI : tum bahar jao na

MANIK : kyu

NANDINI : wo mujhe aur bi kuch dresses try karni hain

MANIK : hmmm chela jaonga par pehle tumhe punishment tho dene do

NANDINI : punishment???

He pulls her close suddenly and itni khubsurath dikne ki galthi ke liye punishment tho tumhe milni hi chahiye...nahi..

Knowing him very well she moves a little bit back and nahi mujhe koyi punishment nahi leni hain

Par mujhe deni hain and he presses his lips on hers not letting her speak further...

Due to lack of oxygen they pull back themselves and lie resting their forheads on each other...

manik anguti ke bare main kya socha and she asks suddenly opening her eyes

MANIK : patha nahi tumhe achanak se ho kya jatha hain

NANDINI : bolo na manik

MANIK : nahi

NANDINI : manik kal sagayi hain

MANIK : relax maine soch liye

NANDINI : kyaa

MANIK : wo tumhe kal patha chelega

NANDINI : par manik

MANIK : listen tumhe kush hona chahiye...kal hamari sagayi hain...

she smiles and haan

MANIK : sooo

NANDINI : sooo

MANIK : kuch promise nahi karvougi

NANDINI : haa??

MANIK : arey I thought you will make me promise something or the other itna bada din jo hain kal tho

NANDINI : hmmm actually socha nahi tha par ab jab tumne kaha hain thoo

MANIK : listen i was kidding

Heheh even I was kidding and she laughs like a kid

He looks her and I love your smile and hence I promise I will surely do everything and anything to see that smile on your face hamesha...

she cups his face and I know manik par tumhe meri smile dekhne ke liye kuch karne ki nahi mere sath rehni ki zarurath hain bas...

He smiles and wo tho rahunga hi hamari nayi shurath jo hone vali hain hamesha sath rehne ki

she nods her head and haan

MANIK : so all ready...for the new beginning...

NANDINI : yess

MANIK : excited haaa

NANDINI : yup very much

MANIK : acha hain mere liye bi jitna tum kush hogi utna hi hamari romance hogi

Manikkk and she hits him playfully while he pulls her into his embrace closing his eyes happily...



Happpyyy valaaa newww yearrr jeee...!!!!! I know am little late and am sry for that par adjust karlo na yar mere liye...so yesss wishing you all tons and tons and tons of happiness and only happiness...aapke sare wishes pure ho aur ye year pura aap sabke liye ek dam lucky hooo...aurrr bas yar agar kuch bul gayi tho don't worry wo bi mang lena bagwan aapko de denge...update ke bare main kuch nahi kehna hain kyuki mujhe khud nahi patha maine kya likha hain aur kyu lekin thanx zarur kehna chahthi hoon for loving me and my work aur wo bi itna ki main speechless ho jao...it really means alot to me and trust me I feel very blessed...zyada dimak nahi kana chahthi ap logon ki...so am going tata byyy...I updated do dil too new year gift hain aap sab ke liye...now just promise me that you will always smile no matter what aur mujhe promise chahiye matlab chahiye kyuki its going to be my gift...agar mera gift nahi mila thooo i will think ki u dont love me...so now common promise jaldi se...luv u...umahhh...

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