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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
Hi. First of all a big congratulations for the new thread dear. I read full story in a go. Ur such an beautiful writer. Story line is way different from other stories in forum. Waiting for Manan s realisation n confession. Plz update as soon as possible. Waitinggg...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Hola!!!
Jst saw a third thread of ur story...
So read it...
It's really nice...
Manan a falling...
Do update soon...
And lastly congratulations for third thread...
U deserve it...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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congrats 4 d new thread...
nice banner...
plz continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats fr new thread dea. ...👏👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congratulations... Well deserved..
Many more threads to come.. 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congratulations...
You deserved...
Many more to Come
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats for the new thread

Updt soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow new thread!!!
Congrats!!
U totally dessrve it
Love your story alot
Eagerly waiting for the next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congratulations for new thread 🥳
U really deserve it 👏
N banner is awsm 😊
Update next part soon...
Please pm me

Keep smiling
N Stay Blessed 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
I don't know what I have written it may be a crap but the reason is my motivation is lost so please I need everyone to comment so that I can get back with my writing and motivate myself.

CHAPTER 23

"Kiss on lips the person sitting on left to cabir" nandini read out loud with a horrified expression on her face

Everyone's face turned to look at the person who's sitting beside cabir manik smiled inwardly that she would kiss him infront of everyone but then looking at everyone's faces he turned and what he saw next was enough to boil his blood he saw Aarav was on cabir's left and he was on the right side he cursed the time when he let cabir sat in between them otherwise it would be him on his left. But one person who was enjoying his this state was cabir because it happened exactly the way he has planned.

FLASHBACK

While writing the chits cabir deliberately wrote this and then looked at the sitting arrangement from clockwise dhruv Aliya nandini mukti abhi navya manik Aarav tia and sam

"so manik now how are you gonna react with this?" cabir thought and smirkedevily

He went towards them and stood beside was going to sit beside navya but manik called him and made him sit in between him and Aarav "so you fell in my bait manik and if luck would be my side then nandini would pick up that chit only" he thought and smiled

"why are you smiling?" manik asked raising his eyebrow

"no nothing" cabir said innocently but manik found something fishy butdidn't give much thought

FLASHBACK ENDS

But one person who was equally tensed was nandini as she was thinking how to complete this she has never kissed any guy other that manik forget kissing not even let anyone come close to her the way she was with manik she cant even imagine with any other person she was brought out of her trance by mukti's loud voice

"nandini what are you thinking go ahead and complete the dare" mukti said

"what? no I can't do this" nandini denied

"nandini don't be spoil spot its not much a big thing" Aliya said

"yaa nandini its just kiss come on" cabir added

"guyzz if she doesn't want to do the dare you cant force her" manik said defending her

"manik what is your problem you keep quiet she has to do the dare" mukti said angrily

"but muk--" nandini tried to say something but was cut off

"no ifs and but otherwise you have to bear the consequences it may be more worse" cabir said and everyone seconded him
An this very moment manik felt like killing cabir as he was to adamant to make her finish the dare reasons known to him only. Seeing no escape nandini unwillingly agreed and Aarav came infront of him her eyes was time to time seeing manik and seeing his angry expression was giving her more tension as don't know why she herself doesn't want to make him angry

"nandini if you want I can backout" Aarav said politely which was only audible to her

"no Aarav I have to do this its a dare" nandini sighed sadly

"but I can do what I want" Aarav said and winked at her she didn't understood his meaning

She tip toed to his height and pulled him closer by his shirt she once again looked at manik and he turned his face everyone was hooting and clapping she closed her eyes and was inches apart from his lips the only thing which came in front of his eyes was manik's image she was about to kiss him when something happened and she opened her eyes immediately and looked at Aarav in disbelief and here he was smiling.

When nandini was about to kiss him he saw her trembling so he immediately turned his face and she kissed his cheek she smiled at him and mumbled a thankyou she considered herself lucky to have such a friend.

"Guyzz this is cheating" mukti said making a grumpy face

"yaa you were suppose to kiss on lips not cheeks" Aliya said

"but I didn't cheated" nandini said

"yaa she didn't I turned my face so eventually the dare is done" Aarav said happily and both came back to her seat

Manik who has till now turned h face looked at them and his eyes met with nandini and he smiled and in return she smiled back and this didn't went unnoticed by one pair of eyes and that was none other than cabir

Manik's p.o.v

As soon as nandini read her dare I became happy as I thought I was in his left but my happiness was short lived as I realized I wasn't sitting at his left but Aarav was and it boiled my blood as I cant see her with any guy except me and her kissing someone else I cant tolerate I just somehow wanted this dare to not happen and I even tried protesting but in went in deaf ears so when I saw them about to kiss I just turned my face and fisted my palms tightly but then when I heard everyone telling they cheated I looked up and saw they didn't kiss and a content smile appeared on my face and the game continued I can tell one thing cabir has just put the toughest dares for everyone we all were laughing and enjoying with cabir's super filmy proposal to navya.

"guyzz lets just spin it for the last time as you guyzz must be hungry" Tia said and cabir spinned the bottle for last time and it landed on me

"go manik" cabir cheered

I got up and went to pick up the chit and smirked seeing whats written in it

"dance with any girl you wish to" I read out loud

"dude you got the best dare ever" abhi said and I smirked

"so go for it manik" cabir said and winked

I had already decided to whom I'm going to dance with so I took a round and stopped at the person with whom I wanted to dance and I knew it was a shocker for everyone

End p.o.v

Manik went and stopped in front of nandini and she looked at him wide eyes not just nandini but everyone was gawking at them as they were some alien

"may I have a dance with you" manik said offering his hand and she looked around and unwilling gave in as everyone was staring at them only

They came in the centre and music started playing manik entwined his right hands with her and slided his left hand on her waist and pulled her closer with a jerk

Dheere dheere se meri zindagi me aana
Dheere dheere se dil ko churana
(churana..)
Tumse pyaar hume hai kitna jaane jaana
Tumse mil kar tumko batana

they were moving with slow steps and their eyes were fixed on each other not for a second they moved their eyes

Sham wahi , kam wahi
Tere bina o sanam
Neend nahi, chain nahi
Tere bina o sanam

He twirled he around and then pulled her back with a jerk she collided with his broad muscular chest and she shivered

Teri meri meri teri ik jind'di
ik jind'di what to do?
Jhoomu main naachun gaaun ke likhun
Tere liye main kya Karun

He slided his fingers on her waist and pulled her more closer leaving no gap in between and moving with the beats

Dheere dheere se meri zindagi mein aana
Dheere dheere se dil ko churana
(churana..)
Tumse pyaar humein hai kitna jaan-e-jaana
Tumse mil kar tumko hai batana

The song ended but they were still lost in their own little world forgetting they were surrounded by everyone they came out of their little trance hearing the vice of the clap and they both parted away

"wohoo guyzz this was some chemistry" TIa said and they both smiled shyly

Everyone was praising them but only two people were in doubts

"cabir don't you find something different in them" mukti asked cabir

"hmm you are right" cabir said as he thought he was not the only one to notice the change

"they never be this friendly and suddenly from long time I have been noticing their change" mukti said looking at them

"mukti we will talk about it later" cabir said as first he himself needs to know the exact truth


Nandini's p.o.v

We all were chilling out in the garden at the backside of the house Tia has arranged everything with bonfire and cushions and mattresses around it was quite cold outside the starting of December was making the atmoshphere more cool and romantic I looked around and saw dhruv and Aliya cuddling each other they looked really cute together they have joined us today afternoon after meeting dhruv's parents they were definitely one adorable couple.

"Guyss its cold out here so here take the blankets make yourself more comfortable" tia said and handed every couple a blanket but she has forgotten that there were only three couple and manik were not so she forgot to get one more blanket

"uhmm I'm sorry it just slipped out of my mind that you and manik are not as couple" tia said getting guilt about thinking us as a couple

"its okay tia you give him the blanket I can manage with my shawl" I said smiling

"no nandini you take it I can mange" manik interrupted

"no manik its fine" I said being admant and after a lot of arguments I finally myself handed him the blanket

It was indeed true that the winter was getting over me and I was shivering badly but was not ready to accept and kept a faint smile I saw everyone enjoying but there was one eye who was continuously staring at me and it was none other than manik.

"nandini you are shivering very badly and you may catch cold and fall sick so why don't you share the blanket with manik" cabir said noticing me shiver and everyone's attention shifted to me and they all seconded cabir and finally I gave in

He came and sat beside me and put the blanket over me we were at a distance from each other but then after sometime he moved towards me more and put his hands around my waist and pulled me towards him even I didn't protested as I saw everyone dozing off dhruv has already took Aliya with him and mukti has dozed off on Abhimanyu's shoulder and even cabir and navya dozed off holding each other I pushed myself more into his arms as I felt comfortable there he held me more tighty and I put my head on his chest wile his both hands were wrapped around me I was feeling sleepy and being in his arm was more comfortable than ever

"you are very cold nandini" manik said leaning down near my ears to which I just hmmed and don't know when I dozed of in his arms.

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The next morning when I woke up I found myself on my bed in my bedroom and I smiled knowing who would have done this I looked at the time it was 9 am and I wondered how did I slept till so long I looked for my phone and I saw a message from Tia

we all are at the beach see you there- Tia

"hmm beach okay then lets get ready" I thought and took out a proper beach wear and went to freshen up and changed myself

End of p.o.v

Everyone was already there enjoying at beach girls were gossiping and and having massage and boys were sipping their drinks and talking about business and many more things

Nandini's dress

manik was the first one to look at her and his eyes popped she was looking too hot and sexy in this dress and feeling his gaze on her she blushed and directly went to the girls gang the girls started talking about the dress and accessories for the wedding while manik was completely gawking at her only when cabirs voice brought him out of trance

"dude where you lost" cabir asked shaking him by shoulders

"no nowhere" manik said stammering

"guyzz look at the hot girls around" abhi said

"abhi tujhe mukti ke haatho marna he kya" cabir said laughingly

"haa yaar we all are in relation and hum th kisi aur ladki ke taraf dekh bhi nahi sakte" abhi said sadly

"abhi mukti ko bulau" manik said and high fived cabir and both burst into laughter

"manik tu toh kuch bol hi mat tera mast hai tu toh single hai" cabir said defending abhi

"so what still I'm not interested in al these" manik said

"are you sure you are not then look over there" abhi said and pointed out towards the beach

(just imagine she coming out of the sea and walking towards them and not pool)

All the boys jaw dropped open seeing such a hot girl coming towards them the girls who were not so far from looked at them and then towards the direction where they were looking and anger took over their faces so they all got up and went towards their guy before that girl can come

The girl came and hugged Tia and everyone looked at her with shock faces while nandini turned her face in utter disgust

"Guyzz meet raima she's my college bestie" Tia announced

Raima turned towards them and smiled and her eyes fell on nandini who was standing a bit far and not looking at her she went towards her and hugged her giving aanother shock to everyone

"HEY DI" raima said with extra sugar coaty vice and everyone looked at nandini with utter shock

"Listen stop calling me di as I'm not your sister you arejust my father's daughter"
(I know she looks older than her but plzz bear it as she is the best for this character)


So finally done see I'm so fast naa and now I want comment from every single person who likes otherwise next chapter pakka pm hone waala hai no kanjoosi in comments okay and now il try updating on weekends okay bacchas and for pm buddy me

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