Nice start yaar! Totally rocking ,especially flashback was my favourite part of the update! It was just so cute ,typical best friends are like that. Finding happiness in your friend's happy smile and the other one always gets to know..😉
I am loving this MaNan as best friends phase as I had loves MaNan's "friend" phase in the show.😆
Keeping aside all that well you have brought some really new turns if we compare to the show. As in Alya-Nandu friendship. Seriously I wanted that in the show ,just seeing Krissane and Niti's off screen bond I wanted them to be friends but in vain. *sigh* No problems you will show it😃
Then Manik's two best friends oh Cabir has to be😛 and Madhyam haha ,you have just made Tosh super happy😆
Well Nyonika acting like a caring mother is also something new ,quite unlike the show!
Although many factors in ur story are apart from the show but I think you will do complete justice with them as the first chapter was bang on and now can't wait for second one!
Manik wants to tell something to Nandu😳 Please let it be that he loves her too!❤️
And lastly ,I just loved hoe you described Nandini's feelings.👏
You know what the best part of your story is? That you are showcasing best friends falling in love and I think there is nothing better than falling for your best friend! So I'll be eagerly waiting for your story and yes next time I won't be late..hopefully!🤣 update soon!
