MANAN FF- MEANT TO BE- chapter-4 pg-23 25/5 - Page 11

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: angellovemanan

loved it

awesome update
and nandini has really changed herself
continue soon
and haan do pm me




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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey I just read ur story in one go. .
Really loved it. .
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
Plz pm me too
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Posted: 9 years ago

I m really sad bcoz of the response of STORY OF LOVE' but I m updating bcoz of my regular readers... so here is chapter-3...

Chapter-3

Recap- manan's first meeting...

Meera, rahul n karan left.

In room

Na-"so cabir kuch socha hai tumne."

Cbr-"nahi. Mujeh laga ki mene navya ko humesha ke liye kho diya."

Na-"aise kaise kho diya. Ab tum dono humesha sath rahoge. Nandini promise."

Listening this all smile.

Cbr-"so me bhi aapko bhabhi bua sakta hu right..."

Na-"no... I mean me istani old dikhti hu kya...? Call me nandini aur waise bhi tum sab mujse bade ho."

Muk-"what...?"

Na-"yes... me aur navu same age ke hai."

Aly-"ok."

Cbr-"manik tu kuch nahi bolega...?"

Mnk-"kya bolu me...?"

Cbr-"manik mere liye itana pareshan rehta tha n ab kuch bol nahi raha hai."

Mnk-"I happy for you..."

Manik hug cabir.

Manik's pov

Mujeh khush hona chahiye par yeh kya ho raha hai mujeh. Nandini is married. Is batse mujeh kyu bura lag raha hai...?

Manbir broke hug.

Mnk-"so nandini tumne kuch plan kiya hai...?"

Na-"no manik, but I think pehle cabir ko navu se bat karni chahiye."

Mnk-"ha... yeh thik hai."

Na-"abhi plz... check navu thik hai ke nahi."

Abhi-"baby doll don't worry me abhi aata hu use leke."

Mukti's pov

Abhi is so caring... kitani care karta ha bwo nandini ki. He is such a sweetheart. Mukti kya soch rahi hai yeh tu...? Stop mukti...

Muk-"tumhre mom dad kaha hai...?"

Na-"wo manglor me reehte hai."

Cbr-"to abhi unke sath nahi rehta...?"

Na-"abhi is not my real brother but wo arya ka friend hai n mujeh sister manta hai."

Mnk-"arya... yeh kon hai...?"

That time navya come there.

Nv-"mera bhai."

Cbr-"ok."

Nv-"nandu chale."

Na-"ha... FAB5 bhi chal rahe hai humare sath... wo in sabne meri jaan bachai to mene thank you kehne ke liye inhe dinner par invite kar liya."

Nv-"thik hai."

All left from there. FAB5 are in their car n navni is abhi's car.

In abhi's car

Na-"navu tu thik hai na...?"

Nv-"ha... kyu puch rahi hai...?"

Na-"tujeh mujse chupaneki jarurat nahi hai."

Nv-"me kuch nahi chupa rahi."

Na-"me cabir ki bat kar rahi hu."

Nv-"nandu wo 2 sal pehle ki bat thi, ab kuch nahi bacha."

Na-"isi liye use dekhkar ro rahi thi...?"

Nv-"me nahi ro rahi thi. Me to davaiya lene gayi thi."

Na-"me teri aakhe pad sakti hu."

Navya cannot control n hug nandini n started crying.

Nv-"me kya karu nandu... mene use dekha to kuch samajme nahi aaya. 2 sal nandu fir bhi mujeh affect karta hai wo."

Na-"navu, it is love."

Navya look at nandini.

Nv-"nandu me tut jaugi ab... aur pretend nahi hota ki me khush hu."

Na-"navu... kabhi... kabhi... tut jana achcha hota hai... bcoz jo chiz chub rahi ho na bahar aa jati hai."

Nv-"nandu cabir mujse pyar nahi karta."

Na-"wo karta hai navu, uski aakhome dikhata hai."

Nv-"nandu aga isbar kuch hua to me she nahi paugi."

Na-"to me kaha keh rahihu ki jake I LOVE YOU bol do but use ek chance to do. Pehle friend bano uski n then think about next level."

Nv-"nandu agar tum nahi hoti to mera kya hota...? U know jab hospital se call aaya tab me litana dar gayi thi. Ek accident ne bhai ko chin liya ab tumhe nahi kho sakti thi me."

Now nandini is crying.

Na-"navu... I m not goind anywhere."

Abhi is watching all this.

Abhi-"mujeh to koi pyar hi nahi karta."

Abhi show fake anger.

Na-"kisne kaha ki koi pyar nahi karta tumse. I love my brother so much."

Nandini hugs abhi.

Nv-"aur me bhi."

N navya hugs them.

In FAB5's car

Cabir is smillind like fool. Mukti see that.

Muk-"manik dekh to someone is smilling like a fool."

Mnk-"ha... sahi bol rahi hai tu. Abto ise dost kaha dikhenge iski MADHUBALA jo aagayi hai."

Drv-"vaise tu use MADHUBALA kyu bulata tha...?"

Cbr-"kyuki usko drama bahot achcha lagta hai n wo college ka ek bhi play miss nahi karti thi n kitani dramebaz thi wo... is liye."

Mnk-"tune dekha navya change ho gayi hai."

Muk-"ha... cabir wo aisi nahi thi. She was chatter box."

Aly-"par aaj to kuch bolhi nahi rahi thi."

Cbr-"manik I think something happened n hume nahi pata uske bareme."

Mnk-"hum uske ghar ja rahe hai may be kuch pata chal jaye."

Muk-"navya has very sweet bhabhi yarr."

Aly-"kitana samjati hai wo navya ko."

Drv-"aur koi to hai jo cabir ko chup karva sakta hai. I so happy ki wo aaj hume mil gayi. Na wo milti na navya milti hume."

Cbr-"you are right. Wo help bhi ka rahi hai humari. Ab sirf manik aur mukti bache hai. Tu dono bhi kisiko dhoondhlo. Fir hum FAB5 sathme sadi karange."

Mnk-"abhi navyane ha... bol nahi aur tu sadi ke sapne dekhane laga."

Cbr-"wo ha bolegi. Afterall bhabhi bhi... I mean nandini bhi ab humari team me hai."

Drv-"manik tune uncle ko inform kiya...?"

Mnk-"ohhh... shit... hum unhe surprise denevale the...?"

Cbr-"koi bat nahi unhe pata nahi hai. Navya ke gharse direct gharhi jayenge aur unhe surprise denge."

Mnk-"thik hai bro..."

they reach at khurana mansion. Abhi is waiting for them outside.

Abhi-"wo baby doll abhi hospitalse aayi hai to navya use undar legayi hai."

Mnk-"it's ok."

They all go inside the mansion. N see meera n rahul are siting in hall.

Abhi-"uncle..."

Rahul n meera stand up to receive them.

Rhl-"aao bachcho. Betho."

Cabir go n touch meera n rahul's feet n manik also go n touch their feet. Now mukly look at dhruv then dhruv go n touch their feet.

Meera-"jeete raho bachcho."

Then all sit.

Mukti say in manik's ear.

Muk-"manik cabir ne per chua kyuki apne in laws ko impress karna hai. Tu kyu per chu raha tha. Kahi aisa na hoki cabir ki jagah inhe to paand aaja navya ke liye."

Manik gice deathly glare to her. Cabir listen their convo.

Cbr-"sale... tu durhi reh mere in laws se... samja..."

Mnk-"cabir mujeh teri us madhubala me koi interest nahi hai."

Cbr-"inko tu pasand aa gaya to mera kya hoga."

Mnk-"thik hai."

Meera-"kya hua bachcho koi problem hai...?"

Cbr-"no aunty wo hum apne work ke bareme kuch discuss kae rahe the."

Rhl-"thik hai."

Mnk-"aapka beta nahi nazar aa raha. Abhi tak aaya nahi kya...?"

Meera n rahul took at each other.

Meera-"wo ab kabhi nahi aayega."

Cbr-"kya matalab...?"

Rhl-"arya is no more."

FAB5 shocked.

Cbr-"yeh kya bol rahe hai aap uncle."

Meera n rahul have tears in their eyes.

Rhl-"2 sal pehle ek accident me he died."

Mnk-"what...?"

N then they tell them all the incident.

FAB5 have tears in their eyes.

Muk-"uncle kitane vakt ke bad hua ye... I mean nandini n arya ki sadi ke kitane time bad...?"

Meera-"un dono ki sadi nahi hui thi... sadi ti chodo unki to engagemenr bhi nahi hui thi."

Aly-"to wo aap ke sath kaise I mean...?"

Meera-"arya ke jane ke bad usne kaha ki wo arya ko kho chuki hai hume nahi khona chati. Agar arya chala gaya to kya uska hum sab se koi rista nahi...? Hum bahot kosis ki use manane ki par wo nahi mani. Aaj wo hum sab ki jaan hai."

Cbr-"itana hone ke bad bhi wo smile karti hai."

Rhl-"wo aisi nahi thi cabir. Wo bahot badal gai hai n smile to wo sabko dikhane ke liye karti hai ki wo thik hai."

Karan come there.

Krn-"dad dekhona di mujeh bhabhi ke room me nahi jane de rahi."

Navya also come there.

Nv-"dad nandu ko rest karna chahiye aur yeh jayega to..."

She cannot complete her sentence. She look at all n understand what happened.

Nv-"thik hai karan par thodi der ke liyehi."

Karan left.

Nv-"mom dad aapne inko kyu bataya...?"

Cbr-"humne puch tha inse."

Nv-"aap log thak gaye honge. Fresh ho jaiye. Me aapko guest room dhikhti hu."

Navya show them room.

In room.

All are silent.

Cbr-"I cannot believe this."

Muk-"koi itana pyar kaise kar sakta hai kisise...?"

Mnk-"mujeh lagta tha ki cabir tera pyar sabse alag hai but nandini ka pyar..."

Aly-"wo kitani achchi hai aur uske sath yeh sab..."

Cbr-"u know jab usne kaha ki meri aakhome dikhata hai ki me navya se pyar karta hu mujeh samaj nahi aaya ki use kaise pata chala par ab samaj aa gaya."

Mnk-"usne hume pata bhi nahi chalne diya..."

A voice come " wo aisi hi hai."

Precap- FAB5 decide to bring old nandini back...

So here is chapter-3...

I hope you like it...

Plz... comment n who wants PM send me buddy request.

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it
Nandini has suffered a lot
Hope fab 5 brings the
Old nandini back
And the new couples also
Start they story
Update soon

Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Fab 5 now about nandini past
Looking forward how they bring nandini back.
Continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update dear...
waiting for next update...
plz update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update
continue soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nyc update. .
Really loved it. .
I hope manik will be able to help nandini. .
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
Plz don't discontinue ur other story...
I really loved it also
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Posted: 9 years ago
So manik knows the truth about nandani's life hope he wins her heart soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazinggg
Superbbb
Mindblowingg update
Fab5 ko sb sach pta chl gea...wowww manik good impress krne ka try kr rhe ho...old nandu ke saath saatj navya ko bhi wapis laayo...thnx for pm me...beautifully written...lovd it...continue soon

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