MANAN TS- GUILT TRIP(16+) FINAL PART A/B PG29 (17/12) - Page 23

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Posted: 9 years ago
hey amazing update...sorry for being late as i was out of town...n didn't have net so couldn't read the update...but is awesome as always//thanks for the pm.. plz continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update.
Manan was 😳.
Loved the last part especially maniks pov. The way she makes him comfortable for sharing his problems.
And yes nandini z only Maniks.

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
soo wild hot spicy update
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end was superb.. lovd it
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Posted: 9 years ago
heyyy...
first of all thank u for quick update...
talking about first part...
i was really speechless...
i can't express it...full of hotness..
second part was wonderful...
means super dooper ..
i was kind of sure about nandini's work...
but about nandini's limitations i didn't expect that
means seriously i didn't even think about that...
then it is you who always suprises us with your creative mind..
awsm update..
really loved it...
one request plzz
can u give epilogue..
plz plz plz...


lots of love

SAKSHI
Edited by tanwarsakshi119 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Need of epilogue where they can be seen together awesome update
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Posted: 9 years ago
it ws an awsm updat..
evn i gues it mst hv been ur longest update...
it ws sensuous...
i srsly lovd d climax...
whr he slwly fals in lov wth hr.. it ws d cutest part i fl...
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Posted: 9 years ago
hey di...
amazing stry ...
the guilt trip...it ws awsm...
the update ws awsm...
it ws hot ...completely sensuous...
i reallly reallly lvd it..damn hot...
n at ladt whn he slwly fell fr hr...
the cutest moment ...
n thn nandini s limitations ...
it ws shocking surprising ...like seriously...
she is damn innocnt..
lvd the stry wid a really vry diffrnt cncpt...
thnks fr pm di...
u rocked...
ssee u sooon wid anothr rocking stry..
tc..
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing,superbly penned down..very different story yet you managed it so well..great
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hot .. I mean sooo hot..
Hottest I've ever read...
Ending was tooo good... Glad that Manik feels for her..

It was an amazing story... Really loved it.
Keep writing
Keep smiling
Stay blessed
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