#3//Lips Do Lie//Ch 14 on pg 140 & link for THREAD 4 on pg 1

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Ishika Gaba

@ishiga

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Posted: 9 years ago

#241

Wooeww... Awesome chapter.. Mast action.. It was full of action.. Then chottu sa romance but cute..

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prasanna77

@prasanna77

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Posted: 9 years ago

#242

excellent update...omg you are amazing...awesome writing...just loved it...

curiosity is building up ...can't wait to read next update..this is damn interesting...

once again manik is so sweet...want to know the mystery...

thank u so much for update...

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Sutapa Sarbabhom

@sutapasarbabhom

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#243

What a action filled updt

Nandu still wanted to trust manik

Enjoying the stry lot

Waiting for next part

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591994

@591994

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#244

Gooddd...i'm telling u ur try of making this a bit filmy is indeed a great success...i mean it's only possible in films to see anger concern action n romance all at the same time(don't if i left any emotion..hehehe)...Really...manik's identity is getting into my nerves...how much will u make us await fr unfolding these never ending mystries...Bt i know the wait is gonna be worth it...so i don't mind waiting fr so long...i trust u n ur writing...n we all know u r a writer anyone would like to be...at least i'm sure about myself...Waiting fr another eventful update with the new couple...haha...i don't know how many times they become new couple...n i think they don't know either...i think u can help them...Okk...i'll stop my blabbering now...i know it's getting boring...Plzz...Cont. Soon...Byee...tc...

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nilisha-kunnu

@nilisha-kunnu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#245

it's so filming but superb one...cont soon...

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Addrita Islam

@Addrita.Jesin

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#246

going on in a filmy way🤣
Make a movie of it api..maan lo agar manan ko le aa payi to ye movie blockbuster hit hoga..

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kishubedi

@kishubedi

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#247

thanks for pm!

loved the moments between manan

n specially nandus acting infront of the fisherwoman lol

ok so one thing is clear manik doesnt have any criminal records

but then who is manik

is he some undercover agent or so

seems like the way he is saving the chip

so many mysteries bout him

n loved the ksis at the end

n loll not to forget gurdeep kaur :D

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thamannamanan

@thamannamanan

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#248

Nandi shooting at manik n then asking r u hurt n manik teasing her

manik fighting n saving nandu

kabeer s caring for nandu

is manik from police dept some secret mission or smthing

mr mrs amarjeet Duggal

very funny

fake id s

nandini wants to know his name is also wrong or wht?

awesome thrilling update

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aarzooarora

@aarzooarora

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Posted: 9 years ago

#249

👏👏👏👏
Sacchi yaar film dekhne jaisa lag raha hai

And my favorites SRK and Kajol wali 😆😆😆

Loved it to the core dear.

Wanna read more amd more

👏

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stars_fireflies

@stars_fireflies

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Posted: 9 years ago

#250

Hats off to uh girl ... It really feels lije m watching some action pack movie with romance nd suspense... The only thing running in my mind ... Who is manik .. What does he want ... Suspense is now literally killing me

Loved the update

I feels like just keep reading

Thanks for pm

Stay blessed