#3//Lips Do Lie//Ch 14 on pg 140 & link for THREAD 4 on pg 1

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archu_asok

@archu_asok

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1061

Awesome update. Full of action. Loved it.nandini's idea was mindblowing. Old couple death part was so emotional and well penned.hats off. Nandini's state was well written. Way manik consoled nandini was beautifully penned. Nandini's reaction to manik's wound was well penned. Nandini's reaction and Manan's convo after Manik's conscious state were well penned. Loved it. Teasing manik was amazing.nandini's confession was fab. Totally an amazing update. Eagerly waiting for next update. Continue soon.thanks for pm

Keep writing

Stay blessed😊

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iqra286

@iqra286

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1062

Awww😛dt was such an awsum blosson update😃 really scared dt there has been a shhot out in d house😲 who were d mens really loved nandu idea of spreading chlli powder😆😛 bth r hell crazy n love ech other to d core😃😃 really loved d way manik threathned cab driver😆😆😃poor soul😃 really loved d way nandu again confessed her love to him😛 but wanted to knw wht he will say after dt,,,,,,wanted his confession n side story to😊 so update soon

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sb1234

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1063

Wonderful .. Great presence of mind Nandini showed .. The chilli powder was brilliant !!!

So Nandini finally confessed it again .. Wondering what'll happen next .. Update soon :)

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mamalovesbalto

@mamalovesbalto

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1064

hi very nice update i am telling you again you are very good writer and a very good narrator so please don't give up on your writing like all your stories i really love this one to please don't give up on manan keep smiling and god bless you

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ArSha_ManNan

@ArSha_ManNan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1065

Awesome update
Omg nandu using chilli powder n paltes to get rid of those ppl
Oh no uncle n aunty died ... Nandu shocked n manik calming her
Nandu with so much difficulty got him treated ...
She still loves him so much
Thnkz 4 the pm

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VarshaPretty

@VarshaPretty

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1066

It's a mind blowing chapter for me...The fight...I could see a clear visual...superb work dear...👏

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s2sultan

@s2sultan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1067

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Cooki

@Cooki

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1068

It's awesome update dear...
I really like the suspense thriller stories..
& u being writer is the cherry on top of the cake...
I liked the way nandini wants to show her love for him in every possible way...
Thnxxx for the pm..
Continue soon...
Looking forward to read further parts...

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MahimaSankhla

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1069

Awesomeee.. Full action packed update tha... I was literally holding up myself ki aage kya hoga.. It was so good.. Suspense, thriller, action, love, romance n wat not.. N i m crazy fan of ur writing. U r so damn good.. Kp writing more n more