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Posted: 9 years ago
finally u r back.

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m so hppy to see u.

M eagerly waiting.

Can u tell me what us ur wattpad id ?
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Posted: 9 years ago
Welcome back diduuu!!!!!
Don't be sad na did a.. Look I'm here :D but in a sick condition lol
My god long chappy!!! Great!!!!! Waiting didu
Haww wattpad pe jaega bucketlist! Di I forgot my password of both my wattpad accounts :( :P so dida if possible pm kardo plz :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ru seriously backkk
Pkka naa

Do pm.me yrr
Nai to wattpad pe to aa hi jao
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Posted: 9 years ago
Like finally u r back..yipeee
Plz plz plz continue soon..
Was missing ur stories like hell..
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So here you go with the long update.. I had to read my story again to finally write this.. Hehe.. Okay I'll send pms in evening based on last chapter as I'm in my lab right now :P
So yeah Enjoy

Precap-

MANIK P. O. V-


Someone informed me there was someone to see me..I haven't left my room after that talk with dad..to be exact 3 days..3 days of hell!!

For the first time I don't know what to do...

I went to see who it was and than it was like a ray of hope in this hell because I saw My BEST FRIEND there..

Arymaan..

And the next I know was that land below my feet was taken away!!

Arymaan came forward with such a speed that I saw a glimpse of someone whom I dying to see and before I could register her in my mind and in my heart..


Arymaan punched the daylights out of me!!


Damn!!

Arymaan-And that you very well know why you deserved My friend!!

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Chapter-Where to Miss...To the Star's...

NANDINI P. O. V-

if you would ask me what I'm doing here.. I won't know how to answer it..

It's like one moment I'm grieving In Mumbai mising my half a heart and the other moment I'm angry on him for almost leaving me again..but than I'm worried about him.. And the next moment I realise how much I love him..

Love the emotion I had forbidden myself of.. Something I didn't believe in but than here I was craving for the very emotion..

Yes I loved him.. From when I don't know maybe the moment I saw him for the first time maybe when I smiled with him.. Maybe when I saw rain as a blessing maybe when I lived life with him or maybe when he brought me those Almond chocolates...It was even when he left me.. Even when he returned to me and even now..

And now I know I loved him from the very beginning..

I was soo stupid to run from this emotion..which actually makes me feel alive!!

But than blame the stupid human nature you always tend to run behind things that you can't conquer or you just don't give a damn about the things you actually have..

But I now know Ive been blessed with the best thing and I would not give it up.. No matter what...

And that's the reason why I'm here with Arymaan..it didn't took a moment for me to come here with him the moment I saw him with a happy face on my doorstep only to form a glaring face when I told him about his best friend's where abouts..


I didn't realise I was too much in bubble at the given moment that when Arymaan dragged me towards a gate I had actually jumped a feet..

Me-where we going...

I asked in a small voice still not meeting the eyes with the person who was almost burning me with his gaze.. And also the person I love the most...

Arymaan-chill..

I sighed knowing that it was his own way to calm himself down..

I peeked at the person who was still mainting his intense gaze over me..

His left cheek bone had turned red all thanks to Arymaan.. But than again maybe the person I loved deserved it..

What's with my sub-conscious.. The person I love?? Doesn't he have a name??

Manik.. That's who he is.. My Manik.. My precious...

Soon we were locked inside a room..i don't know honestly what was going on...i felt like a lifeless doll...somuch emotions yet empty something was keeping me from breaking my exterior I don't know what ...

Arymaan-so you getting engaged Mr Malhotra??that to..to my sister??


ENGAGED..yes he was getting engaged..the first time Arymaan told me about maniks engagement with his sister I was numb.. And maybe I was still.. Didn't he told me he loved me.. Or was it a lie??

I knew they were waiting for my reaction but still somehow my exterior was maintained though my heart felt like being squashed..

Manik-But how did you knew..

Taking a deep breath I prepared for their conversation...

Arymaan-Actually I knew it from the start that our dads are planning your and my sister Nairas wedding..the reason I went Mumbai to meet you but than I was late...

MANIK P.O.V-

It was soo hard for me to see her like this..lost in soo many emotions..soo many questions..Her eyes held so much of them..questions..emotions..yet they looked lost...empty..


Is this Our REALITY...

I don't know what was I doing dad.. He wanted me to get engaged to Arymaans sister saying that I should live in reality..that I should forget about My NANDINI..My Nandini..the girl I love.. The girl for whom I'll worship the path she walks on.. I should forget her.. But how could I??when everything of me belonged to her and everything of me reminded me of her..

My best friend high on his toes..My cheek burning with ache yet my eyes were on her.. Her eyes..they were my existence my warmth my calm yet at this moment they were void.. I wanted nothing more than to see that spark in her eyes which was always there..

Arymaan - I'll let you guys talk and than we will think about this matter at hand..

With that my best friend left..well that's him!!

Always a understanding mind reading fellow!!

I closed my eyes taking a deep breath and finally took her name...

Me-Nandini...

And it was like I came life..

I saw her closing her like she was breaking or ready to flow.. And with that she was in my arms..

Finally near me..

I held her tighty..and she let her tears..her emotions flow!!

I hated making her cry.. Seeing her like this but yet this moment gave a relief that she was actually here with me.. That I wasn't dreaming...

How could I let her go...
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PART B-

MANIK P. O. V

Nandini-Manik...

I heard her whisper my name.. In between her sobs.. And immediately I got my hold tighter around her.. And I lightly kissed her head.. Fearing that even a light touch of mine make her disappear...

Me-shss...im here baba.. I won't let you go... Shss..

I felt her taking a breath and she pushed herself off me but her hands were fisted holding my T-shirt...

And she looked into my eyes.. Her eyes filled with tears and yet I saw the anger they hold..


Nandini-you won't let me go...yeah you won't let me go and what if I want you to let go.. Because you.. You.. Are getting engaged...right.. Engaged.. Mr. Malhotra I hate you.. I hate you.. I hate you...

With that she rested her head again on my chest letting her tears flow again..

I took her hands in mine..

Me-Nandini.. You know you mean everything to me.. But this is our Reality..

Reality...where my father wants me to stay.. Or knowing him he won't spare a moment in hurting My Love.. And I won't let that happen..

Nandini again took a step back letting go of me and.. And immediately I felt vacant..i felt empty..

She was hiccuping in her tears when she again looked at me.. But with more anger!!

Nandini-Reality..you are talking about f**kin REALITY!!..Are you out of your mind.. What Reality you talking about where you will think about others before your own happiness..Where you will cast a fake mirage of yourself..just for others and than you will call it Reality..is that your Reality Manik!! Huh...tell me it your love so weak.. Is our love that weak that you will give it up like that.. On name of fake reality.. Tell me..


Is this my Reality..a reality where nothing is real..and just like that for the first time she taught me something which I was so blind to see.. That I wasn't choosing Reality but fakeness that to over my own happiness the happiness which lies in My Loves happiness.. How could I be soo blind and soo stupid...

No my love is not that weak.. Our love is not that weak.. I won't give up on it.. And I'll fight.. Fight for her.. Fight for our love..


I couldn't help but just bring her back in my arms craving for touch.. Because only she can give me relief from this ache in my heart...

Me-I'll fight My love..for you for us.. I won't let you go Nandini..please stop crying..

I requested her setting her head below my chin..

Me-you know na it's hurts me.. Seeing you like this because of me.. You know I love..

And my confession just got startled

Nandini- I LOVE YOU Manik..please don't leave me..

She confessed in a tiny voice...i didn't knew to be happy that finally she accepted my Love.. Or be sad that her first confession was filled with fear..

Me- I won't ..i promise I won't My love.. Never..

She tilted her head up looking at me..

Nandini-swear on me..

Her voice so small her eyes so uncertain her thoughts so vulnerable so unsure.. It broke me..

I nodded my head trying to sooth her..

Me- I swear on you..

Nandini-Manik kiss me..

Her demand shocked me but yet the rest was yet to come..

Nandini-Kiss me hunread times Manik...


It wasn't a request.. It was her demand and her demand was my Command...

I couldn't hold back any more now..with a swift move I bended my neck a little and locked my lips with hers...I bited her lower lip making her gasp and invading her mouth..tasting each corner of her mouth.. dominating her tongue with mine..I held her waist and pulled her closer to which she encircled her arms around my neck..I lifted her a bit and she circled her legs around my waist replying to the kiss back..

I didn't left her till we were totally out of breath...

I broke the kiss but yet her bottom lip was inbetween my lips..and replied to her command..

Me-And that was my first Kiss...!!

Her cheeks which were already red by anger and crying turned a rosy red..and her tear filled eyes held a little sparkle..which all toghter gave away her blush!!

I smiled a little..moving her more close to me.. Tightening my arms around her waist..burying my face in her crook of neck.. And in return she tighten her legs around my waist hugging me back..


Peace..Contect that's what I felt..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part C-

NANDINI P. O. V-

I wanted this..i wanted this to last.. I wanted this to breath.. I wanted this to stay alive...

I wanted him.. I needed him..

His touch..his warmth..his embrace..his kisses..his love I needed it all.. I wanted it all...

Admiting that I loved him was my step either towards bliss or either destruction..

Bliss..it would be bliss if I have him.. And it can turn into destruction if I couldn't..

My love was too strong yet too weak..

Just like this.. Holding onto to him.. I can't let him go.. Or else I don't know what will I do..

I needed him so badly..if it was possible I will mould myself within him..

That's how much I wanted him..

I loved him.. And now it's even hard to breathe even it's not breathing in his own air..

I tighented my hold around his neck and waist more...

But just than he inched a bit far from me.. I looked at him with confusion and still that undying fear...

He took a breath.. And slowly creased my hair..

Manik-There is someone at the door.. Probably Arymaan..


He waited for me to remove my hold around me.. But yet the Fear..

Seeing me like that.. He asked..

Manik-Trust me please...

I sighed and parted from him.. And I felt that gap again..

But trying his best to reaassure me.. He took my hand in his.. Holding tight yet giving a soft squeze to it

And like that toghter we walked to the door and he opened the door.. As expected it was Arymaan..

He looked tired..worried..almost helpless but still seeing us together..holding hands he gave a little yet genuine smile..

If it was hard for me and Manik..it was even hard for him.. After all he was making a choice between his best friend and his sister.. His sister and a girl he doesn't even know properly..

He spoke breaking my thoughts...

Arymaan-okay so Mr. Birthday boy.. And soon to be engaged..ive figured out that my dad and Naira are coming here by 8 and the engagement takes place at 9..


Birthday boy.. Yes it was his birthday..and his engagement too..and that part just kept punching my heart..


I didn't realise that Arymaan had stopped talking and now both of them had their full concentration on me..

I looked at them.. And tried my best to smile.. Key word -Tried..

But their worried look told me that I had failed miserably..

Manik-let's sit and talk..

With that he tugged my hand and let us in.. Arymaan following behind..

Manik sat on his bed and settled me on his lap.. Encircling or tangled hands around me..

If this situation was any different I would have been blushing tomato..or even better fighting him.. But at the given moment this was keeping me sane.. And I think even him..

Arymaan sat on a chair in front of us.. Ignoring a little act of what people call it PDA..knowing our situation well..


Honestly he actually never stops surprising me.. How can someone be so mature..


Manik-So what's the plan??

Arymaan- obviously I'm not letting you marry my sister breaking my others sisters heart dumbass!!

Saying that he smiled at me.. Still trying his best to lighten up the situation..


And that did make me smile


Manik-so what we do??My dad? Your dad? Naira?

Arymaan-well Nandini do you want to get engaged to my friend over here..

He asked me calmly gesturing to Manik..

Was he was real?? Engaged?
To Manik? At the age of 18 what about his dad? Hell I just confessed my love.. And engaged??

Those would be the questions I would have thought normally.. But being spell boundly in love all I did was looking at Manik I answered..

Me- I want to..i will..

I saw his eyes shine a bit more..

Me- I will..

I said again leaving no scoop of uncertainty...

Arymaan-well that's great now..

I looked back at Arymaan.. And he seemed some what relieved..

Arymaan-okay my love birds now all you have to do is stay away from Mr. Devil till the evening party.. And let me handle everything than..


With that he got up and just left..i loked at Manik all puzzled!!

Me- what he is going to do.. What about your dad.. Your engagement..

And he just smiled..

Manik-if he says let him Handel..than let him.. I'm sure he will talk to naira first

Me-hmm..

And than for the first time I looked around his room..

His books.. His basket ball.. Or was it football.. Everything..it all symbolized him..

And than I saw a portrait of a woman..Her eyes the same colour of his.. Deep black.. Just like his..

Me-Is that your mother?

The words escaped my mouth with no filter...

Manik- yes she is my mom.. My maa...

Me-Where is she?

Manik- she is no more..

I looked at him shocked and felt guilty..

Me-I didn't knew.. Sorry...

Manik-Shssshh.. It's Okay..he said placing his finger on my lips..

Manik-Its not your fault..

I locked my eyes with him.. So intense so raw.. So beautiful.. And just like that his finger was replaced by his his lips...
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Part D-

NANDINI P. O. V -


I closed my eyes...kissing him back.. Why won't I?
Because I just had seen something so beautiful in his eyes...

It was not a perfect love story that reflected in his eyes.. It was not a promise of a happily ever after that I saw.. It was not just love either.. It was a silent assurance that he would be there for me.. And he would never leave me...

And just by the look of it.. I just didn't gave my heart..my soul..my existence..but everything to him...

Slowly he laid me down on the bed.. And came over me..managing his weight..

His lips left mine..leaving me breathless..but the fact that his teeth were still playing with my bottom lip.. Just increased my panting..

Manik-Count...

He said moving to my neck..

Me-2..

He gave a feather kiss just below my ear.. But than the feather kiss turned into a love bite.. As he nibbled my soft skin there..

I had nearly tasted blood on my tongue..as I was biting my lip too hard to stop that moan..

And that I heard him..

Manik-3

The pleasure was just too high.. I pushed my head hard on pillow.. Streaching my neck.. And just like he placed another kiss just on my throat..

Me-4..i moaned..

He moved to my right shoulder blade.. And lingered a kiss there..

Manik -5

He moved a bit down over my cleavage.. And there it was.. My 6th kiss..

Me-6...

He traced his nose from my cleavage to my left breast..giving a kiss over my top...which didn't stopped my moan...

Me-Maa..nik..

Tracing again to my right breast he placed a kiss there..

Manik-8


I was panting by know..like I have been running on a freaking treadmill..when I heard him..

Manik-Open your eyes love..let me see you...

breathing out a heavy breath I obliged to his demand and opend my eyes directly to his..

It was like seeing my own reflection there.. The warmth the hidden lust and more than anything the ethereal yet passionate love!!

Maybe it was him..but I knew it was me.. Stealing my 9th kiss from him..

As I just encircled my arms around his neck.. Pulling him to me.. And kissing him like never before.. Exploring him throghly.. The fact that his weight was almost crushing me..didn't mattered as I was just pulling him more and more closer..it was like his weight over me.. Like he owned me just like I know I owned him..

I pulled him more closer.. If that was even possible..and let my lips suck on his tongue..just to withdraw on time letting him growl..but I was not yet done.. I returned his flavor of chewing my lip.. By chewing his..

Once we broke apart..i could actually feel the heat rising now..

I looked at him.. Seeing he already was looking at me..

He placed a soft kiss on my tip of nose..and smiled at me..

His smile so contagious..that i couldn't help smiling back..

Manik-10..

He rose a bit and took my hand in his.. Never breakin our eye contact..

He interwined our fingers and brought it to his lips placing a light kiss on back of my hand...and than on my each finger...

He did the same with my other hand..

Me-22..

He dropped his head and gave a warm kiss on my forehead.. Followed by both my eyes.. My cheeks..and even the insides of ear.. Which he couldn't seem to resist by biting on them later..


Manik-30..

And than he started kissing the path of my arms..

Me-42..

He looked at me again.. And I was almost ashamed that I was still breathing hard.. But than so was he..

And than in that moment it happened...

Our clothes were discarded on floor..as he continued his kisses everywhere now my chest.. My breasts..My stomach My curves..My navel..

Skin to skin.. Heat to heat.. Breath to breath.. Heart to Heart..i never felt so alive in a moment...

He was at his 99th kiss when somehow I switched our positions..

I sat on stomach..now getting a perfect view of his lean and very muscular chest..

Somehow yet almost by my permission when he had took my top off.. I felt a need to take his off too.. And I need..which in between all the passion made him chuckle... making me all flushed...

I leaned down near his ear and whispered...

Me-i want to save that 100th kiss for another time now Mr. Kidnapper..

I felt him taking a breath when I placed a kiss near his ear and later sucking it.. Just like him.. Biting and than curing with my lips..

I trailed my kisses down.. When he switched us again..

I looked at him with some shock..

Well he just smirked and stated..

Manik-Than this won't count..


With that his lips were again on mine sealing another passionate and almost eager kiss..

He curled his hand around my back.. And the other one was now intertwined with mine...

And somehow his curled hand came around the hook of my bra..


I felt him paused over my lips..which I didn't appreciated..

So I took my hand of his.. And moved behind my back taking his still hand there and unhooking my bra with his hand..


And like a toy his pause side had played but only to move above me..giving me questioning glance..which I replied with my calm one.. And inched my self closer to him..

I kissed him again but this time all so tenderly and slowly..i waited for him a bit to reply but when he did.. I saw those magical stars and fireworks behind my eyes...


I stopped kissing him but my lips were still on his..

Me-Please.. Take me.. Make me yours...

I whispered to him.. Tasting my words on his lips...


And than with a growl I felt him kissing me with all the passion and desire..

I could feel the tension now between our breaths..between our lips between our bodies..between our beings..

MUTURE CONTENT AHEAD

The little clothes like my lingering bra my jeans followed by his soon came off..

I felt him sliding down..his little soft stubble rubbing on my breast.. Which forced me to curl my fingers in his hair like my life depended on it..


And the moment his lips followed by his tongue directy made contact with my nipple..i could feel myself like I was inebriated on a heavy drug..

He continued ravishing me with his tongue nibbling me sucking me.. And his hands did their contribution too..

I was moaning in the sweet pleasure which he gave me..

After loving and ravishing both my boob's.. He moved below..

His devilsh tongue now entered my navel..licking every corner of it and than sucking on it too...

By now both my legs were spred wide and he had made his home there inbetween..

Each day with this crazy guy and moreover My man.. I learned a new thing be it about life about love about me or just about him.. And today I learned that Mr. Kidnapper was the Best Lover.. I may not have any experience but the things he was doin to my body were making me see heaven..

The sensations I was feeling all over my body were taking my life and bringing me to life all at a moment...

I felt him kissing my waist line holding me from my waist..and I felt him near me..

I felt his manhood near my womanhood..

The friction so heavy that I left my noisest moan..


He rose his head his desires so visible in his eyes.. But than there was a question too ..and I knew what it was.

To answer it I brought my toes up and guided them on his last clothing sliding them down...

That was the most bold thing I have ever done.. But than who cared...

But if I was bold he was bolder..

Keeping his eyes on me.. His warm hand palmed my womanhood.. Making me moan and arch my back..

The pleasure was soo much I could feel myself wet on his palm..

And again just like that my last clothing left me..

Now we were totally naked.. But he did covered my naked body by his naked one..

Lining up...

Manik-You know we can stop...it will hurt you..

He tried again.. This time with reason.. But I had came to far to go back now..


I curled my one hand around his back and with other I brought his head near me..

And that I kissed him.. Trying to show him my love and my trust..

He did kiss me back.. Moving his lips on mine.. Lickin them.. Ravishing them.. And the moment his tongue entered my mouth he entered me...


Sure I felt the pain.. He had warn me about..

But his kiss stopped my cry.. Kissing the pain away...

And when the pain was replaced by pleasure.. I moved my hips against his giving him the clue.. Which he followed soon..

Our hips moved in a sync.. Our body's moulding toghter.. Our lips playing with each other..

His growls and my moans making the best music..

High.. Low.. We were there...


Feeling him tighten below there I felt myself welcoming to the Orgasm which soon followed by his..

He dropped on the curve of my neck and I welcomed him...

I could smell him on me now..i could feel him inside me now.. I could feel the magic in the air now.. And I could just not define how I felt now..

Nuzzling into him.. I let the exatution take over me.. Dripping into magical world..

But before that I heard a whisper yet defined words..

Manik-i love you Nandini.. I love you so much...


Which I did replied..

Me-i love you too Manik...My Mr. Stranger..

So here it maybe 3 chapters more so no demands just read and enjoy..

Love-Kavya

Ps-I missed this and you all soo much...

PPS-PMS LATER
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow wat a hot sexy update
Manan r back together
Nd Manan confession wow that was owsm

And last bt least expected manan make make out hot sizzling

Plzzz update new part soon

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