MaNan FF - Intehaan :if you could ever love me ch-3/pg-26 19/12/15 - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: diyaNarwal

Wow what a update

Dear
It's just amazing
So manik toh
Love her
But phir se
Mystery
Ladki kon ha yaar
Jaldi bata do
Curiosity
Bad rahi ha ...
Aur ab jaldi update karo ...
Love you
Keep loving
Keep smiling
And
Keep shining For Ur loved ones
Love
Diya😛




Thanks for ur precious comments.
Abhi toh eyes dekha hai phir face phir nam, thodi wait karlo manik itni mehnat kar raha hai pehle use pata chale phir tum sab ko bhi pata chal jayega...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: thamannamanan


mystery gal

dare was superb to sit o n manik s lap n kiss him

manik shocked n surprised

wow


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Edited by Angel_manan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: mairaallauddin

Awesome update

So manik loves nandini but it's confirm whether she is nandini or someone else
Love at first sight
But I want to know who is the girl
Is she nandini or someone else
Superb update
Fab update
Loved it
Loved the update
for the next part
Update the next part soon



Thanks,
wait few more updates for girl name..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: kewlgirl

Gyo

Manik to Gyo😆

M sure d girl is nandu

Nice story

Continue soon
N thnx for d pm



Thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85
Chapter - 2
jab se tere naina mere naino se laage re
jab se tere naine mere naino se laage re

manik was singing and dancing crazily on his bed,
his bed is full of that girls pic

manik:eee finally like finally agter 3 months i saw her
we were this much close ohh godd
if it is a dream na then i dnt wanna woke up
god she was something mann
manik malhotra you are madly in love with her mann

when fab4 enters
cabir:ohh mere majnu pagal ho gya h
aaj srf chehra dekha toh yh haal hai
ki tu hmari shakal bhool gya

kisi ne sahi kaha hai
yhi thi dosti yhi tha pyar beech mein aa gya mystery gal ka deedar

dhruv:haa bhai aap hme whi chor ke bhaage bhaage aa gye

flashback

after that cheating kiss
manik rushes towards secuirty room and who dnt knw manik malhotra
toh with his power he gets her footage
and finally he gets her clear picture
flashback ends
alya:dhruv baby understand
aaj usne usse kitte khareeb mehsus kiya hai
3 mahino baad

mukti:I agree with alya
but manik tu usse dhundhega kse

sometimes the feeling of ek jhalak of your loved one gives you a happiness a million dollar smile crepts on our lips
that happiness which we cnt even describe in words and same was with manik also

manik:dnt worry guys now i will do every damm thing to find her
and woh toh suna hga naa
Good things comes from unexpected place

when fab5 were discussing how to find her

there was someone who was listening their convo

person:well said manik good things come from unexpected places
but sometimes it may come from plans not unxpectedly

person then calls someone
on call
person:time aa gya h
chand ko badal se milane ka
bacche ko apni favroite chocolate dene ka
call cuts
malhotra dont woerry iss baar saaari baazi hamari hongi
barbaad karenge ab hum tumhe

Evening

dhruv:bhai aapne mujhe yeh kaha phasa diya
aana apko tha aur mujhe bhi le aaye

manik:mujhe bhi koi shauk ni h apne pyaar ko dhundne ke bajai m yha time waste kr rha

raj:manik see yeh iyer kitta talented hai hai
you know rohit m isse apni party mein achi post dunga

rohit:haa bhaiya maine bhi kafi tareef suni hai iski
hmari party ko bahot faeda hga isse

dhruv:bhai yh iyer kon h

manik:arre woh h ek acha politician dad hmsha uski bt krte h kya naam h uska sandy mandy happy saddy
arre pta ni yr

its an event organized by mumbaians party
an event for mumbai slum
and the leader of the party is Raj Malhotra

meanwhile
manik:yaar m yeh party chor ke jaa raha hoon
itti boring m going to find information about my girl

dhruv:haa bhai chlo m with you

tbhi a dance performance was announced

Nabhatun aali apsara
Nabhatun aali apsara
Asi sundara saaj sajpura
Aali aali aali
Aali ga aali
Kesa madhi maandla gajra
Lokachya nazara khilya tichyavr..
Aali aali aali
Duniyachi pyaari tu
Agrani harni ga..
Agrani sundara aa...
Aali ga aali
Aali ha aali
Oh Maharani aali
Aga ga ga ga ga ga

(pls plug in the song deewani mastani)
and enters the background girls with a main dancer in btw
and a cool breeze flows around manik
he frozed on his place when he saw the face of main dancer

Nazar jo teri laagi main deewani ho gayi
Deewani haan deewani, deewani ho gayi
Mash'hoor mere ishq ki kahaani ho gayi
Jo jag ne na maani toh maine bhi thaani
Kahaan thi main dekho kahaan chali aayi..
Kehte hain ye deewani Mastani ho gayi

it was like kismat meherban toh banda pehelwaan
same condition was of the great manik malhotra

Mash'hoor mere ishq ki kahani ho gayi
Jo jag ne na maani toh maine bhi thaani
Kahaan thi main dekho kahaan chali aayi..
Kehte hain ye deewani Mastani ho gayi
Deewani haan deewani, deewani ho gayi

he was lost all lost in the dance

meanwhile dhruv msgs fab3 about presence of mystery girl here

dhruv updated his SNS
aaj toh mere bhai ki kismat ne sixer he maar diya and he tagged manik n fab3 in it

Zakham aisa tune lagaya
Deewani, deewani, deewani, deewani ho gayi
Marham aisa tune lagaya
Ruhaani, ruhaani, ruhaani, ruhaani ho gayi
Pehchaan mere ishq ki ab toh
Pehchaan mere ishq ki ab toh
Rawaani, rawaani, rawaani, rawaani ho gayi

back to manik
girl was twiriling around manik and manik was all lost
she keeps her hand on both the shoulders and they share a cute eye lock
that girl does the signature step with a smirk

Ho.. mash'hoor mere ishq ki kahani ho gayi
Kehte hain yeh deewani Mastani ho gayi
Haan deewani, haan deewani, deewani ho gayi
Mash'hoor mere ishq ki kahani ho gayi
Jo jag ne na maani toh maine bhi thaani
Kahaan thi main dekho kahaan chali aayi
Kehte hain ye deewani Mastani ho gayi
Deewani haan deewani, deewani ho gayi

when suddenly all lights gets off
and its only manik and that girl
manik was all lost in her eyes
he was twirling her and she was laughing adding content to his heart

his dream fades when dhruv shooks him
when he realized it was his dream

dhruv:bhai where lost
she is dancing ovr there

manik : haa dhruv this the best day of my life
when he sees ki that girl is going to fall
he runs like manaic and and
and
and
and

and she falls in his arms
and it was like
bs yh lamha yhi tham jaye
it was like
dilwale style
srk kajol

evryone's mouth left open like O

that girl realized their position
and thanked him and left from their

backstage
thankyou so much you saved me
and sorry for morning actually it was a dare
and you knw i hv to do it
so please dnt mind and yeah thankyou for this evening
it seems like we hv some connection ki humlog tbhi toh ek din mein do baar mil liye

manik:itta pheeka thankyou
say it in my style
take it as my dare

girl:your type thankyou
and that to dare
ok
i'll do it

manik smirks
ok so spend a full day with me

so it seems a fairy dream to manik
lekin kbhi kbhi jo jsa dikhta h wsa hta h ni h

and woh toh suna he hga
kisi cheez ko badi shiddat se chaho toh puri kaayenaat usse tumse milane ki saazish karta hai



I know u all want to know who is she????
but manik ne 3month baad face dekha hai so nam k liye thodi or wait toh banta hai . Manik ko thodi or mehnat toh karne do phir nam bhi pata chal jayega. And mehnat manik kare & name tum sab ko pehle pata chale that's not fair so manik k sath tum sab bhi nam jan jaoge...
wait for next Update dekhte hain manik kya kya karta hai apni dream girl ko impress karne k liye... phir nam bhi reveal ho jayga...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86
hehehe
Complete majnu Manik
Thanks for pm
😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87
My concern is

Even if it is nt nandu

Who was d man

Who was planning n plotting

Bdw nice update

Good choice of song

N thnx for d pm

Ps continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88
Nice...
So frm d v bgnng evrythng is prt of a pln..
M dying to kno who d gl is..
Dhrub's status..lol..

Plz updt d nxt prt soon...
N thnx fr d pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#89
I think manik see nandu
N marriage tym pai they'll exchange I mean both girls
Nandu ki jaga vamp bhat jaigy


Awesome



Fab



Nice
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Posted: 9 years ago
#90
Superb update finally manik met her mysterygirl waiting for more revelations thanks for pm

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