MaNan FF - Intehaan :if you could ever love me ch-3/pg-26 19/12/15 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: diyaNarwal

Haye

New story
Wah wah👏👏👏
It's so niceee yaar
Tittle bhi bahot aacha ha
I love it
Par prologue main
Yeh kya kiya😭
Par I knew
Nandani is going to be
A positive character
And she must be soha
Chalo jaldi se
Update karo
Main wait kar rahi hu
...hehe ...
Love you purna
Diya😛



Thank you so much for ur lovely comments.
hum jo dikhte hai or soch te humesha sach nehi hota.
koi positive hai and kon negative e toh kisi ko nahi pata.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
Chapter - 1

Love at first sight it rarely happens when destiny plays its card and unknowingly we meet our life partner our soulmate
jisse phli baar dekh ke lage
yes you are the one for me
and then the real game started for making that person our soulmate our life partner

Good morning delhi people
This is RJ Beeerrraaa
I knw I knw pura delhi jag gya qki mera show ka time jo ho gya h
hihihihi
lekin ek esa insaan h yaa u kahun ek esa romeo hai jo abhi tk apne sapno ke desh mein gaane gaa rha hai apni mystery girl ke sath
Mere Fab5 ke vocalist uth jayiye subah ho gyi
JAAGO MANIK PYAARE

This song for u my romeo

Ek Ladki Ko Dekha To Aisa Laga lyrics
Ho ek ladki ko dekha to aisa laga
Ek ladki ko dekha to aisa laga
Jaise khilta gulaab
Jaise shaayar ka khwaab
Jaise ujli kiran
Jaise van mein hiran
Jaise chaandni raat
Jaise naghme ki baat
Jaise mandir mein ho ek jalta diya
Ho ek ladki ko dekha to aisa laga

On a round king sized bed
a boy of 23 is sleeping on his stomach showing his sexy torso with that stars devil hot tatoo
his hairs messy
with a jerk wakes up by listening MYSTERY GIRL

he searches for his mobile with closed eyes
then sees its wallpaper of blurred pic
Manik tu ek pic bhi theek se ni le paya
kon ho tum aakhr
phli baar mein he pyaar ho gya mujhe tumse

chal raha tha zindagi apni hi raho pe.
kya pata tha iss kambakht dil ko
hogi ek hasin mulakat tujhse.
Teri ek jhalak ne kiya kai hal mera.
din or raat katha hai baas khayalo mai tera...
[sorry for my boring shayeri ]

3 mahine ho gye aaj still their is no sign of urs

but you dont know who is Manik Malhotra
he can do any sort of thing
with this he dailed someone's number

manik:what the heck are you doing from 3 months you stupid
now i dnt want any delay find evry sort of thing about that girl or i'll dig your grave

Now i hv to use my powers

he gets up to freshen up

Hall:
manik:Hello beautiful ladies Good morning

jaldi aa gye bhai aap hme toh lga aaj chutti office ki aaj mystery girl se shaadi krk he aap aaoge
says riya who is coming after manik

(riya manik's cousin sister)

manik:riya bahot bolne lagi hai tu choti maa isko theek krna padhega

anjali:q riya ese koi chidata h tujhe sirf shaadi ka lga hme toh lga honeymoon mana ke ayega

manik eyes popped out

manik:choti maa aap bhi

anjali:kya aap bhi manik tum sapne dekh skte aur hum maze bhi ni le skte

manik:dadi bolo inko kuch

dadi:aur btao manik aaj chehra dikha ki ni
and manik was like
mera kya kasoor h q meri sb le rhe ho

manik:mom aap he kuch kaho

nyonika:ok now stop nobody will say anything to my son
bahot yar krta hai mera beta uss tasveer wali se
itta ki agr woh na mili toh shaadi bhi tasveer se na kar le

manik:how on earth you ppl can tease me like this

dhruv:ksko kon tease kar raha hai bhai

manik:sb tumogo ki wajah se hua h
maine fab5 ko yh sb btaya tha aur tum sb ne innlogo ko bta diya
aur woh cabir puri delhi mein meri story narrate kar raha

dhruv:bhai PYAAR KIYA TOH DARNA KYA

riya:aur kya bhai
pyar karna sbke bass ki baat ni

dhruv:Riya you remember naa
how this mystery girl invented

riya:haa bhai log mandhir puja krne jaate hai

dhruv:aur hamare manik baba pyar karne

all burst into laughter
and manik went into his mystery girl land

1st meeting
When for the 1st time fate unknowingly introduces us to our soul mate
we feel something different
but that feeling we didnt recognize at that time because we are busy
busy admiring the person infront of us
like yash raj films duppate ni udhte
spark ni hte
bass kuch hta h

flashback

dadi dhruv and riya were forcefully dragging manik for some puja in mandhir

all were worshipping while our manik was sitting on the temple stairs and playing temple run

one girl was running behind a boy
but her leg tripped and she fell over manik
puja plate fell somewhere else but its flower showered on manik and that girl
kahin se a dupatta came in btw their faces

manik was continously stairing at that girl
but that girl was trying to get up and finally she manages to get up

and again runs behind that girl

flashback ends

raj:manik where are you lost son

manik who just returned from flashback

manik:no where dad
apologies
i was thinking something

raj:so manik everything well in office right

manik:yeah dad

rohit:if you need any hlp then ask me as nowadays m free
there is no sort of meetings

(rohit:raj's younger brother husband of anjali)

manik:sure chachu
infact i want to discuss some files with you

raj:umm manik you remember we hv to go for a party meeting this sunday evening

manik:ahh dad these meetings are so boring
dhruv will accopany you

raj:no questions you both will accompany us
dhruv glares angrily at manik
while manik shrugged his shoulders as telling what did i do

Infinity mall
dhruv:bhai aapne mera naam q bola
i dnt like these party meetings

manik:as if I am dying to attend them so chill we will somehow escape

dhruv:we'll see
till fab3 arrives i'll shop for myself

manik:yaa you go till then i'll finish some pending work

other side
4 girls were sitting and playing dare

girl1:so miss topper are ready to this dare or not

girl2:esa koi kaam ni jo m na kar saku
now wait and watch

manik was busy doing his work

when his all socket bursted out his everycell burst into pieces
when one girl from nowhere came and sat in his lap manik was sweating evn on the AC temp
All were witnessing this scene
even fab3 also arrived till now but by seeing this scene they were shocked and numb

when manik saw the face his mouth open into O shape

that girl came dangerly close to his lips
manik was breathing heavely
but then she move towards his ear

it was lookng like both are kissing

girl:it was my dare to sit on you lap n kiss you but i'll not kiss you
so dnt freak out afterwards

everyone present in the food court were like
hawww
everyone's food was choked in their oesophagus
suddenly that girl stood up and gave a flying kiss to manik and went away from there

manik was still in shock
he didnt believe
he was that close to his mystery girl

but still he didnt saw her face as he was busy adoring her eyes
small sharp eyes

cabir shool him from his shoulders

cabir:bro what was that and who was her

manik:cabir guys yh wahi thi

dhruv:wahi kon bhai

manik

manik:arre jisse tumlog meri mystery girl khte ho

mukti:so finally aaj tune usse dhang se dekh liya

manik:nahi

everybody was
like 'HAIN'

alya:what do you mean nahi
you kissed her you ppl were this much close

manik agn went to his lalala land

cabir

cabir:gaya
yh chokro tog gya

while something caught manik's eye
and he immediately runs towards there

phewww!done
so now think think and think
and yeah dnt asssume if a girl is topper toh nandini hogi
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
this is not fair yaar ,pura week wait karakar again cliffhanger 😭 plz solve this soon . waiting for next update 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Very interesting dear..loved the begining...so love at first sight n all...i'm loving it... Waiting fr next... Cont. soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
interesting n funny
c i hope n i dont hope dis is nandu
first i hope cause i want manik 2 fall in luv wid her only
second i dont hope dis 2 b her cause i dont want her 2 b bad
so imma confused
plz cntinu
2 dur karing ma confusion
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Nice and interesting story...
Thnx for pm...
Update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Hi dear that was awesome update but i think that girl must be nandini only and do pm me from next parts
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
Awesome update dear
Please update the next part soon
Tqvm for the pm
Take care and stay blessed
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: ankurparmar

this is not fair yaar ,pura week wait karakar again cliffhanger 😭 plz solve this soon . waiting for next update 👏



thodi or intezaar sabar ka fruit sweet hoti hai...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: tas456

Awesome update dear

Please update the next part soon
Tqvm for the pm
Take care and stay blessed



Thanks. I will try to update soon..

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