MaNan FF - Intehaan :if you could ever love me ch-3/pg-26 19/12/15 - Page 14

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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice promo..
And nice cs..
Update soon..
Waiting for pm...
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Posted: 9 years ago
It's awesome ...
Full of suspense
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Posted: 9 years ago
Whats dia mystery yaar
And here in maniks family everybody planning for marriage
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Poushi

full of mystery... ho kya raga ha???suspense aur kitna???feeling scared too...



abhi toh suspense suru huya hai agge agge dekho kya kya hota hai.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sri_valli


thanks for pm dear..read 2 parts in one go dear...manik is too crazy for his mistery girl...and that mystery girl is nandini only( my pov😉)...and may be someone manipulated nandini against manik...so that's y she makes him crazy by dng hide and seek...to make manik go to his knees...this isthe pov of a thinker inside me...😉😉...

Waiting for update eagerly...



next part pe tumhari pov ki result hai dekho.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lovePANI

AAAiii Manik family is already for marriage ..planning n all

I don't want manik n his family to get hurt..
.o..they will be heart broken if they ever come to know...😭

thanx for pm

keep smiling n take care



kisi na kisi ka hurt ho na hi hai.
kaya kar sakte hain..
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Originally posted by: qamarkhan87

Whats dia mystery yaar

And here in maniks family everybody planning for marriage
Update soon



😊
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Originally posted by: hinzi

dude u r makin me nervous

hope dats its nandu bt its not nandu!



next part pe bride ki name hai dekho nandu hai ya nehi.
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Posted: 9 years ago
so its a surprise update

bride name will be revealed

And Aaj ka part mujhse jada Stuti ne likha hai so full part Stuti ki pov se hai and meri sorry humari srk ko dedicated hai hope u all Like it.

Enjoy Reading...


Well a new morning with something good

well manik was beyond happy
his happiness was like
Stuti & Purna meeting shah rukh khan

Har pal meriyaan yadaan
Yadaan vich ae tun
Dil di gal main dassa
Te dassa fir kinnu

and why not also
3 months before he fall for a random girl of whom he didnt evn knw her name
and now all of sudden he met her wherever he goes
so its because of his destiny or some planning plotting

Teri meri, meri teri ik jind'di
Ik jind'di what to do
Jhoomu main naachu main gaaun ke likhun
Tere liye main kya karun

Manik woke up due to constant buzzing of his alarm with alarm tone
"chalo bulava aaya hai mystery girl se milna hai :p"

Dheere dheere se meri zindagi mein aana
Dheere dheere se dil ko churana (churana..)
Tumse pyaar hume hai kitna jaane jaana
Tumse mil kar tumko hai batana

he ruffled his hairs remembering their encounters
their first meet on temple stairs
how she landed over him
how he was lost in her beauty
how he fell for her in that nanosecond

Sham wahi, kaam wahi
Tere bina o sanam
Neend nahi, chain nahi
Tere bina o sanam

their second meet
how she was so close to him
how their breaths were mingling
how her hot breaths were making him crazy
how her sweet voice like cuckoo not even for a second left his ears

Teri meri, meri teri ik jind'di
Ik jind'di what to do?
Jhoomu main nachu main gaaun ke likhun
Tere liye main kya karun

their third meet
how he imagined her dancing with him
how he was again lost in her
how he save her from falling

how they shared cute eyelock
how she thanked him with her ever so sweet thanks how he asked her for a day out with a dare

Dheere dheere se meri zindagi mein aana
Dheere dheere se dil ko churana (churana..)
Tumse pyaar hume hai kitna jaane jaana
Tumse milkar tumko hai batana

manik pov
wahe guru 3 mahine mein puri zindagi bdal gayi
mujhe ek esi ldki se pyaar ho gaya hai jiska mujhe naam tak naa pta
jo bhi ho i'll propose her today

Teri meri story jaise Big Bang Theory
Main sunaun chori-chori ye sab ko
Tu mujhse door main yahan pe majboor
Shikva karun main ye Rabb ko (Rabb ko..)
Ek din tum bin beete lage saal
Mera hua bura haal
Mera hua bura haal
Haal kabhi apna mujhe to bataao na
Aur laut kar wapas kabhi mere paas aao na

manik was taking shower or rather dancing with crazy moves and making hand shower as his mike

Sota hoon kabhi rota hoon
Tere bina o sanam
Paa kar sab kuch khota hoon
Tere bina o sanam

whole room was messed up like kabadkhana
just for mere date
manik malhotra is crazy like srk toh think what will happen when they will got married

Teri meri meri teri ik jind'di
Ik jind'di what to do?
Jhoomu main naachun gaaun ke likhun
Tere liye main kya karun
Dheere dheere se meri zindagi mein aana
Dheere dheere se dil ko churana (churana..)
Tumse pyaar humein hai kitna jaan-e-jaana
Tumse mil kar tumko hai batana
Tumse mil kar tumko hai batana
Tumse mil kar tumko hai batana..

manik move downstairs
where 4 most important ladies of his life were chit chatting

Riya:omg bhai you are looking outstanding mtlb freaking hot
she winks

actually manik was wearing
white shirt with black trousers of shirt two buttons open and his famous smirk and black shades <3 :*

dadi:jaa manik puttar ho mere hne wali bahu aaj tu apna bna he le
I love you bol he daal

manik ke shocket udaa

riya:dadi chill date hai shaadi ni aap zyada over xcited naa ho

dadi:arre xcited q naa ho mere handsome munde ko finally uska pyar mil gya

riya:bhai you love her this we know but what about her

anjali:huh!esi koi ldki ni jisse mera manik pasand ni aye
dekhna ek din mein uss mystery girl ko manik se pyar ho jna h

nyonika:M teh aaj he apni designer ko indian outfits ke liye bula lungi
an intezaar ni hota

manik beta jaa jee le apni zindagi
(aaj kl srf srk chaya hua h har jagah...stuti)
manik:ohho lovely ladies aap log itta aage q jaa rhe ho let me go and enjoy my date
uske baad you all flaunt what ever you want
m chala tata and gave flying kiss to all

other side
p1:already humne bahot intezaar kiya hai
isliye tumhare pass yh last chance hai
p2:pta h mujhe bs aaj koi gadbadd na ho
p3:tum chinta mt kro m bhi honga tumhare sath
bs you be confident

Manik was going sit in his car when fab4 hopped on him

manik with utter shock:dnt say guys tum log bhi aane wale ho

cabir:ni manik baba hum toh apko all the best bolna aye the

mukti:haa manik aaj itts important din h tere liye

dhruv:q bhai agar hum aye toh kya problem h apko
manik:kya kehna chahte ho tum log
alya:forget it manik
you go and win your girl heart
all the best

two ppl on phn
p1:haa woh ghar se nikal chuka hai
its high time kuch gadbad ni honi chahiye aur shak toh bilkul ni

p2:you dnt worry we will follow them
today will be the first step towards our victory
p1:it should be

after hanging up the call

malhotra you people have to pay
you people will surely pay your each tear will be my happiness

In mall
woh ayegi
woh ni ayegi
woh ayegi
woh ni ayegi
woh ayegi
ni woh ayegi

someone tapp his shoulders

Tujhe dekha toh yeh jaana sanam pyaar hota hai deewana sanam
ab yaha se kahan jaye hum
teri baahon mein mar jayein hum

as soon he turns

everything stopped for him
he was again lost many ppl with voilin guitar were standing behind him and playing this song
(I knw bahot filmy ho rha hai but i cnt stop myself
aaj kl mere aur purna ke dimag mein srf aur srf SRK basa hua h...stuti)

Girl shaked him from shoulders

manik:So you are finally here

girl:yeah just coz of dare

manik like a true gentleman offers her a seat

girl:so now did you accpt my thankyou

manik:not now but on one condition

girl frowms:what condition

manik:tell me your name n i'll accpt your thankyou
girl:jo tumhara dil kare bula lo

manik:arre ese kse we are on a day out atleast naam toh pta hna chahiye

girl:so you wanna say we are on a date
ok impress me and I will tell you my name

manik:impress
girl:q darr gye haar gye

manik:dont you knw manik malhotra kisi se ni darta and he never loses
bus darta hai toh iss cheez se ki kahin tum mujhse dur naa ho jao
he says this straightly looking in her eyes

they share a deep eyelock

their cute sa moment was toding by message tone of girl's mobile

girl:ok so impress me then

manik:ok come
girl:kha

manik:arre come naa


manik took her to the ground floor

soft toy shop
their he buys her a big big big sbse badda wala teddy bear

manik:so I dont know how to impress a girl but still m trying hope you like it
he gives that teddy bear to her
You knw when I first saw you in that moment in that very second i fell for you
you just look like a cute doll but gifting a doll girl a doll is unfair as it will be nothing infront of you
thought bear is also nothing but whenever you will see it naa it will remind you of me
and when at ngt you will sleep cuddling him you will get my warmth so this teddy will remind you of me
and after this if we will not meet then forever i'll be with you in the form of bear

Girl was all lost in his pure confession

then he dragged her in a jewellary shop
he bought a pair of anklets
manik:the sweet sound of this anklet will always remind you of my voice
whenever you will wear them naa you will feel m always beside you no matter what


girl was slowly falling for him
(Is it so???)


Main Koi Aisa Geet Gaun
Ki Aarzoo Jagaunn
Agar Tum Kahoo
Main Koi Aisa Geet Gaun
Ki Aarzoo Jagaunn
Agar Tum Kaho..oo

next he took her to clothes section

and gifted a white and royal blue colur ghagra choli

manik:this is my fvrt colour though this dress is nothing in front of you but when you will wear it naa it will become priceless
I always wanted to see you in this type of dress
so here m giving you
whenever you will wear it naa just let your hairs free
you

look like an angel
an angel from heaven
even waha ki angels bhi tumhare saamne kuch ni

girl was astonished as how just in few meetings someone can understand anyone so lovingly

Main Koi Aisa Geet Gaun
Ki Aarzoo Jagaunn
Agar Tum Kahoo
Main Koi Aisa Geet Gaun
Ki Aarzoo Jagaunn
Agar Tum Kaho..oo

next he took her to the shoes section
their he gifted her a off cream colured heels

manik:I dnt want your delicate feet to get hurt in anyway
if it would be in my hand i would spread roses and only roses in your pathway

unaware of fact that roses come along thorns

but for now m gifting you these sandals
which is nothing in front of you but when you will wear them they will look beautiful on you
because you wore them

Tumko Bulaun
Ye Palkhe Bichaun
Kadam Tum Jahan Jahan Rakho..oo
Zameen Ko Aasman Banaun
Sitaro Se Sajaun
Agar Tum Kaho..oo

next he took her toh centre of mall on ground floor
from where red roses showers on her from above

girl was speechless
she nvr xpected someone to be this much romantic

manik went on his knees
manik:I dnt knw whether m successful or not
in impressing you but today i wanna say you something...
Nandini
girl cut him in middle
girl:my name is Nandini

phewww ovr with this
full on Manan
well nxt prt will also be manan
if you will comment long and xpress your reviews

so enjoy this update...

tata
love yaa
stuti & purna

Edited by Angel_manan - 9 years ago

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