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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys so here I am with chapter 2 hope you like it
Chapter 2:

Navya and Nandini finally reached where they belong Mumbai the city of dreams, well they think they belong here, but the question is do they belong her will Mumbai help them fulfil their dreams or will Mumbai be the place where their dreams shatter and break. What has fate stored for these two sisters who left everything just for their dreams?

Recap: Manik and Cabir found their new prey aka new obsession in Nandini and Navya.

S.P.A.C.E Academy

Navya and Nandini were standing outside their first class and were about to enter both were really excited because slowly there are coming close to their dream of being famous singers. "Nandu we are finally here in Mumbai's most famous music academy" said a very excited Navya. "Ya di I can't believe we are finally so close to our dreams" said Nandini. As Nandini and Navya were talking they heard a voice "Hi girls are you new here" said the voice. "Um ya we are actually it's our first day" said Nandini. "Oh that's great oh how rude of me I didn't even introduce myself and started talking hey I am Aryaman" said Aryaman. "Hey I am Navya and she is Nandini" says Navya. "So are you guys waiting for someone" asked Aryaman. "No why you ask" said a curious Nandini

"Well you guys are standing outside the class not going in" said Aryaman. "Oh actually this is Nandini's class I am going to my class now so see you bye Nandini" says Navya. "Bye di take care" said Nandini. "Ya ok than bye Aryaman nice meeting" said Navya. "Bye Navya feelings are mutual" said Aryaman. After Navya left Aryaman said "So are you planning to spend your first day here in the corridor well it's not a bad idea but I don't think you want to miss your first lecture am I right or am I right". "Aryaman" shouted Nandini, than both laughing went in the class not knowing two pair of eyes watching them of course who else can it be Mr Manik Malhotra. "Oh so Aryaman trying to snatch my prey uh uh I am not going to tolerate that, so Miss Nandini is here to fulfil her dreams ha, Nandini you have something in you which makes me want to torture you more so let's go start the torture and deal with this bloody Aryaman" says Manik to himself.

As both Nandini and Aryaman were talking in there their professor enters while ll All get up to say good morning get shocked to see Manik entering the class. Nandini was confused see all these shocked faces so she asked Aryaman "Aryaman why are all of you shocked see a person coming in class". "Nandini the person entering the class is Manik Malhotra S.P.A.C.E's trustee Nyonkia Malhotra's son whenever him or his brother Cabir enter a classroom than everyone knows that a girl is about to get ruined" says Aryaman. Hearing this Nandini gets a bit scared but then assures herself that out of all these girls she will not be his target hopefully. "Oh Mr Manik Malhotra finally decided to attend a class" said the professor looking at Manik. "Oh come on I think everyone knows why I am here I have gotten myself a new prey profs so you just chill and take you class and let me do what I am here for otherwise you know what I am capable of right?" said Manik in a very arrogant tone.

"Manik just go and take a seat" said the professor. "Sure thing anything for my dear dear dear teacher" said Manik sarcastically. Manik than walked up to were Aryaman and Nandini were sitting and said "Hey you what's your name ya Aryaman right?" A nervous Aryaman replies "Y-Yes". "Ok now will you do yourself a favour and go sit somewhere else" said Manik with his famous smirk. "Umm ya sure" said Aryaman while going Aryaman gave Nandini a good-luck look. After Aryaman left Manik came and sat next to a very nervous Nandini, while everyone in the class knew who Manik's next prey was.

While on the other hand Navya was about to enter her class room when someone came in front of her blocking her way it was none other than our very own Cabir. "Excuse me can you please move I need to go in I am already late" said a nervous Navya. "Hey are you nervous" asked Cabir with a smirk on his face. "Why will I be nervous huh?" said Navya getting a little angry. "Woah so miss nervous is also miss feisty" said Cabir. "What do you want and who are" said Navya getting really annoyed. "Oh you don't know me that's sad oh well let me introduce myself, myself Cabir" said Cabir. "Ok Cabir now can you please move" said Navya rudely. "Come on Navya I am being so nice to you and you are being so rude miss Navya I'm going to give you a free advice don't try to ran from me or be rude to me because from now wherever you go you will find me and tell this to your darling sister as well that wherever she goes she will find my brother Manik" said Cabir coming close to Navya who was stepping back and finally hit a wall.

"What's happening here" said a voice making both Cabir and Navya turn around taking the opportunity Navya runs in the class leaving an angry Cabir behind. "Cabir I am asking you something what the hell was going on here" said the voice. "Raghav, Raghav, Raghav how many times do I have to tell you not to interfere in my life just focus on your damn classes unless you're not interested in staying in S.P.A.C.E as a teacher" said an angry Cabir. "Cabir I am focusing on my class this what you're doing scaring a student from my class that to outside my classroom so it is my matter" said an annoyed angry. "Raghav looks like you don't like you job huh that's why you keeping interfering in mine and Manik's matters but Professor Raghav get one thing straight next time you interfere it won't be good for you" saying that Cabir goes in the class and Raghav says "Oh god please help those girls who are the new target of these monster brothers. The screen splits on NavNi's worried faces and ManBir's smirking faces.

Precap: Classroom torture

Ok so finally done with Chapter 2 tell me who it was if you want PM's send me a buddy request

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update.. both manbir r monsterss... poor navni... update soon... n if possible a long one plzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Eagerly waiting for the next update
Let the torture begin

M really curious to know what manbir will do

Continue soon

N thnx for d pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Gosh! This is soo good. Loved it. Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Poor navni

But I don't know abt navay

abt nandu she's strong manik baba ko punch toh dagiii



Awesome





Mind blowing




Fab




Nxt please



Tnx 4 pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: aishubangia

Nice update.. both manbir r monsterss... poor navni... update soon... n if possible a long one plzz

Hey glad you liked the update
Next time will try to update longer 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: kewlgirl

Eagerly waiting for the next update

Let the torture begin

M really curious to know what manbir will do

Continue soon

N thnx for d pm

Hey trust me you will love the torture
Will update soon 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: Maramkhan

Gosh! This is soo good. Loved it. Update soon

Thanks glad you liked the update
Will update soon😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: epshitatabassum

Poor navni

But I don't know abt navay

abt nandu she's strong manik baba ko punch toh dagiii



Awesome





Mind blowing




Fab




Nxt please



Tnx 4 pm

Your right Nandini will do something like that but Navya won't stay behind 😉
And thanks for all these compliments
Will update soon😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80
Nyc update
Manbir will now torture navni feeling bad for them
Update soon.
Eagerly waiting for next update 😊

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