Manan FF - 50 Shades of Grey- Chapter 2 Page 11 - Page 13

Originally posted by: nusrat300895

Nice story
Intersting concept
Cabir ko bhi monster bana diya
😃

Hey glad you liked story 😊
And ya Cabir is a monster as well
thought to make our love guru a monster 😉

waiting for the update dear
pm me
sorry not able to send buddy request
plz send me the buddy request and pm me too

Originally posted by: lovePANI

<font size="4">sorry for late...</font>

<font size="4">damn network..</font>

<font size="4">Thanx for pm</font>

<font size="4">Nice update...</font>

<font size="4">How bad brothers they r..thinking to torture..</font>

<font size="4">how rudely they behave with teachers...</font>

<font size="4">Poor nandu n navya..</font>

<font size="4">Glad to see navy courageous...</font>

<font size="4">Hmmm it will be interesting to read further..</font>

<font size="4">how they will fall for each other...</font>

<font size="4">m sacred will nandu n navya be able to reciprocate their love.</font>

<font size="4">till now its obsession but later will turn into love eventually...</font>

<font size="4">looking forward for their 50 shades of grey...😉</font>

<font size="4">keep smiling n take care.</font>

Hey glad you commented and liked the update
The brothers are going to keep getting bad
Very soon love will happen and obsession will take a new name

Originally posted by: varsha03

MONSTER MANBIR 😕
POOR NAVNI

WHAT WILL BE MANBIR NEXT STEP
HOPE NAVNI FIGHTBACK

FIRST TIME SEEING CABIR IN THAT BAD CHARACTER CURIOUS TO KNW MORE ABOUT HIS CHARACTER

NICE STORY
PLS UPDATE SOON

Trust me you will like Manbir next time
To know if Navni will fight back you have to keep reading
And I am really excited in writing Cabir as a dark character

Originally posted by: Sofiafarooq

Superb. U r writing awesome.
Poor innocent Nandu and hot possessive lover.
Ur story name is awesome and is very suitable for manik's dark character.
Nice choice of name.
Aryaman ko bajaa daaly ga manik malhotra. 😆
In start at train station there were few lines that both sisters might pay heavy price to fulfil their dreams.
Those lines were awesome and heart touching.
I'm excited to read what Nandu have to pay for her dreams.
Amazing.
Come back soon with next update.

Your right poor Nandu and overly possessive lover
Glad you liked the name
And now no one can save Aryaman from Manik
Thanks for liking my lines it means a lots to me

Wowww such an amazing story yr

I really love dark stories

Congrats sweetheart for ur new story

U have great writing skills keep it up dear

Omg Wats gonna happen with nandu, navya

Hope manik, cabir bohot horrible na ho

God save them
He he

Do pm me

With loads of love and wishes
Vidhi

really interesting

Originally posted by: Vidhiarora1

Wowww such an amazing story yr

I really love dark stories

Congrats sweetheart for ur new story

U have great writing skills keep it up dear

Omg Wats gonna happen with nandu, navya

Hope manik, cabir bohot horrible na ho

God save them
He he

Do pm me

With loads of love and wishes
Vidhi

comment by mistake Sorry

Please update