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Posted: 9 years ago

Thank you SooO much Guys for ur lovely comments and likes...oh god ...100 pages itni jaldi ...well thank you SooO much for that ...so finally I come up with ur new year gift ...I hope you guys like it ...ENJOY😛

PART-3 (A)



Manik stops the car in front of murthy's farm house ...he looked at nandani ... .who was sleeping peacefully...he smiled and picked nandani in his arms and went towards her room...he gently placed her in the bed...and was about to go ...but nandani was holding his shirt collor tightly ...he smiled and trying to remove but she didn't let him do ...her grip became tighter ...he signed and kissed her forehead and lay besides her ...nandani was hugging him tightly...he smiled...and soon drifted into sleep ...

NEXT MORNING (THE D' DAY)-

Nandani was the first one who wake up ...due to feeling something heavy around her Waist ...she tried to remove it with closed eyes but couldn't ...at last ...she opened her eyes lazily ...and saw manik who was sleeping beside her and his hand around her Waist ...she immediately get off from his grip .and get up from the bed
...she was staring at manik shockingly ...

Nandani Pov :

Yeh yaha kya kar raha ha ...kar toh thik ha ...par mere saath soo kyu raha ha ...gosh ...mujhe kuch bhi yaad kyu nahi ha ...wait kal hua kya tha ...

Nandani was thinking all this ...manik too get up feeling something missing ...he opened his eyes and saw nandani who was in front of her with confused expression ...he smilingly said

Manik smilingly said : Good morning my kishmish ...

After listening manik voice Nandani too came out of trance ...and looked at him who was lovingly looking at her ...

Nandani stammeringly said : Tum ...tum ...yaha kya kar rahe ...ho ...

Her question bring a smirk on manik's face ...so he said ...

Manik smirkingly said : don't u knew what happened last night ...

Nandani nodded her head as no like a cute kid ...manik just went Awww over her ...but he control himself and make a innocent face and said

Manik innocently said : Scriously u didn't remember anything my barbie doll (😉)

Nandani shockingly said : what...what ... barbie doll

Manik innocently said : Arre see am ur teddy bear and u r my barbie doll ...tumhi ne toh kaha tha ...(😉)

Nandani innocently said : maine kaha tha ...

Manik makes innocent face nodded his head as yes and said : hmmm...

Nandani was thinking all this ...and makes cute cute face...manik was just enjoying all her expression ...

Manik : kya hua kuch bhi yaad nahi ha ...

Nandani put her both hands on her head bcz now its paining a lot ...that makes manik worried ...he immediately get up from the bed and make her sit on the bed ...

Manik worriedly said : kishmish are u okay ...tumhara sar bahot dard ho raha ha ...

She nodded her head as yes ...he quickly go out ...and in a minute came back with a lime water ...and a painkiller..and give it to her ...

Manik : kishmish ese pilo ...u will feel better...aur hangover bhi chala jayega ...

He makes her drink lime water and medi. ...after sometime she feels better ...but manik was still worried for her ...

Manik worriedly said : kishmish now u r okay naa ...

Nandani smiled a little and said : am fine manik ...

Manik signed a relief and said

Manik : Thank God ...and please from now on don't drink much ...

Nandani innocently said : but I never drink

Manik raised his eye brows and said

Manik scarcastically said : oh really toh votka ke 20 shots kya maine piye the ...

Nandani shockingly said : what ...votka ...20 shots ...maine ...

Manik smilingly said: jii haaa ...

Nandani panically said : Aayappaa ...shit...god ...what did I do ...

She looked at manik ...who was looking at her ...a drop of tear fell from her eyes

Nandani :maine tumhe bahot pareshan kiya hoga naa ...am sorry ...

Manik cupped her face and wiped her tears and lovingly said

Manik lovingly said : arre ...why are u crying ...relax naa baba ...and why these tears ...tumhe pata ha ...tum mujhe kabhi pareshaan kar hi nahi sakti ...kyunki tum toh meri kishmish ho ...my sweet si ...innocent si ...meri barbie doll ...

Nandani smiled at the same time blushed too ...manik saw this and smirks ...

Manik smirkingly said : vaise u knew what ...from now on u don't need teddy bear while sleeping😉

Nandani eyes widened by listening this ...he came close to her ears ...and huskily said

Manik huskily said : kyunki aaj ke baad toh main am ur teddy bear for life time kishmish😉

Nandani was completely red bcz she knows his double meaning talks ...she doesn't said anything ...While manik smirks looking at her condition ...

Manik smirkingly said : Bye my barbie doll ...ab mujhe jaanana hoga ...kyunki abhi jaaunga tabhi toh tumhe hamesha ke liye ...matlab ...ki ...tum apne teddy bear ke saath reh paaungi ...😉

Nandani blushed harder by this ...manik smiled ...he kissed her forehead and said

Manik lovingly said : bye

Nandani : hmm ...😳😛

Manik teasingly said : what hmm say bye naa tabhi toh main jaunga ...

Nandani kissed his cheek and lovingly said

Nandani smilingly said : bye ...come soon ...😳😛

Manik smilingly left from there ...nandani too went to the washroom for freshen up ...


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MALHOTRA MENSION -

Manik reached malhotra mansion bcz now its 6:00 am ...so he was relaxed no one will see him ...he hurriedly came out of the car and run towards his room but stops by listening someone voice ...manik turned and saw cabir who was smirking and druv who was lost somewhere ...

Manik mumbled : MAR GAYE

Cabir smirkingly said : voh toh tu vaise bhi gaya ...

Manik shockingly said : haa kya ...kuch kaha tunee ...

Cabir smirkingly said : haa kaha naa kaha tha tu saari raaattt😉

Manik nervously said : voh main nandani ...nandani ko ...ko drop karne gaya tha ...

Cabir smirkingly said : drop karne ... ek baat bata uske ghar ka raasta 20 min. Se 5 hours kaise ho gaya haa ...😉

Manik stammeringly said : voh ...voh ...

Cabir teasingly said : haa ...haa bol bol ...kyu druv ...😉

Cabir looked at druv who was lost somewhere or should I say in someone thoughts ...manik too noticed this ...he came towards him and worriedly said

Manik worriedly said : buddy u okay naa ...kya hua ...

Druv absent mindedly said : ISHQ

Cabir slapped his forehead and dramatically said : HAYE RAAM YEH SAARE MAJNU MERI HI KISMAT MAIN KYU DE DIYE ...EK KAM THA JO DUSRA BHI AA GAYA ...

Manik and druv looked at him angrily and said : SHUT UP !!!

Cabir dramatically said: KISSI NE SAHI HI KAHA HA ...HAR EK FRIEND KAMINA HOTA HA ...LELA MIL GAYI TOH DOST KO SHUT UP BOL RAHE HO ...GHOR KALYUG HA BHAI ...GHOR ...

Mandruv giggled by listening his dramatic talks and left from there ...

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Manik was standing in front of the mirror ...he looking not less a Greek God ...cabir came towards him and teasingly said

Cabir : tumhe pata ha druv yeh duniya ka pehla esa bakra ha jo halal hone ke liye itna besabra ha ...😉

Manik glared at him and again gelling his hairs ...then he saw something which brings a smirk on his face and said

Manik innocently said: Toh kya keh raha tha tu bakra an all ...sachme kya shaadi itni buri cheez ha ...

He asked so innocently no one could ever doubt on his intentions ...cabir too said

Cabir : Aur nahi toh kya 3 saal se teri behan ne mera khun pee kar rakha ha ...patah ha kya main toh kehta hu bhag jaa ...varna tera bhi mere jaisa haal hoga ...har baat pe sorry bolna ...I love u bolo...surprise gift doo ...sachme main toh tang aa gaya ...

As soon as he finished ...Navya came and twisted his ears and angrily said

Navya angrily said : kya kaha tumne ...main tumhe bahot pareshan karti hu ...shaadi mat karo ...aur kya keh rahe the gifts haa ...koi baat nahi main tumhari galati sudhar deti hu ...aaj ke baad tumhari mere room main entry band...

After listening this cabir eyes were became big like socket and horrifiedly said

Cabir horrifiedly said : Baby sorry main toh mazak kar raha tha ...sach me ...

Navya angrily said : par main mazak nahi kar rahi ...Don't u dare come close to me ...

Navya left from there ...Cabir looked at manik who giggled and smirks ...

Cabir : Dekh lunga tujhe saale ...

Cabir too left from there for MISSION MANAO NAVYA ...

Both manik and druv gave hi - five to each other and laughed loudly...

Soon Manik came downstairs navya does tika rasam and makes him wear sehra ...and after sometime all left for murthy mension ...

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MURTHY MENSION -

Nandani was sitting in front of the mirror ...she was smiling on something ...a guy entered her room and said

Guy : Maine toh suna tha ki Jab ladki ki shaadi hoti ha bahot nervous hoti ha ...roti bhi bahot ha ...par yaha toh system hi ulta ha ...😉

Nandani looked at him and about to say something but her friend aisha came and teasingly said

Aisha : Bhai kya kabhi aapne kissi ladki ko bina jane voh kon ha kiss kiya ha 😉

Nandani looked at her with big eyes and blushed ...


Bhai confusingly said:Nahi

Aisha : kya aapne dusri hi meeting pe uss ladki se pyaar ka izhaar kiya ha😉

Bhai horrifiedly said : bilkul bhi nahi ...aare koi dusri hi mulakat maim pyaar ka izhaar kaise kar sakta ha

Nandani blushed remember how he told her that usse ishq ha mujhse ...her cheeks became more red ...and aisha who enjoyed her condition and smirkingly said

Aisha : kya aapne koi esi love story suni ha jaha par shaadi ho rahi ho aur propose naa kiya ho ...😉

Bhai confusingly said: hai ...kya esi koi love story ha ...

Aisha smirkingly said :hoti ha bhai ... Phir aap nahi samjhege bahot hi romantic love story ha ...😉

Nandani was like a red tamato now ...and said

Nandani : Aisha please yaar stop it...😳😉

Aisha teasingly said : Arre why should I stop bolo naa barbie doll ...why should I😉

Guy looked both of them confusingly And said

Guy : yeh tum log kis baare main baat kar rahe ho ...

Nandani nervously said : kuch nahi abhi bhai ...she just kidding ...right aisha

Nandani gave her pleading look to which she smirks

Aisha : yaah abhi bhai ...yeh sahi keh rahi ha ...we are toh just kidding kyu barbie doll😉

Nandani looked here and there ...to hide her blushing face ...abhi came towards her and kissed her forehead and hold her both hands

Abhi : u knew doll ...ek bhai ke liye uski behen ki khushiyan sabse important hoti ha ...and I can see how much happy u r with this wedding ...that glow which is in ur face tells everything ...Always stay like this doll ...kyunki iss bhai ke liye teri khushi se badhkar aur kuch bhi nahi ha ...

Nandani smilingly hugged abhi and said : I knew bhai and I love you ...

Abhi smilingly said : love you too my doll ...

Suddenly they listened some voice who is saying BARAT AA GAYI ...nandani heartbeat became faster and her face became crimson Red ...

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Manik was sitting on the mandap ...but his eyes were stuck on the entrance ...cabir came towards him and said in his ears

Cabir : Abbe saale thoda sabr kar aa jayegi teri lela ...😉

Manik rolled his eyes and ignore him while navya was throwing shooting dragers on cabir to which he gave her pleading look ...and druv was as usual lost in his lady love thought ...there thought were broken by Pandit jii

Pandit : Kanya ko bulaiye ...

Manik smiled by this ...(writter pov:MAN MAIN LADOO FUTA )

Manik Pov :

Waah agar zindagi main pandit ne kuch accha kaam kiya ha toh voh dirf do hi ha ...ek toh meri shaadi meri kishmish se kara raha ha ...aur fusra finally main meri kishmish dekh paaunga ...Thank you pandit jii


Soon nandani came ...manik was just looking at her without blinking ...she was wearing red lehnga ...her waist was clearly visible ...she didn't took heavy jewelry ...she wears a diamond set ...which was very elegant ...her red lips ...eyes ...and her blushing cheeks ...these things makes nothing but makes her beauty increase ...increase ...she was just looking like an angel ...his angel ...soon Nandani sit beside him ...manik clearly see how much nervous she was ... he holds his hand ...nandani looked at him ...he gave her assuring smile ...they exchanged there varmala's...nandani father did her kanyadan ...Manan takes seven vows ...by holding each other hand ...manik filled nandani's mang by red powder to which she closed her eyes ...then makes her wear her nupital chain ...manik looked at nandani who was looking at him ...both shared a cute eye lock which was broken by Pandit jii ...

Pandit : Vivah sampan hua ...ab aap apne bado ka aashirwad le lijiye ...

Manik gives nandani his hand she smiled and hold his hand and get up ...both takes blessings by nandani's parents ...Navya and cabir both hugged them ...manik came closer to nandani ear

Manik : congratulations Mrs. KISHMISH Malhotra😉

Nandani looked at him and blushed a little and said

Nandani : congratulations to u too Mr. Teddy bear Malhotra ...😉


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Phwww ...done ...sachi main guys ...mujhe khud nahi pata maine kya likha ha shaadi waale part main...abhi hui nahi naa ...shayad issiliye ...hehe ...I hope aap logo ko pasand aaya ho ...chalo ab last part bacha ha ...so if u guys like it ...do hit the like button And comment on it Too ...
And I want long long comment ...kyunki aaj maine bahot long update ki ha ...
And this is for silent reader's agar aap logo ne comments nahi kiye toh next update main late dungi...soch lo ...aur comment karo dher saare ...
HAPPY NEW YEAR GUYS
LOVE YOU ALL
TAKE CARE
Keep loving
Keep smiling
And
Keep shining For Ur loved ones
Love
Diya😛

Edited by diyaNarwal - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aww love it,
mere teddy ki kishmish.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow awesome update...
Manan slept together...
Manik is soo mch caring...
Nandu found his teddy bear...
O the d day is here...
Both r soo happy to be with each other...
Poor cabira phas gaya...
Nandu is blushing soo mch...
Luved bro sis talk...
Manan is finally married...
Luved it...
Cant wait for nxt update...
update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update continue soon take care
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Posted: 9 years ago
Too cute..loved the update..continue soon..!;)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful update..
Finally they are married congratulation to Mr. n Mrs malhotra..😃😃

nandu got off from the bed

jaisi ki she was sleeping with some stranger

for 1 sec she scared me😆

In both family..

everyone is expert in teasing...😆

Bichare dulha dulhan ko na hi chod raha..

behan dulhan ko

And jija apne sala ko 😆😆😆

conversation between nandu n abhi was so sweet😊

Ho poor cabir ..kya mast punishment diya...

So cute Miss kismish n Mr teddy bear..😊

keep smiling n take care


Edited by lovePANI - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow the update is awesome & cute... Waiting for the next update... plz plz update soon.
Edited by Sweetsuraiya2 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aww kishmish and teddy bear. ...
Loved them...
Haha manik ne apna badla le liya
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey dear awedome update finally manan married wat a jodi teddy and kismis they are to cute pls update next part soon and wish a happy new year u also
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey diya
Awesome update
Very cute one
Kishmish n Teddy bear Wah kya pyaar hai
Manik in full mood to tease nandani
Making her nervous like hell😆
He was enjoying every cute little expression of nandani.😉

Nandani is like a cute doll his Barbie Doll.
Hehe 20 shots of VODKA. GOSH !!!!!

Cabir toh Manik ke ajkal main phas Gaya.
Abh pata chalega Cabir beta, sabko tease karta rahega hai
Abh Bari Teri hai. Good one Manik.👏🤣

So finally the D Day came
Manik was so desperate to get married to nandani.
Before she changes her mind . Hehehe
And finally they were married.
Mr. & Mrs. Malhotra congratulations.👏

Happy new year Diya
God bless u.
Have fun.

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