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Originally posted by: sneha_glamarous
hey hello once again...
read ur this story too in one go... I'm so happy n satisfied aftr reading this amazing stuff...
u r amazing as a writer... don't stop writing...
kya bolun tumhare baare mein...
itne ache se u hv written each n every dialogues of everyone... justified everyone's role n character efficiently...👍🏼 👏
in love ❤️ with ur writing skills... specially cabirz lines r sooo hilarious...
some of the points which i like rather which i cn tell u r written below... n believe me they r more than these but some of them only i would b able to mention...
but that doesn't mean i didn't like rest of them...
hv a look...RANDOMLY...
whn cabir hd gone wid his mom...
Cabir's msg in our whatsapp group id " finally my mata ki chowkey is over and I am returning to you guys..."
cabir surprised entry ...
"Aree to give you some pyar vara Jor ka jhatka. " Cabir replied in his sarcastic tone...
manbir in prop shop...
"What the hell man. Bhaiya items lane ke liye Kaha. item ka pura khandan nahi... cabir n his non stop ranting...👏👏
n whn manik absent mindedly asked him to ask 4m nandu irrespective of the fact tht she z nt with them... n cabirz reply... ohh my god dammn funny...
"What the hell man. Bhaiya items lane ke liye Kaha.
Item ka pura khandan nahi.
cabirs taunts on manik... "leave it chor. Tere bus ki baat nehi hai yeh samajhna. It's for higher level not for higher height. "😆 😆
for a chng whn suddenly nandu starts singing song rather taunts him by singing... Nandu comment on manik in d car... "Jia jale ja jale ..." to irritate him... superab 👏👏
nandu nature lovd it in difficult tym also she doesn't want any one to get harm ...hehee
--- Nandini pov --'
Aaiyaappa pls tsunami, cyclones , earthquake kuch v start kar dijiye to hide me from Manik. No no no... only to hide me haan. Don't harm others... awww 😊😊😃
cabirz song list... he should participate in antakshri... definitely he z gonna win as he hs song ready for every situation...
intehaaa ho gayi intejaar ki... Aayi na kuch khabar mere yaar ki. ..." Sang Cabir many more...😆😉
whn manik becomes truly lost at tht situation he z not able to understand any simple thing also like...
okk then shoot " said nandu crossing her hands against her chest.
" shoot ? Whom. ?" manik confusedly asked.
" idiot. With your bloody words. " nandu was irritated... lolzz shoot he thought gun shooting... lolzz👏
"Yeah dragon bani devi maa kabse."...funny line... evn i thought d same whn nyo praised nandu at musical function...
n whn she punched manik...
Well...I guess Nandini punched him because he said that very lately.. n he took alot of time...
yayiee i wd right...
Very beautifully wrote their confession part... Was craving for it from long tym... I ws toh lyk whn will they r gonna confess it yaar...😊
"Wohhhohhh... veja tha 'hum sath sath hai' hone but aagaye tum do no 'ek duje k liye 'banke ?"...
Love cabirz ol dialogues... It adds humor in d story...😆
Loved nandu selfless nature... "No actually ... Manik Cabir and Navya we did it together. So credit goes to them also na..." said nandu... coz she didn't wanted to showoff herself... one more reason to say abt her selfless nature...
Aftr the manik n nanduz performance nyo ws behaving so different wid nandu...
Cabir was shocked seeing this lovable side of Niyonika that too for nandu... So Was I...
Whn manik pecked on nanduz cheek...her cheeks convert from potato to tomato... Superab rhyming...☺️
Moorthy bani moorti. ." cabirz word... hehehe🤣
at the tym of their grp study rather playing truth n dare...
Nanduz chipku BF curled his feet thumb finger with her little finger one as he couldn't held her in front of all so their feet fingers were taking the tradition of cuddling each other further... loved this scene so much...😉😳
Daro yah maro?... Nice one...Truth n Dare...
'awesome threesomes'... 3 musketeers...Perfect 4 MANANBIR
Manik kissed on cabir's cheeks... Like really... I thought he will kiss nandu either on her temple or on her knuckles...
my first and last love is 'ManBir'... I EXPECTED THIS ONLY...
Nanduz dare...ohh my god... n dts true also...
nanduz dare...😲
But i wanted the that song only... ZARA ZARA TOUCH ME...
BUT SHE DID LIKE REALLY SHE DID IT THAT TOO IN FRONT OF EVERYONE... AM I DREAMING OR WHT?? NO I'M NOT DREAMING... IT HAPPENED... 😳 😳 poor manik... wht a control man...But loved d fact that he control not only his desires but didnt break trust of ROSE MOM too... 👍🏼
n cabir's gussa on them ws justified..that harshad is too much... correct timing to show their bond...👏" Bed tea for some one who is without tee in bed"...lolzz
" tuhi mera sachcha dost hai. " Cabir dramatically said to Manik and then pointing me said " Baki sab to contract killer hai "...CONTRACT KILLER... LOLZZZ😃
n aftr d leap
Madhubala the dayen' returns ...hehehee🤣
Daily sochta hu morning will start with my sunshine's smiles
and milta hai thunderstorm rain... lolzzz😉
n the way they canceled their revenge taking 4m their magumbi ws so hilarious..." ohh shit .. ishke bare me toh main ne socha hi nehi. That means now we are only getting a single jug of water splash. But Tab toh pura pura tanker ki barish karwa degi hum pe. "
Cabir day dreamed of that horrible scene then abruptly shouted " no no no I can't take this risk. Revenge cancel. "
like seriously they scared professors too...
luv mananbir fun...
nandu being mugambie is fun to watch...😉
both manbir scared of her...😆
waiting for d nxt
update soon...
Plzzz don't end dis story rather not any of ur stories...
abhi toh yeh wali story padhi h plzz don't stop writing...
RATHER MAKE YOUR TIME TABLE TO POST UR STORIES IN WHATEVER WAY IT SUITS YOU...
Stay blessed...
GOSHHH SNEHA U AGAIN BLOWN ME OUT.. UR POST JUST MADE ME 😃 THAT BIGGER HAPPY... GIRL U HAVE STOLEN MY HEART EVERY SINGLE TYM. AND MOST OF THE LINES TOH EVEN I VE FORGOTTEN.. THANKS FR GIVING ME THE PUSH TO READ MY OWN STORY AS I VE LOST THE FLAVOUR OF BFF. BUT DEAR IT NEEDED TO END AS I HARDLY GET TIME TO WRITE.
PLS KEEP POSTING SUCH MIRROR MSGS.
Kabhi Neem Neem Kabhi Shahad Shahad
