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Posted: 9 years ago
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Everyone must be thinking what is plf. Ok let me say what it is , it means
P-PARENTS
L-LOVE
F-FRIENDS
SO HOW IT DEPENDS ON MANAN LIFE LET ME SEE
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Posted: 9 years ago
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HELLO PEOPLE CAN U HELP ME TO POST NEXT PART.

IM NEW TO FORUM SO PLZ HELP IN STEPS HOW TO UPLOAD NEXT PART.
AND CONTINUE THE POSTS FOR NEXT PARTS
PLZ KINDLY HELP OTHERWISE I CAN'T POST ANY PASTS OTHERWISE
AND PLZ DO TELL ME HOW TO HAD TO BUDDY LIST
PLZ GIVE ME SUGGESTIONS ALSO
EVEN CRITICS ARE ALLOWED. FEEL FREE TO SHARE IF DON'T LIKE MY STORY LINE
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART-1

Beautiful morning it was tat to vit birds chirping sound, vit fresh air welcoming a new start for many . Nature was welcoming sun who was peeping from cloudy sky to do his work today.

And some guy around 254 was sleeping wearing best smile . Oh! wait why he is smiling let me go inside his dream(chup ke Wink)

Yes he running behind someone a white snow like beauty , he was catching her to see her face.

thud,

Someone woke him up Angry , a beautiful girl vit repect and wearing a warm smile. Some how he controlled his anger bcz he again missed HIS DREAM GIRL. OK fine he was wake up by air hostess.

Sir we have reached our destination , plane is landed sir. said airhostess

He owned his own plane. HE came out of his plane to check out from airport.

HE was surrounded by all over guards around him.

A wet land welcomed him, a DETERMINED SMILE appeared on his face once again.

All people were ogling at him why not he was GREEK GODWink. vit perfect body adding to it his attitude and style(upar vale se leke ayya haiAngry). All girls dream boy he was. He was wearing red t-shirt and black jeans vit black overcoat. Yet simple bt adding compliments to his hotness.

He came outside after checking but he was surrounded by news reporter and his fans. To take his pics . Why won't bcz he was coming after many years to his place bangalore. Bt he didn't paid any heed to any of them.

He headed towards the exist area. He came out.

To see only his father, who was having a proud smile for his son. Yes he was Famous Business Man of the World. watever he was bcz of his hard work. Owns his own empire all over the world. So, every dad will be proud of their children, even he was.

He came near his dad took his blessing. His dad took him for a hug. Bcz he was meeting him after long years. He had tear in his corner of his right eyes(i mean khushi ka asu hai Cry)

HI DAD,

HI MANIK, yes he was MNIK MALHOTRA (OUR OWN)

His dad took him near car bcz crowd was increasing in seconds..

they seated in back seat of his car and zoomed out to his HOME.after many years..

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Posted: 9 years ago
#4

I dnt knw whether u liked my manan ff r nt i want response guys. i ll asure u beautiful story i ned suggestions also. so here u go next part. before tat i ll introduce character along vit stories...

PART-2

Car stopped near a big mansion, u can say one of the biggest mansion in city..

Manik and his dad entered the mansion. All servants greeted Manik and he smiled in return. He was not arrogant or bad boy. He was like good boy type.

His Dad ask him to fresh up and come to breakfast.But he had different plan in his mind(evil idea), Actually he was smirking. This was noticed by his Dad.

Dad i have other work before that.

Even not giving any chance to his dad to react. He was gone in vampire speed to complete his evil work.

He went upstairs peeped into a door, where a beautiful girl was sleeping, hugging her white colour teddy. Evil smile again came to him. Taking baby steps he went near the girl. Taking a water of jug which was near bed lamp. He poured all the water on her. She was completely drenched in water.

Oh! the hell , was the sudden response from the girl.

Hello , was his reponse after that he was running for his life.Bcz girl was having vase in her hand to hit him.

He came running downstairs, to help his own life.

Bhai , I wont leave u

Dad help me from this ghost. he was asking his dad's help.

Mr.Manik Malhotra, No one can spear u from me.

Oye, Ms. Mukthi Malahotra, I can save my self.

After that girl suddenly left her vase down . She run to him and hug him so tightly.It was like an assurance that he was real not a dream.

I missed u Bhai,

I missed my mukthi,

Yes she was mukthi, manik's sister. Loves her bro a lot and viceversa.

Mukthi Malhotra- lively girl, lives every moment of life, big hearted girl, addition to it hot and stylish as her bro. Actually she owns fashion house of her own. She is a independent girl.

Hello hum be hai, another boy voice came from door. Both bro-sis break the hug to see who was that,

Hi bhai,

Dhruv, He also hugged him. This bromance hug was ended by their own dad Arjun malhotra.

He asked all his kids to fresh up and come for breakfast. Otherwise they will end up to lunch b/w Bro's and sis talks. They all headed to their rooms.

He came to his room after years.His room was decorted with all black and red things as it is his fav colours.It had a big poster of his.He went down after getting fresh.

Till then let me introduce to other people

Arjun Malhotra-Famous business man in India but not famous has his son. Love all his kids very much. Kind hearted, simple man .

Dhruv Malhotra-handsome boy not shy types, good luking.Help his father's business .

Let me clear one thing his dad empire is looked after by his father, Dhruv and his partner. Manik whatever owns its his own business not his fathers.

Ok they all arrive at dinning table.

ma-So,what special today

Dad-all ur fav dishes

mu-bhai dad said u r cuming i was so exicted, u knw i missed u so much

dh- i second that we all missed u bhai

ma-i missed u all guys

ma-so i came to knw that little sisters marraige is fixed in 2 days ur marriage. i can't belive my little sis ethni badi hogai.

mu(blush)-bhai, i'm not small girl. Im big girl u knw.

dh-bhai really scared of that boy bcz i don't how he will manage this ghost.

It was filled with laughter. It was complete family time after years.It was blissful moment for any family. His dad had happiest smile seeing his complete family.

mu- Dad see him . I will kill u Dhruv

both the bothers were pulling her legs.

dh-Bhai u knw what she is marrying her love. He is doctor.

then he started narrating love story of mukthi to manik

Actually Mukthi meet with an accident, a year before. Her leg was fractured and her head was injured. A boy and 2 girls came to her rescue. They took her to hospital. the boy and other girl were doctors so they took better care of her. Other girl gave her blood bcz Mukthi had rare blood but it matched with the other girl. So ,after it they become a good friends.

So the boy doc became very close to her. she became friend with him eventually they became bf-gf.Both the family accepted so there marriage was fixed.

so Dhruv ended the story .

ma-nice love story , I want to meet him really.

mu-he will meet u at engagement, which is day after. u will definetly meet all of them.

ma-i'm eagerly waiting to meet them.

After that all left for their work. To make arrangements for the engagment .Actually Manik came for his sister marriage. Keeping his other plans aside and focus on his sis engagment.

pre-engagment,manan meet

srrry i could not bring manan meet in this part. many people are their to introduce. I will go by story and introduce to u when actually charcter enters in the story.

srry for any mistakes

if u are not satisfied. plz do tell me. i needdd more comments..

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Posted: 9 years ago
#5
hey plz update its awesome

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