#2 MANAN SS- ONE MISTAKE CHP18 PG110 (15/2) *PMS TOM

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A12609z

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Posted: 9 years ago

#641

Yesss its awwweesssoommmeee hope next jealous track aajayee..

Plzzz want stubborn Innocent Nandu n Bold Manik wants to come close to Nandu plzzz plzzz

plzzz add Manik's POV during thr 1st makeout plzzz plzzz add that plzzz
mene iss part k liye bohat request kia h plzzz apne iss reader k upar little bit kind kar dooo plzzz plzzz plzzz

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epicangel

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Posted: 9 years ago

#642

Lovely part!!
Kitna bhi badha likh..but it seems still small while reading...there is always a rush of curiosity..what's next!!
I truly loved ..
Feeling bad for Manik...
Okay BAs..now..
Waiting for nxt

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cutiesanaa

@cutiesanaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#643

wow it ws amazing
thnk god nandu is fine n manik ws hell worried
im jst luving d way ur describing his emotions
n den nandu is smiling thnk god
who is d guy mayb madhyam
update nxt soon n thnks fr pm
lots of love
sanaa

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aroy90

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Posted: 9 years ago

#644

Really loved the update dear

So beautiful it was

I think its Madhyam

N thanks for the PM

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shaan...

@shaan...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#645

Amazing update...

Luved it...

Thnx 4 d pm...

Plz continue soon...

Will be waiting 4 d next update...

Take care...

Stay blessed...

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windowseatbug

@windowseatbug

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Posted: 9 years ago

#646

Awesome update.

I'm loving this change you've brought to the story.

Of course nandini will take time to get back to normal.

But the old Manik wasn't helping to bring the required change.

I'm so loving this changed, optimistic Manik.

The old Manik just used to only curse himself for the mistake.

Now he's actually trying to mend her heart.

He was so restless when she more than usual time to get ready.

Also when she was looking pale.

He even wanted to cancel the plan after knowing about her health.

But had to agree to whatever nandini said.

But those were really some sweet gestures.

Did Nandini oppose because she doesn't want to give into him so easily? Or because of the mood swings? Or did she find it all fake?

Nandini is right on her part.

But still hope she's able to forgive him soon.

Who's the new guy by the way?

Jealously track, is it?

Continue soon please.

Thanks for update & pm 😃

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saira26

@saira26

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Posted: 9 years ago

#647

Nice update
l really wanted to know who is he?
Plzzz cont soon

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kneha25

@kneha25

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Posted: 9 years ago

#648

god..now who is he??

pehle hi km prblms h

nice update

continue soon

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LoveIsManan

@LoveIsManan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#649

The update was Lovely darling..
Thanks goodness bathing happened to her and it was a normal pregnancy issue..
He was hell scared for her..
The way Manik is taking care of her is too good..
I mean it's so good to see him taking the initiative to make her smile and some where he is even successful in doing it..
I who is this he, us he some one who had some feelings for Nandini..
Will be looking forward to find who is he?
Do update soon...