#2 MANAN FF [NAJDIKIYAN] [PART16 PAGE 116] LINK TO THREAD 3 PAGE 1

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Kuushi

@Kuushi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#661

Super awesome update with lot of positive things happening now they have mukthi on their side too and on the mission to find dhrulyas truth and love the jealous manik and the last part when he said it will be our marriage nandini with a kiss..in cabirs words he is totally in majnu mode and not leaving any chance to be with her and express his love...cabir teasing him is hillarious..you are amazing with the writing and loved everybit of the chapter..please continue soon and thanku for the pm :)

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ky2manan

@ky2manan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#662

Mindblowing update
Now mukti also know about them
Now they need to tell alya everything ASAP
Loved cabir's sarcastic comments
Manik was so desperate to meet nandini
Manik was so jealous when he saw nandini with aryaman
Nandini pinched Manik and also bit her hard ...haha so funny
Loved the last part
Update soon
PS - I just loved your song choices that you used in previous parts. They all suited the situation perfectly
Specially the one when Manik was drawing nandini's pic dil kyun ye mera shor kare ❤️

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anaita arora

@fireflies10

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Posted: 9 years ago

#663

amazing update

mukti is so under standing

cabir baba ki jai ho sab ki prem kahanio ka oata chala hi jata hai unhe

manan part was superb

loved it

update soon

take care

ty for pm

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iqra286

@iqra286

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Posted: 9 years ago

#664

Awww😛 dt was wonderful n amazing with lot of humuor😛 loved it to d core😃 really loved d way mukti scare d shit outof 2 innocent souls lol😆😆 really loved bira n his nautanki🤣 im glad dt now mukti also is on majnu side😆😛 really loved his desperation n cool attitude towards nandu😳😃 plzz update soon will b eagerly w8ting for nxt one😊