The forceful kiss manan ff on hold note on pg 60

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aadhya_cute

@aadhya_cute

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Posted: 9 years ago

#91

aashna congratulations yaar!! new story kya baat hain👏

tum meri mind read karti ho kya...i was missing devil's comedy..and here u came with comedy

rooster / murga ghost / lawyer...and the most funny DREAM 😆😆

haha pehle manik's rxn towards professor...as if asking his KIDNEY'S 😆

nd that manbir's ambhuja cement bond and chasing after class
but what is connection between manan??

i think they r tom n jerry here...OMG it will be fun

i laughed my KIDNEY's out😛😉

sach mein there is no place to live for a middle aged young lady😆 realisation😛

yes yes fun ride begins😃

yaar please do continue...nahi tho Devil's ki sad parts padke mein bhi sad hojaungi😭

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ruhimak1

@ruhimak1

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#92

It was hilarious

Nice chp

scenes were really very funny

Awesome ff

Loved it

Cont soon😛

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Seharash Siddiqui

@seharash.hasan

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#93

Heey ... awsome chapter yr...
Nice concept...
I like it...
Chicken burger...
It was hilarious...
Evil twins...
Awsome update..
Thanks for pm...
Update soon ...
N plzzz pm me the nxt chapter...
Byeee

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anya

@anya21

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Posted: 9 years ago

#94

superb update...

loved it alot...

mostly laughed alot😉...

cabir nd manik scenes...loved it...

wat ambuja cement...😆😆

rooster ...gondola...haha...superb names😛...

where u will get these kinds of names😆?

ahh...nandini thoughts...really...

like seriously...

how can she think all those crazy thoughts like...

lawyer...ghost ...orphan...

really njoyed reading...

wtng 4r d nxt part ...

cont soon ...

keep smiling!!!

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cutypie04

@cutypie04

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#95

Interesting start dea. ...

Continue soonnn

Tnx fr d pm

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Sofiafarooq

@Sofiafarooq

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#96

Very nice start of story. And yeah u r king of comedy.
Naughty prankster manik innocent nandni.
Perfect couple banana Koe tm sy Sikhy.
Always spicy yet perfect combination. Will wait for next.
I m gonna enjoy ur story surely.
So dude come back soon with another perfect update.

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iqra286

@iqra286

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#97

God man dt was to much hilirious 😆 😆 manik sleeping along with solving d problem 😃 it was an epic moment 😆 😃 really loved their pet names lol 😃 😛 really loved Manbir bond dy were hell hilirious 😆 😛 last but not d least nandini moorty lol 😃 dy r sch an ass dt dy had change her order 😃 plzz continue soon 😊

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riyakanodia_rk

@riyakanodia_rk

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#98

Just superb

Like d chemistry of gondola n rooster 😃😆

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mona

@cmamona

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#99

Hey
Congratulations dear for ur new story
And this is so awesome update...
Hehehe what a hilarious update
Bechara manik subah subah dant wo b math teacher se...
And then nandu ki giggling se gussa...
Yr but awsm was ambuja cement Wala scene... Hehe
And then manik and cabir ka comparisons with ben10 nd alll... Wow yr
And then canteen scene... Bechari nandu
Nandu ka horrified day dream
Everything is just way too awsm...
U r such a wonderful writer...
Our very own writer of devils bride.. ..