tum .....sirf tum... by tweety character sketch updated

guyz u know me I'm for sure mini mouse but I'm updating this story on behalf of my jaan sis and I will indicate her by Tweety wo story ki trah ye story apki khidmat pe parh ke cmnt like krke btana forward karun ki chor dun hurt nae krna usko she is my sweetheart ap log ki bhi shayad hojae so Tweety here it is

prologue:-

kyun mera pecha kar rahe ho chaley kyun nahe jatey meri zindagi se... akhir tumhn mjse kiya chahiye...
the girl said to boy

tum sirf tum... the boy said with smirk

main nahe Aaogi tumhare pass tum chaley jao meri zindagi se the girl said

main tumhn yehan se liye begair nahe jao ga or nahe tumhn kahen janey dooga samjhi tum (when he was saying the girl take a step towards the door but before she reaches the door the boy cluctes the hair tightly) lagta hai tumhn apne style main samjhna parega and sucks the earlobe

choro mjhe monster... the girl said
Tumhn lagta hain mai tumhn chor doon ga so bad thinking pyaar kiya hai toh nibhana toh padega. Or ek bat tumhn toh mai sath lay jaoga but apni beti ko bhi lay jaoga...the boy said with angry + smirk


here is the prologe guyz plz comment me kahiye may yeh story likhon ya nahe...
oh gud pplz plz share ur views
for now tata
lots of love

mini mouse and Tweety
a love story turns dark

Originally posted by: suraiya77

Awesome
continue soon

mainey us story le chapiiee update krdala hai abhi abhi

Plzzz do continue...luv Dark stories dark Manik...make him desire full n Grey plzzz

Nice prologue waiting for update

Awesome...

Superb prologue...

Manan married??

Waiting for it

Plz jaldi update chahiye ...

Continue soon


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SANJANA

here is the character sketch pplz

Nandini moorthy: a sweet innocent girl her life is depend upon love for her love is trust.
Manik malhotra: arrgonant and possessive love is all her nandini but he wants to the boss of her life.
Manvi: cute, innocent and arrgonant loves her mom so much she always depend on her mom nandini.
Cabir,mukhti,aliya,dhruv,aryman are same character shown in drama

so here u go update will be there tonight

Will be waiting fr d update :*
Update soon
Loved the prologue :)

Awesome!
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Amazin'
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Eagerly waiting for the 1st part
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Loved the CS