MANAN FF-STORY OF LOVE - Chapter-8 pg- 39 27/12 - Page 25

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I know I m late... a bigvala sorry for that... here is chapter-8...

Chapter-8

Recap- sandwich on couch.

Dadi-"yeh sab kya tha...?"

Cbr-"kya dadi...?"

Dadi-"tum nahi jante me kya puch rahi hu...?"

Mnk-"no dadi. We don't know."

Dadi-"niche kya ho raha tha...?"

Mnk-"niche... niche to sari preprations chal raho hai... ha..."

Dadi-"me puch rahi thi ki niche couch pe tum nandini ke upar n navya cabir ke upar, yeh sab kya tha...?"

Cbr-"kuch nahi wo manik nandini se takra gaya n wo dono gir gaye , me navya se takra gaya aur hum dono gir gaye... bas."

Dadi-"aur kuch nahi...?"

Mnk-"aur kya hoga dadi..."

Dadi-"thik hai aisa hi hoga."

Manbir-"aisa hi tha."

Dadi left the room.

Cbr-"manik aaj to hum bach gaye."

Mnk-"ha... me to darhi gaya tha."

Cbr-"chal ab fresh hoke niche chalte hai."

Mnk-"ha... chal."

In dadi's room.

Dadi's pov

Dadi is sitting on bed.

Yeh dono aise nahi manenge. Mujeh hi kuch karna hoga. Par kya karu...? Idea... ab kaise bachoge tum dono...?

After sometime.

In hall.

Na-"kaka aap sab jake khana khalo."

Servants left from there.

Na-"ayyappa help me... kitana kuch baki hai."

Manik come there.

Mnk-"yeh upar dekh ke kisse bat kar rahi ho...?"

Nandini look at manik n remember the kiss n blush.

Na-"wo... wo... me ayyappa se bat kar rahi thi."

Mnk-"ohhh..."

Na-"aman tum bhi jake khna khalo."

Mnk-"thik hai."

Manik left from there n this whole thing is seen by dadi n she smile.

Dadi go to manik.

Dadi-"kitana hard-work karti hai yeh nandini."

Manik look at her n smile.

Mnk-"ha... bahot hard-working hai."

Dadi-"par apana zara bhi khyal nahi rakhati. Ab dekhona abhi tak kuch bhi nahi khaya usne."

Manik-"what...? Pagal hai ye kya...? Bhukhe rehnese thodina kam jaldi ho jayega."

Manik left from there n go to nandini.

Mnk-"nandini tumne khana khaya...?"

Na-"aman abhi nahi badme kha lungi."

Mnk-"no. tum abhi kha rahi ho n that's final."

Na-"but..."

Nandini is going to speck but manik put a bite os roti in her mouth.

Na-"aman yeh kya hai...?"

Mnk-"tumhare pas time nahi hai to tum kam karo me tumhe khana khilata hu. Tumahara time bhi bach jayega."

Nandini look at manik n smile.

Nandini's pov

He is so caring. Abhi kuch hours pehlehi mile hai par kitani care karta hai meri.

Na-"thanks. Par me kha lungi."

Mnk-"par abhi mere sath bethke khana hoga."

Na-"thik hai me navu ko bulake lati hu."

Navya come there.

Na-"navu me tumhe hi bulane aa rahi thi, khana khane ke liye."

Nv-"thik hai par veer kaha hai...?"

Cbr-"kisine mujeh yad kiya...?"

Mnk-"ha... navya ne..."

Manik wink at cabir n cabir give him i-will-see-you look.

Nv-"ha... veer hum khana khane ja rahe hai tum bhi chalo."

Cbr-"ha chalo."

They sit on table.

Mnk-"so nandini, do you believe in love...?"

Na-"no aman I don't believe."

Cbr-"n you navya...?"

Navya look at veer n a tear fall down from her eyes. All notice that.

Nv-"nahi I don't believe in love."

Mnk-"so koi crush...?"

Listening to that navya smile.

Nv-"me batati hu nandu ka crush kon hai. Nandu likes PARTH SAMTHAN..."

Nandini is giving deathly glare to navya n then she smile at her.

Na-" n navu likes AYAZ AHEMAD..."

Manbir don't like it.

Manik's pov

What...? I mean PARTH. Usse to handsome me hu. Kya dhikhta hai nandini ko parth me.

Cabir's pov

AYAZ... why I mean usme aisa kya hai... jerk... ho kya gaye hai navya ki choice ko...?

Cbr-"nice..."

Mnk-"hmmm..."

Cbr-"I believe in love..."

Mnk-"n I also believe in love... but kabhi huahi nahi..."

Cbr-"ya right."

Na-"don't worry ho jayega."

Cbr-"u think that...?"

Na-"yes. You both are sweet, caring n also handsome so, koi bhi ladki ha bol degi."

Mnk-"but hume koi pasand hi nahi aai."

Nv-"aa jayegi."

Cbr-"we will wait."

Mnk-"ya..."

Na-"mera to ho gaya tum log khalo me work kahatak pahucha wo dekhti hu."

Nv-"me bhi aati hu."

Navni left.

Manik is smilling like fool.

Manik's pov

She thinks I m handsome n sweet. Ahhh, uske muhse sunneme kitana achcha lagta hai.

Cabir look at manik n wink. He take a MIRCHI n put it in his chapati. Manik is still in his la...la...land. He take a bite of roti n put in his mouth n ahhh...

Mnk-"ahhh... PANI... plz... pani."

Cbr-"kya hua... kahi AAH lagi hai."

Mnk-"pani..."

Nandini come there n see all this.

Na-"aman yelo PANI."

Mnk-"thanks nandini."

Na-"welcome."

Nandini left from there.

Mnk-"sale ye sab tune kiya na...?"

Cbr-"haa... par yeh bata ki, mene MIRCHI li n teri roti me rakhadi fir bhi tujeh pata kaise nahi chala. Kya soch raha tha ya fir kiske bare me soch raha tha...?"

Mnk-"me kya... me nandini ke bareme nahi soch raha tha."

Cbr-"mene kab kahaki tu nandini ke bareme soch raha tha."

Mnk-"woo... wo... jaldi kar hume abhi bahot sara work karna hai."

A worker come there.

Wo-"sir wo nandini mam aur navya mam gir gai aap jaldi chaliye."

Listening this manbir run from there. Worker took towards dadi n dadi smile.

In garden.

Navni is discussing something n manbir come there.

Mnk-"nandini tum thik hona...? Kahi lagi to nahi."

Cbr-"navya tum khadi kyu ho...? Beth jav..."

Mnk-"me doctor ko call kartahu."

Na-"par hua kya hai. Hum dono thik hai."

Mnk-"ohhh... shut up... tum gir gai aur keh rahi ho ki thik ho..."

Na-"par me nahi giri aman."

Manbir-"what...?"

Cbr-"navya kya tum bhi nahi giri...?"

Nv-"nahi."

Manik hugs nandini n cabir hungs navya. Navni get shocked. After sometime they also hug them. Dadi come there.

Dadi-"bachcho..."

Manan n cavya realize that in which state they are. They get strait.

Dadi-"bachcho mene kuch nahi dekha."

Now all looking here n there.

Mnk-"wo dadi kisi worker ne bola ki yeh dono gir gayi hai..."

Dadi-"aur tum bhagte bhagte aa gaye. Haina...?'

Cbr-"wo dadi..."

Dadi's pov

To mujeh pata chalhi gaya... ki inke dil me kya hai... pagal hai yeh dono... ab kon bachayega tum dono ko...?

Dadi-"koi bat nahi galti ho gayi hogi kisise."

Na-"ha... dadi hum to thik hai."

Dadi-"koi bat nahi."

Dadi left from there.

Nv-"tum dono pool side ki arrengements dekhalo."

Manbir left from there.

Navya's pov

veer ne mujeh hug kiya... yeh feelings kya hai...?

Nandini's pov

Ayyappa... aman is so caring... sirf kisine kaha ki me gir gayi aur wo chala aaya mere pas...

manik's pov

I just hug her... she smells so good... what manik control... she is different...

Cabir's pov

Aaj ho kya raha hai...? Pehle wo mujpe giri n ab mene use hug kiya... aaj ke din mehi kuch gadbad hai...

Manbir check all the arrengements n come to navni. Navni is talking something n laughing... manbir look at them n go to their la...la...land.

They are walking towards navni n gardener is giving water to flowers. But manbir are in their la...la...land n don't notice it... they are coming towards navni n... AHHH...

Manbir shout bcoz they come in front of flowers n water fall on them instead of flowers.

Mnk-"mali kaka yeh sab kya hai...?"

Mali-"baba aap bich me aake khade ho gaye meto pani de raha tha fuloko."

Then after manbir realize that what they did.

Cbr-"it's ok. Aap jaiye."

Mali kak left from there n navni see all thing n they burst out of laugter.

Na-"ohh my god...hahaha... tum dono ka dhyan kidhar tha...? Hahaha..."

Nv-"hahaha... bichme aa gaye tum dono... hahahah..."

Manbir look at each other n then look at navni n again they lost in their laughter...

Manik's pov

Agar nandini aisehi hasti rahe to yeh sab me puri life karneko ready hu... she look so beautiful... beautiful... manik stop staring at her...

Cabir's pov

I don't care ki wo mujpe has rahi ya nahi bas I care that she is laughing... I want to kiss her now... cabirrr... what is wrong with you man... you want to kiss navya...

Manik look here n there n smile n say cabir to look there n they both smile. Manbir go there n pick some mud...

Mnk-"tum dono ko bahot hasi aa rahi haina...?'

Cbr-"ab humari bari hai hasne ki..."

Navni stop laughing n see the mud on their hand.

Na-"aman hum to bas aisehi has rahe the..."

Nv-"ha... veer wo hum tum donope thodi na has rahe the...?"

Cbr-"achcha... wait hum tum dono pe haste hai..."

Manbir throw mud on them... n started laughing... navni also pick mud n throw at manbir n then they started laughing... manbi pick the mud... manik hold nandini from her waist n cabir hold navya.

Na-"aman leave me..."

Mnk-"abhi to badi hasi aa rahi thi...? Ab kya hua..."

Nv-"veer yeh kya kar rahe ho...?"

Cbr-"kya hua...?"

Cabir put his hand on her chick n look at her he lost in her eyes...

Na-"aman don't you dare to put your hand on me..."

Mnk-"ok."

Manik rub his hand on his chick n then rub his chick with nanddini's chick n he look into her eyes...

Manan n cavya about to kisss... N

Precap- kiss or kiss miss

So here is chapter-8... I know you all want to kill me bcoz I left at cliffhanger...

I hope you like it...

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Stay tune till then bye n take care...

Hey dear that was awesome and funny update dadi to rocked and manan and cavya were cute thanks for pm

Wow... manan and Cavya ki bonding badh rai hai ...

Awesome update loved it. It was really funny manik KO mirchi khila di navni doesn't believe in love but manbir does bahut mehnat karni padegi navni KO patane k liye. Ab to bats do navni KO k they r manbir tabhi mama aayega. Kiss to abhi nhi hone wali. Water scene n mud scene was superb.
Update soon can't wait to read next part

Amazing update...
Very well written...
Loved it to the core...
Cont soon...


LOVE,
AAROHI...

Awesome update
i loved it
continue soon
thanks for pm

Aareee ho gyaa... arre jst misss... ni ho gaa kisss damn sure... koi to aahe jayegaa beech mein... dadi rocks... jst waiting ke kab nanvi ko sach pta chalega.. kya rxn ho ga unkaa... update ASAP

souly yaar that was an awesome update
u and Dadi both rocked
awww manan and cavya both r so cute
update asap
and also both ur other ff soon
waiting but don't make us wait
take care

Originally posted by: Tiara115

It's ok dear ..

Will wait

Do update soon

Waiting eagerly

I will dear..