MANAN FF-STORY OF LOVE - Chapter-8 pg- 39 27/12 - Page 11

Originally posted by: nandininiti

nice promo.
I think in burkha manbir will be there.

Wait...Wait...n get something great...

Originally posted by: mananneetu

hi..so today i read ur story that too all chapters in a go nd i seriously loved it...!! 😛 😃
i loved each nd every things in this story...!! nd manbir as well as dadi rocked in last update..!! 😉 😆
the way manbir were cursing karan...!!! i was laughing a lot..too funny..!! 🤣
waiting fr nxt part..!! nd can u do me a favour..? actually na there is some problem in my account/.cant buddy people..!! so can u plz pm me even if i dont send buddy request..!! plz help me out.!!

Thanks dear...n you give this much big comment n ya i will update soon...

This is so funny! Why do I feel that its not girls and its guys?😆

Originally posted by: priakachan

This is so funny! Why do I feel that its not girls and its guys?😆

I cannot say anything about it bcoz it is feeling n feeling is natural... 😉 😳

Originally posted by: ThakarMegha

I cannot say anything about it bcoz it is feeling n feeling is natural... 😉 😳

Originally posted by: priakachan

Yaar..abhi I want to know the story of Aman and Veer😆😆😆

There is no aman n veer. There is only manik n cabir... 😃 😉

Sorry for late update. My classes are for full day n get time at night. So I hope u all understand my situation.

I send buddy request to whom comment on my ff bcoz many of u said that they cannot send me buddy request. N if anyone cannot send me buddy request than PM me so I will send u buddy request...

Chapter-5

Recap- manbir plan something...

Na-"what plan aman...?"

Manbir look at each other.

Cbr-"we plan that we will divide in pair of two me n aman , u n navya so work will be easy..."

Nv-"u r right veer."

Na-"tum dono parking me jav hum dono dadi ko bata ke aate hai."

Mnk-"ok."

Manbir go to parking. Guards see them.

Guard-"sir hum car nikalte hai."

Cbr-"no hum akele hi jayenge aur ha ye sir mat bolana hume."

Guard-"but sir we cannot allowe u to go without security."

Mnk-"we r going n that is final."

Guard-"ok if don't want us with u we will follow in cevil dress n noone can know that."

Manbir-"fine."

Guard-"konsi car nikalu sir...?"

Mnk-"cabir yarr ye dono k sath hum ye sab car me to ja nahi sakte."

Cbr-"ya.. you r right."

Mnk-"tum sab ye samaj lo ki hum aaj manik n cabir nahi hai."

Guard-"sir me kuch samja nahi."

Cbr-"matlab me veer hu aur ye aman hai."

Guard-"but sir..."

Mnk-"rehne do tumhe samj nahi aayega."

Guard-"ok."

Meanwhile, navni come there.

Nv-"ye guard kya kar rahe hai yaha...?"

Mnk-"wo...wo...ha... ye hume puch rahe the ki hum kon hai . pehle kabhi dekha nahi hai hume."

Na-"ok."

Cbr-"par hum jayenge kaise."

Na-"wo dadi ne car arrenge kardi hai hamare liye."

Mnk-"ok."

They sit in car. Like driver n on passenger seat par navya n back seat par cabir, manik n nandini. Driver start radio n FAB5's song is playing.

Na-"aman I told you na, manik have magical voice n cabir also sings well now listen."

Song-bheegi si bhagi si from rajniti.

Mnk-"u r right nandini."

N he smiles n look towards cabir. They keep talking on random topics n they reach at market.

Na-"ok we go this side n u both go that side n anyone get supplier inform each other."

Manbir-"ok."

Cbr-"u both go we will go after sometime bcoz we come from pune so we r litle bit tired."(aman n veer were coming from puna. Manbir r playing as aman n veer so they collect all the information about them.)

Navni-"ok. Bye."

Navni left from there.

Mnk-"cabir tera yeh pan to kam kar gaya par hum kya car me hi bethe rahenge...?"

Cbr-"me yehi soch rahahu ki ab kya kare."

They r talking n that time cabir see a burkha shop n an idea come in his mind.

Cbr-"mil gaya idea."

Mnk-"to bol na..."

Cbr-"manik wo shop dekha raha hai...?"

Manik see the shop.

Mnk-"so what...?"

Cabir look at manik n wink n manik understand what he wants to say.

Mnk-"no cabir hum kuch aisa nahi karenge."

Cbr-"to yahi betha reh tu."

Manik thinks for sometime.

Mnk-"ok."

Cbr-"kaka ek kam karna wo jo shop hai na vahase hamare liye dono burkhe leke aaiye."

Driver-"but aap ke liye burkhe...?"

Mnk-"ha hamare liye burkhe."

Kaka look at them n then go to shop.

Shopkeeper-"kya chahiye aapko...?"

Driver-"burkhe chahiye."

Shopkeeper-"par aap kya karenge burkho ka janab...?"

Driver-"meri biwi or bachchi ke liye chahiye."

Shopkeeper-"thin hai. Konsi size du...?"

Driver-"sabse badivali..."

Shopkeeper-"ye lijiye."

N then driver pay to shopkeeper n come to car.

Driver-"baba ye lijiye."

Mnk-"kaka car ko market se thoda dur le jaiye."

N driver took car at some distance.

Cbr-"ab aap bahar jaiye."

Driver left the car n manbir wear the burkha. They come out of car wearing burkha.

Mnk-"aap yehi rukiye aur nandini n navya aapko puche aap kaha hai to app unhe batane k bad sidha hume call karna.thik hai."

Driver-"ji baba."

Manbir left from there.

Mnk-"yaar ab in dono ko kaha dhoondhe...?"

Cbr-"us taraf chalte hai."

After sometime they find navni. N they started following them. After sometime navya notice that.

Nv-"nandu ye burkha girls hume kab se follow kar rahi hai."

Na-"r u sure navu...?"

Nv-"yaa... nandu I m sure."

Nandini look at burkha girls. N they left from there. N burkha girls follow them. This time nandini also notice that.

Na-"navu u r right they r following us."

N then they look at burkha girls. N burkha girls r coming towards them. N stood besides them n asking something to shopkeeper.( manbir is specking in girls voice.)

Na-"aap dono hume follow kar rahi ho, hum kab se dekh rahe hai."

Cbr-"alaah alaah(touching his both chicks with hands)yeh larki kya bole ja rahi hai."

Cabir look towards manik.

Cbr-" Mumtaz(manik's name), tumne suna ye larkiya kya keh rahi hai...?"

Mnk-"ha Anarkali(cabir's name)suna mene."

Cbr-"larkiyo saram nahi aati aisa bolte."

Mnk-"ha. Hum ladke dhikhate hai kya jo tumhara picha karenge."

Cbr-"aur hum aise dikhati hai jo larkiyo ka picha kare. Hamara nikah ho gaya hai.tum dono ruko yaha me apne sohar ko bulati hu, fir bolna."

Na-"nahi...nahi... wo hum kabse dekh rahe the k aap vahi ja rahe ho jaha hum ja rahe hai. Isiliye hume laga ki aap humara picha kar rahe hai."

Mnk-"ye market hai. Hum kahi bhi ja sakte hai."

Cbr-"tum dono keh rahi ho ki hum tum dono aapka picha kar rahi thi par me yeh bhi to keh sakti hu ki aap dono hamare aage chal rahi thi."

Nv-"I m sorry."

Mnk-"koi bat nahi."

Navni left from there n manbir burst out of laughter.

Cbr-"bro, it is so funny."

Mnk-"ya right. I don't remember hum aise kab hase the last time."

Cbr-"tune un dono k chehre dekhe the...?"

Mnk-"ha kitani dar gayi thi jab tumne bola ki sohar ko bulati hu."

Cbr-"manik koiaur nam nahi mila anarkali. I mean is jamane me aise nam kon rakhta hai."

Mnk-"tune jo mera nam rakha mumtaz aise nam bhi koi nahi rakhata."

Cbr-"chal ab chalte hai."

They both left.

Na-"yar navu me to dar hi gayi thi jab usne apne sohar ko bulane ki bat ki."

Nv-"ha me bhi dar gayi thi."

Then after they find a supplier n give him order.

They reach that place where car left the them.

Nv-"nandu car kaha hai."

Na-"pata nahi kaka ko call karke puchti hu."

Nandini call he kaka n kaka told her the address where he is n then kaka calls manbir to inform about them.

Mnk-"cabir hum to market se nikl bhi nahi wo pehle pohich jayegi hamse."

Cbr-"yarrr bat to sahi hai aur aise burkhe me unke samne ja bhi nahi sakte."

Meanwhile, manik's phone ring n it is nandini.

Na-"aman we find supplier so come back n car is not in market. It is at some distance from market."

Mnk-"ya we r coming."

Nandini cut the call.

Screen freeze at manbir's tensed face.

So here ch-5 is over...

So now what will happen...

How manbir find a solution...

So stay tune...

Precap- lots of masti

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it was seriously damn funny... 🤣
manbir really rocked yr...
that burkha part toh was amazing
i really cant stop laughing imagining them in burkha talking in girls voice...
navni were so tensed bt mujhe toh hasi aarahi thi
lekin how will.manbir get a solution
waiting fr nxt part
update soon
nd thnx fr pm

Nice update..hehehe anarkali n mumtaz... hahhha... manbir r awsum update soon. .

nice update manbir so funny thanks for pm continue soon waiting for next part