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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Lovelylav7

Dhruv full history..Nice one



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what happen guys u didn't like my part 1
druv story
i didn't get much response

i hope my next part 1b is complete your hopes
it is complete manan

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 1B


i know u guys didn't like PART 1A which is complete on Druv.

i want to say something, that

guys gay people also human Being then y u not like them so much

i thought u guys will support me

now i will give u PART 1B which is full of manan

now plz give me full response



Here comes Manik Malhotra.


Manik malhotra born in city. And his childhood is very good. Everybody keep him every time in their hands, so when he become 3 4 years, he always cry so that somebody picj him up and he will not walk. He is very lezy and this habit is also present till now


Manik is always bully girls in his school time, he make his gang and they always do pranks on girls. Manik is only younger son of his father. His father has a elder son then manik which is 5 years old then manik.


His brother knows about manik always and he try to teach him that he din't do this otherwise no girl will marry him, and manik said u don't worry bhaiya I will marry to a boy then, and by his this answer his all family members laugh. They also didn't took him in serious note.


Then manik is start growing up slowly slowly and passed 7th class. At that time he is 1 years old. Then he comes in 8th standerd.


It was 1st day of maniks in 8th class. So he brought a full box of chocolate for his friends in the occasion of new new class.


When he is going to his class running because its 1st day and he didn't want to late so he is running and then


Thud


And all the chocolates are in air. And manik is on the flower and a girl is on him, and all the chocolates is upon them.


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Here comes our little cute NANDINI MURTHY


Nandini also born in city and leaves with his family. She also has a big brother.


She is cute from childhood and always apple of heart of her family. She also complete her studies from city till 6th from a school near her home, and then somebody suggest to his family that your daughter is is very intelligent y not u join AVM SCHOOL.


AVM SCHOOL is a very big school of that time, In that school only those children are study whose parents are very rich.


In 6th nandini got very good marks and so in 7th class she directly got admission in AVM SCHOOL.


Today is her first day in AVM School and she is all ready for her first day in new school.


Her mom advised her that doesn't eat anything from strangers. Because her school is very far and for this she has to go by school bus. She has to keep away from trouble and only concentrate on study. And said make good friends


NOTE- nandini's family is literate family so they never mind if nandini make her friendship with boys also.


Nandini goes to school by her bus and reach at school. She saw a very beautiful school. She goes inside and she forgot why she came here and start checking the school like a fool. She is roming around the school and then she heards the school bell and announcement that all student reach to their class , its time to prayer. So she start to run inside the school and then running in the corridor.


Then suddenly


Thud


And she saw that is on the ground and she fall on somebody and her hairs cover that persons mouth and that person is holding her from her waist. She looks that on them some chocolates also fall


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Note- Nandini is 15th years old and manik is 16th years old

And manik is in 8th class and nandini is in 7th class.


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Here start the STORY of MANAN TOGETHER.


Both manik and nandini is on each other


Then they hears sound of other student and come their senses and nandini got up from manik, manik also got up from their and saw nandini face and he lost in her.


For the first time manik lost in a girl, he never likes any girl till now but then when he saw her he lost in her beauty.


Then unknowingly he goes near nandini and PASSES her A Chocolate


Nanidni looks towards manik then chocolate


She said


Nandini- I didn't take eating things from strangers and runs from there to her class.


Manik didn't said anything and he is looking towards her where she is running.


Then somebody come from behind and place his hand on his solder and said


Person - dude she didn't take your chocolate, she ignores you.


Manik- no , she didn't, u wait and watch I will surely give her my chocolate.


Then manik runs behind her and block her ways.


All manik friend also run behind him because they also wanna see fun


Manik said


Manik- hey hi


I am manik malhotra and forward his hand for handshake


Nandini- hi


I am Nandini Murthy and also place her hand on his hand and do handshake


Then manik forward his chocolate and said


Manik- so now we know each other then we r not strangers any more so now u can take it.


Nandini- yeah we only knows our names, nothing else, how I will trust u that this chocolate is good for my health or not so u keep it with yourself, I only eat from my friends and runs from their in to her class.


Manik saw this and pass smiles


Maniks friends saw maniks this avtar they got shocked because manik never behave this with any girl before


So he goes from their and said


Manik- nandini we will be friends after sometime but u have to accept my chocolate today itself.


And goes smiling from there to his class.


Maniks friends also reach to his class


And then prayer start and after class


Now its lunch time


Manik is sitting with his friends then somebody said


Look manik she is there the new girl who didn't accept your chocolate


Today first time some random girl reject your offer and u didn't angry on her rather u are smiling.


We have to teach her a lesion


Manik- no guys u don't have to do anything I will surely give my chocolate to her by hook or crook.


Maniks goes from their and saw that nandini is sitting alone and eating her lunch from her lunch box and making cute cute faces


Manik sit beside her watch her eating.


Nandini saw him and said- manik u didn't eat lunch?


Then manik got an idea and said


Manik- with sadly, no nandini today I get up late so I forgot to pick up my lunch from home.


Nandini- r u hungry?


Manik- No. with said sad expression.


Nandini- I know u r hungry , come here lets eats together from my tiffin if u want. I didn't mix poison in it u can saw I also eating it.


Manik hear this and smiles on her innocence but didn't said anything.


Nandini- y r u smiling ? r u not hungry ? come here eat otherwise I will finish it?


Manik- okay I am hungry but 1st u have to take my chocolate and I will eat your chocolate.


Nandini- smiles on maniks this cute antic to give chocolate her.


Nandini said- but I only eat from my friends I said before na


Manik- to we can be friends na


So lets make friends


Then he forward his hand and said


NANDINI MURTHY WILL U BE MY FRIEND


Nandini- smiles and forward her hand said


YES MANIK MALHOTRA I WILL.


Manik- so now we r friends now u accept my chocolate because I am dying because of hunger of this delicious food in your Tiffin


Nandini take chocolate from him and put near her and saw that manik is eating food from her lunch box like a small kid and enjoying.


She smiles after looking at him.


Manik suddenly notice that nandini didn't eating chocolate and keep near her he said


Manik- nandini y r u not eating it.


Nandini- manik I am full na I will eat it later I promise.


Manik- okay and then again starts eating.


Then lunch is over and everybody is leaving for their class.


Nandini saw that everybody was going under a tree and put down the rest food on the Flore and a old lady whose age is more than 50 is came there and start to eat that food.


That lady is mad of school and leaves in school also. She do all the works of school all saaf safai


Nandini saw her eating that food like this


She got very hurt to she her like this she saw chocolate in her hand which manik gives her.


She goes near that lady and put her hands on her solder and said.


Nandini- Maai (we said old man BABA and old lady MAAi in my VILLAGE)


That lady saw her and said


MAAi- ha beta? Kuch chahiye? Kuch gir gya kahi?


Nandini- nhi MAAi and she take all food from that place and threw it in dustbin


She take that ladys hand and goes to canteen


And order biskit and tea for that lady


And gives to her and said


MAAi u will never eat that food from now onwards. I will daily come with extra food and we both eat together daily okay


Maai- nahi beta its okay. This is my life, u don't worry


Nandini- nhi maai y r like my DADI(GRANDMOTHER) , u will never it that food okay


Maai- okay beta and then she eats that food


When she completes


Nandini- maai AAPKA PAT BHAR GAYA? R u FULL?


Maai- yes beta


NAndini then gives her that chocolate and said


Maai rat me bhookh lage to ye kha lena, in night when u got gungry u will eat it and then

she turns towards canteen and said


Nandini- bhaiya u will give milk to maai in evening here is rup. And she gives these rup to canteen man


Maai- nhi beta this is not requires and said I will manage


Nandini- maai u shut up and don't speak okay she said angrily


Maai make a sad face and put her finger on her lipes


Nandini goes near her and gives a kiss on her chick and said maai u r like my dadi so u don't worry I will take care of u now u rest I go to my class I already late


Manik also saw this full by standing this and feels proud after seeing nandini likes this he feels happy and goes to his class


It is now play period everbody goes to ground


Manik remember something and and goes to canteen and buys some thing and goes in nandinis class and after 15 min he come out


Then they play and go to their home.


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Note- Guys I want to tell that what I will write in next 2 3 paragraph that drama I did with my Golu(my Girlfriend) when we make friends with each other when we are child's, so I want to share it with u.


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In evening when nandini goes to her room to complete her homework


She opens and what she saw make her shocked


She found 2 big chocolates in her bag


Then she remember that in play period manik goes canteen and then in her class and and she confirmed that these chocolates manik puts in her bag


She smiles on his antics


Then she put them again in her bag and completes her work


At evening when they doing dinner nandini tell her parents about that lady and what she do today


Her parents feel proud after listen this and hurt also that people leaves their parents like this


They make decision to send that MAAI to a OLD HOUSE where old people leaves


And they want to took all the responsibility of her


Next day they all go collage and and ask to that lady to come their home but she denies then they after lot of tries send her OLD house where old peoples leaves and take full responsibility


School also feels proud on her


That day manik also come home and when he check his bag he found 5 big chocolate in his bag in which 2 the same which he gives her yesterday


He smiles on her these antics


Then next day he puts 2 more chocolate in that chocolates and thay become 7 and put them in her bag in play period in nandini bag


When she return home she found so many choco late and she again smile and knows that manik do this


Next day she again make them 10 and put in manik bag without his knowledge


When manik come home he found 10 chocolates


These games continue like this for so many days


One day some students assignment file is diaper and teacher said to check the bag of all the students and then they found so many chocolates in her bag


Teacher said y so many chocolates


Nandni make an excuse- today is my bday so I take for my friends


Then the teacher said


Then y u not distribute till now, its 7th period next is play period


And then she herself distribute those chocolates to all the class


Nandini got very said and runs from their she did not go for play


Manik notic this that nandini didn't come


He go to canteen and saw a sad nandini


Manik- Nandu y u sitting here sad alone


Nandini- that teacher distribute all those chcocolats t class I will take them for u but now I don't have money


Manik also got angry after hear this but then seen nandini said face he thought to cheer her up


He goes to canteen and buys a dairy milk silk of 120 and come near nandini


Then they both eat that chocolate and how their story starts.


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Note- Guys this chocolate drama is my real life story part.


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Then they start to like each other and in 11th manik and 10th nandini


Manik propose nandini and she said yes


Then


They become couples


Then it comes


Manik in 12th and nandini in 11th


Manik have subject science maths and nandini has subject science bio.


Manik said her to take math but doctor is her dream so manik want to fulfil her all promises


Then it comes 12th end


Manik passed with 80 % in cbse board and got admission in SPACE ACADAMY


Then he promise to nandu to keep in contact by mobile.


Then said


Manik- nandu promise me that u will join SPACE after 12th for your study of doctor.


Nandini- Okay manik I will promise


Nandini promise


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Next PART 2 - Present Track, Manik Druv 1st Meet.

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Guys here is Part 1B

Full of manan

Tell me how is it

Leaves your comment and likes please


NOTE- Guys 1st 1A part is not MANAN but this is FULL MANAN please give me Response.



Vicky Singhalwal

Edited by vickysinghalwal - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely update..Full of manan thank u...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow this story is so chocolaty hehehege
Update soon
Will b waiting
Thanks fir the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice interesting continue soon

Dhruv will become friends with manik and Nandu as they are not selfish like harshad

Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chocolate story was interesting lol
Amazing update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow lovely chocolicious update

Such a sweet gesture of yours to get close to the girl you fall in love with

Continue soon and thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Lovelylav7

Lovely update..Full of manan thank u...



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