MaNan TS : Coz You're Mine [Part Two Updated - PG 22] 28 Nov

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Cooki

@Cooki

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#51

It's an interesting story dear..
I like this version of them...
Continue soon..
Looking forward to read further...

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estherzac

@estherzac

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Amazing update...
Loved it...
I just love your writing...
Loved nandus'and maniks'character...u described them beautifully...
Hope the plan works...
Cabir...the best friend anyone could have
Continue soon...excited. ..
Do pm me when you update next...
Stay blessed...
Keep writing...ur amazing

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Adya Agrawal

@Adya05

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#53

It was just WOW di..

I loved it.. It sometimes hurts to read this kinda things..

I think ki there must be people jinhe reality mein aise treat kiya hoga..

Unhe kaisa lagta hoga.. But in stories its different..

Do update the next part soon..

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nandumunmun

@nandumunmun

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Aawww... It was so so interesting n beautiful but u stopped at such crucial point...
Pls update soon.. Your every update is like wow... I just want to read a different story from u.. So pls go on..!
Will be waiting..:)

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iqra286

@iqra286

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Awww 😛 😛 juhi dt was impressive 👏 really loved d concept 😳 really hate manik paresnts n more dn dm hate those badtards to whom his dad gave his custody 😡 really loved biraaa as he always a friend in need as well as indeed 😳 😃 plzz update nxt soon 😊

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parthsamthaanvv

@parthsamthaanvv

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Awesome concept mahn !

Eagerly waiting for the next part

Update soon

And do continue ..

Thanks for the pm :))

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asmi.6

@asmi.6

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Nahiii naaa juhi.

Aise dhamki se kar darao mat yaar :P

You can't leave it here. I desperately want to know what the plan is? End mei manik would be convinced woh toh pta hai but what are nandi and cabir upto ? :O

You have to give the next part to this. :D

Thaaank you so much for the pm :**