#2 MaNan SS: ZAHENASEEB [On Hold] reason on pg 123 - Page 45

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Posted: 9 years ago
don't worry she will be fine soon..don't loose hope and stay calm everything will be fine soon..I will pray for her...
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Posted: 9 years ago
I don't who is this person is...but the way you have written about her tells that she is very very close to you...i just hope she will be fine and my prayers are with her and you!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
take ur time ..n may ur loved one recovers soon 😊
we all wish her good health
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi
How r u & ur friend hope she is fine
i am praying for her she will be fine soon inshallah
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Posted: 9 years ago
Its absolutely ok

Plzzz take ur tym

Health comes first dear

Hope your loved ones get well soon


Plzzz pn me next part pretty pretty please whenever you post


Vidhi
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Posted: 9 years ago


Chapter#26


"Can I love you tonight" he asked lovingly Looking into her eyes


She smiled and nodded her head in a yes,manik was about to get up when she at once encircled her arms around his neck,she pulled him with a jerk he was left baffled on her sudden boldness


"I love you" she whispered ever seductively


He smirked,


"Really" he replied huskily


"Koi doubt??"she said moving her brows promptly


"Tou show me" he winked


"Manik sochloo...badmei mat kehna kuch...I mean you haven't seen the REAL Mrs malhotra yet" she said ruffling his hair


He was loving it,and was constantly smiling


"No no,why would I say anything,mein tou chahta hu ...to see the REAAAL Mrs malhotra"he said with a smirk


She moved her hands down ,not making him know, and at once started tickling him.


He started laughing not that he was feeling ticklish ..but on her cute antics


"Nandini.. Nandini... stop you know na I don't feel ticklish"he said sitting upright and trying to stop her,finally he held her hands and threw her head back on the pillow hovering himself over her


"pata bhi hei...tou try bhi kiun kerty ho"he said and she made a pout


He sucked her pout,and then bent his head and started nuzzling in her neck,he started with slow wet kisses all over her milky and silky neck,in the meantime she was ruffling his hair lovingly with a constant smile


"Because i want to surrender myself to you always"she whispered in a slight moan


He smiled and looked at her face,and there they had an eyelock wearing beautiful smiles on both their faces


He came up on her face and smashed his lips on hers,the kiss was not a slow one it was of craving, that they had been since morning ,he started chewing her lips and his hands went on their own adventure,clutching her naked navel ,he moved his hands under her drape and pressed her there over the fabric ,she was moaning between the kiss,their bodies were moving wildly,feeling the need of air he pulled apart and took a deep breath,he looked at her she was blushing the darkest color of red not having enough of her he once again took her for a passionate kiss, finally sucking the hell out of her he pulled apart


"Huhhh...I can never get enough of this"he said Tracing his thumb on her lips


She blushed,manik moved a bit and then laid beside her,and nandini placed her head on his arm with her hands on his chest,he embraced her lovingly


"Nandini"


"Hmm" she hummed


"tum poocho gi nhi k aj subha mene achanak kiun kaha office janei k Leah"he said


"Manik I know tum mujhie khud batao gei whenever you'll feel like telling...so mene isi Leah nhi poocha"she replied smilingly


He too smiled


"I must be very special to get you" he spoke in a lovely tone


"Umm...aik min... Ye compliment mere Leah tha k tumharei Leah" she asked raising her eyebrows


"Of course mere Leah" he replied in a matter of fact tone


"Yes you are very special... Special to me...for my life..."she said kissing on the corner of his jawline and the started stroking his mole on the lips with a tear in her eyes


"I love you so much nandini... And I mean this 4 letter word for you...trust me doosro k Leah it must be a word but for me ...you are my lifeline nandini.."now he said in a loving yet solemn tone



"Manik you don't have to say all this because I already know it...or Wese bhi ham konsa aj lovers bhanei hei...arrei we are tou BFF's too na ..."she said in her joyous tone


He smiked and then said,


"Yes...and no gloominess okay"giving a buss on her forehead


"Manik how was the dinner by the way" she asked


"It was very yumi ...or Wese bhi biryani tou hei he mere fav"he said licking his lips


Nandini stared at him licking his lips and at once she hugged him tightly


"Arey kia hua" he asked


She nodded her head while blushing


"No kia..."he retorted


"Umm..nothing na " she spoke not making any eye contact


"Unknowingly he again licked his lips and she again looked at the other side,and at once something clicked in his mind he came up with an idea


"Wese abhi tou tum bohat bold hory thy remember" he said Tracing his fingers seductively on her tummy


"Manik" she held his fingers and blushed frowning.


He at once sat upright


"Kia hua manik" she asked on getting confused of his act


He smirked not letting her know and at once hovered over her


"Manik" she said and sighed


"Jaan" he Looked into her eyes


"Hmm" she replied seductively


"Love you soo much" he again confessed and she again smiled


"Why are you smiling" he asked


"Because tum bohat cute lagtei ho ye boltei huei" she said with a wink


"Achaa...lemme show you my cutness"he said and again started with his love session


The entire night passed out beautifully, with lots of laughter, giggling moaning and cries followed by kisses.


...


Next morning on the table,




"So manik ko kal ka dinner pasand aya nandu??" Nyonika asked with a wink


"Matlab...mommy you know na I always love your hand made food..tou kiun poochry hei ap"manik said casually


"What?" Nyonika asked in confusion and then looked at nandini


"kia hua..why are you guys staring each other like this"he asked


"Nandu tunei manik ko bataia nhi.." She asked in a I caught you tone


"wo...mom..actually"she stammered


"Kia..??MOM kia nhi bataia plz ..someone tell me " he asked curiously


"Arrey mere piarei betei kal apnei Jo biryiani khai wo apki mommy ne nhi balkeee..."


"Nandini... Seriously" he asked in excitement


"Yess" nyo replied


"Oh God...tumnei mujhie kal kiun nhi bataia"he asked holding her hand


"Ahmm ahmm" nyonika coughed teasingly


"Kiun manik agar bata dety tou tu kia usko koi gift deta?" She asked


"Of course" he replied


"Acha wo tou mujhei mere bety k face k upper Jo beautiful glow hei us se lagra hei gift usko mil chuka" she said with a wink and this turned nandini into the darkest color of beautiful crimson


"Mom" she said and was about to get up when she stopped her


"Achaa achaa...no teasing breakfast tou kero" she said normally yet lovingly


Dhruv too joined them for the dinner and then they had family breakfast lovingly


...


In malhotra industries,


"Mr malhotra I wanna talk to you ..."khurana said


"G bolei respectable Mr khurrana" manik said mockingly


This made khurrana stand straight


"Umm wo...I wanted to ask when is Mr viren malhotra coming back" he asked


"Kiun...I think dad ho ya mein hu aik he baat hei" he replied in a bossy tone


"Yeah but this work is between him and me so unka hona is important" he said seriously


"Well I'm not bound of telling you this...so plz Jo kaam hei mujhei bataei" manik said


...



Next evening,




"Nandu beta tunnei kabse clinic rejoin kerna?" Asked nyonika as she came to the pool side where nandini was sitting with a magazine


"Mom...I guess in two days...or these two days na I wanna spend with you and dad too,"she said smilingly as nyonika seated


"Beta tum hamarei saath he ho.." She replied


"I know mom but..."suddenly she got a call


She was about to cut the call as she was talking to her mom right now but nyonika asked her to pick up


"Excuse me" she said and then received the call


"Hello..."she said and then after talking she cut the call


"Kia hua??" nyo asked anxiously


"Umm...it was soha...actually she said k there's some other doctor who's trying to talk to "uncle Tacker" to replace me...so bus wahi bata rhi thy "nandini narrated


"oh per I'm sure Mr tacker won't do any such thing ...!!she exclaimed


"yeah"she replied


"Momm...I'll be back mein dad ko check ker k aty hu"she announced and ran upstairs


And nyonika smiled


...



It was noon,and the door bell was ringing constantly,

It was time for nyonika to take a nap,dhruv studying and nandini was too reading her doctors book.


"Kon hoga and why isn't kaka opening the door" she thought


Again she heard the bell,she got up and went upto the door,as soon as she opened the door,the two two people shouted and then mukty jumped on her for a bone crushing hug


"Nandinii...kese heiii" she said tightening the hug


"Muktyyy muktyy ..mein bilkul theek hu" she replied as she released her


"Hello behna" cabir said side hugging her


"Hy cabir" she too replied


"You guys were tou coming after a day right" she asked


"Han anei tou walei they per phir socha jaldee chalei jatei hei kiunk kuch logo ko tease kernei ka mouka nhi mil rha tha"he said shamelessly


And nandini blushed


"Acha ab hum ander ajaei ya sari batei yaha he kerni hei" mukty said


"No no. I mean ..yes come ..come in"


"Manik,dhruv ,aunty uncle??sab kaha hei...puri family gaib hei"cabir asked on not finding them


Then she told about Everyone


"Ooo so manik ne sachemi sari responsibilities Lely ...wow that's awesome ..."canir exclaimed


"Guys tum dono ne lunch kia?"nandini asked


"Umm nopes" mukty replied


"Okay. ...tum dono betho meein khana lagaty hu" nandini said lovingly


"Nahi nandini its okay ...we are alright bus manik se milnei aey they ...and had to talk about a concert so..."mukty stopped nandini


"So what...manik ismt home or Wese bhi uske anei tak tum dono hunger strike ler raho gei kia??"she retorted


And both chuckled


"Okay boss jese apki marzi" cabir replied dramatically


...


Back in the malhotra industries,


"Sir ,everything has been guided to the men ,and you don't have to worry now,apka kam hojaei ga" the PA told manik


"Hmm,good...just make sure k they keep following that j****"he said angrily


As soon as the PA left manik sat all frustrated on the chair


He was hell annoyed , suddenly his eyes fell on the name flashing on his phone and it did that magic,turning that frownfull head and curling his lips into a smile


"Good evening patidev aj Ghar anei ka mood nhi ki??" She asked in her joyous tone


And he smiled hearing that


"" mood tou hei bohat ziada hei."he replied with a smirk


"Acha tou kab ana hei"she asked


"U know na no matter what per at least raat ko mein apni Jaan se duur nhi reh skta" he replied in a teasing tone stressing on the word raat on which she blushed


"Aree aree someone is blushing" he said lovingly


"Manik"she took his name as in to say to be quiet


"Anyway jalde ajao mukty and cabir bhi aei huei hein" she informed


And talking few more mins with lots of lovey dovey talks they hung up



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Hope it was upto the mark or maybe near it...thankyou for the love and support love you alll
Do not forget to hit the like button and leave a comment plz Matlab agar 200 ppl can like na then 200 plz beshak aik word he likh do plzzz...!!
Keep me and my love one I prayers
Love
Fatima :*
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Posted: 9 years ago
jaani...tussi gleat ho...
res...
sunday ko unres

Unres

Sorry..sorry..sorry...kaan pakadke sorry.and u know the reason y i got late...

Yess...toh rocher..update was superrr amazing and hawwt...hehe...
I loved real mrs.malhotra...that was super awesome...

I toh have become ur fan...

There bff wali baatein...i loved sooo much...u know matter of fact..;))

Manik is such a tease...huhh...ganda baccha...bt i loved the way u write their ahmm...ahmm...

Aah..nyonika...bechari nandu...hehe...sab kitna tease karte hain usko..

Urghh...iss mr.kh...no..no..no...respectable mr.khurrana...uska na vo electrician wala treatment hona chahiye...huhh...

Bina kuchh likhe u scared me...huhh...vo door wala sequence aisa laga...jaise nandu ko kuch hoga...u know villains work...
Hehe...bt i loved cabir and mukti's entry...
Manik kya karne ki soch raha hai...
And cabir ki draamebaazi...uff...

Har baar ki tarah...this was superrr awesome update...har genre mila...waiting for this khurrana and manik ka show time...

Continue soon...par sirf tabhi...wen u get well...samjhi...

Love ya...

LOVE AND HUGS
SANJANA



Edited by krazzy_parthian - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update honey. Just loved it.
Manan moments are fabulous.
Too good writing of urs.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Love it
Cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow.. It wS full of manan.. awesome. Really loved it. .
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly

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