Originally posted by: Snehasn
Hello doll!!! 😛
I must say you've very beautiful blessings of God...seriously you wrote very well...in fact in this story I've many more scenes which is really close to me and of course the lane of memoir's i think ZEHNASEEB is all about two bbffs who become friends and gradually fall for each other but realize after aparting from each other... This phase is always confusing... Kyun ki we think ki they are our best friend but stupid heart k toh kuch aur hii plan's hote hai.. Seriously whom we know from in and out... With whom we share our almost everything.. In short whom we make our PERSONAL DIARY for that one person we can't realize our feelings..huh..
Ajeeb hai but awesome bhii hai...
So the story Start's with two bbffs...who aparted in childhood for futher studies... One remained back and one went to Abroad... Those years without seeing or talking to each other is really tough...he came to his motherland back...by becoming famous Doctor and she is also a famous doctor... The position where they can introduce themselves proudly to other's... The proud which we always have for our friends in childhood will always gets doubled when we see them they are responsible and settled their career...
Then the proud in their parents eye's its just priceless... Same with his mom dad...mamma k laar le..dad k ahem... It was just awesome
Then here nandu's hospital scene where she's popular and very kind hearted... Gosh!! Jerkshad not again... I was literally scared by thinking his action's... He mistaken his so called INFATUATION as LOVE... Which is obvious for one who don't have senses...then bracelet scene was good...thank god Manik came in right time and punched that jerkshad face...
I thought he will create some scenes between Manan but you didn't done all that sort off:*
Then their meeting after so long time...those sensation which their heart is creating but mind is controlling... It was good...
Then Aliya's entry...she is sweet heart in your story...and nandu's bestie...its less in forums.. No fab5 in your story its interesting... Aliya is ashamed of her brother deeds...nandu's kind girl so she didn't disclosed which happened in hospital... Its really touching...
Then manik to meet Nandu's parents... Then suddenly the alliance of two besties... Which manik confused as Aliya...but got to know its Nandini... Then their terrace conversation was beautiful... Then the approval from both to be bride and groom... Then celebration Start's... Kajal auntie and Manik's bonding was too good same with Nyonika auntie and Nandu...
This is the things which we get to adore if we get our bbfs as life partner... Both mamma's are always care's and showers lots of affection and love to their child's friend... Who also gradually become their son/daughter which changes to son/daughter in law... Parents are really hawk eye's to see the spark between their children's chemistry...
Then Nandu's proposal was awesome... Manik's desperation... Pic credit... Its all too good... Their childhood journey was awesome... Their night under star's near seashore was just magical... Manik's song was good...Nandu's emotions... Their first kiss...its all too good...
Then Cabir's and Mukti entry...was nice...then cabir's mocking... Mukku's over excited behavior... Then bond between them it's all adorable... Specially the girls bonding... Muklya gelled so early with each other...
Then haldi...damn its unforgettable for her and me too:$...AAHHH...i always end up like this wherever i read haldi word...aaiyyiiiooo...
Huhh...it was all??...you can add you own words in place of question mark...;))...
Then sangeet was good...topi waale's entry..
Manan were again awesome... Pic's edit its again awwal number...
Then their terrace romance was good...his desperation to mark her as him...its beyond words feelings... Then their D day...finally they married without any drama's...twists and turns...then their passionate night was too hawwt!!..plss don't expect more word's from me...coz you know I'm the most shy person when it comes to physical proximity... Hehehe... Aapko jo sochne hai woh sab socho...par ham isse aage kuch nahi keh sakte...so from here it's going to be your favorite person's point of view... Now I'm vanishing bbyee...;))
Hey doll awesome writer you are... Hehehe... Jaan k body khaap ne lage by the boldness of your story... So I think it's not the good idea to say in details so I'll cut short everything here..
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Hmm...so the first morning after their last encounter was good...its obvious for the bride to get shy after witnessing themselves in those compromising state... It's always good to wake up in your love's arms by seeing their beautiful smile and the glow on their face for which you're the only sole reason...then those guilty stricken thought's always kills by seeing your love smiling still in pain given by your wildness.. But those proud and satisfaction when your love assure us by saying it's our right to give that pain to them it's the first time i think every guy gets tears of joyness...its unexplainable... Its unforgettable and its most priceless feeling... I mean how can a girl trust their man this much that they surrender their most precious asset too the man of their life...
It's just awesome... Then their honeymoon time...gosh how every guy can this much possessive about their wife's... Like if any one see their love in bad thought's they can break their Bone's in that place only... Its good...
Then Paris site seeing was good...their honeymoon suite... Their PDA...Cruise date... Pics edit...Everything was awesome... I don't say anything briefly but its all good...then their final day in Paris...her insecurity about his timing's... Its really genuine... In our Case i was the one to get insecure by my single piece lady love...who don't have any insecurities...
It's all good doll...then they're back to India
Hope nothing serious with Raj...don't seperate these two in any damn situations...
Good going doll
I'm taking your leave from here... Bbiee...
Stay blessed our Crispiiiee Doll 😛
Goshhh I'm so overwhelmed so so sooo ...thankyou so much for this long long comment means alot...awww di u don't have to say anything I know my di is shy ;) or haldi sun ker apki condition to acceptable hei hahahaha
I'm just glad that u liked it hahaha question mark samajh gai thy mei😉😆
Anddd hottie papa this is the first time a boy has commented as In kia pata kisi ne pehlei kia ho per apko to mein janty huna...I was too shivering while reading this i loved to read your pov too thanks alooott hahaha
I hope mene koi extra haddd nhi paar ki :P
And I won't be separating them no worries :*
And I have to write one more OS on you so apko mere help kerni hei okay..???
Thankuuu once again for taking time and reading my poor story hahaha
Love you both :*
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