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nami169

@nami169

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Posted: 9 years ago

#541

amazing update

manik and dj's conversation was funny

waiting for nandini's birthday

update soon

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surbhi08

@surbhi08

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Posted: 9 years ago

#542

Hey nice chapter

But i can't see more of manan separation

Miss manan scene in this chapter

But no problem bcoz i know its result is much much happier

So yehh finally nandini birthday come haww

Manik - dj scene was nice

Now waiting for manik's princess bdy party

Update next chapter soon

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Rochee1803

@Rochee1803

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Posted: 9 years ago

#543

It was wonderful badi maa n maniks prep are going good as well as for abhi n nandu awww nandu poor soul she is missing n craving for his touch cuddle kiss n indeed she was missing him n now ye jo tha "Aaa nandini" its all planned as nandu ka birthday h ab next part jldi sweta eagerly waiting ...!!

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pinky

@kimnana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#544

nandani restless without manik presence

he too wants to give her best surprise ..

manik is her world ...loved the way he invited dj

ty for pm

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krithika_g

@krithika_g

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Posted: 9 years ago

#545

First of all THANK U fr continuing ur FF..

Am new to this forum..

I mus say u r a very good writer..

n nw abt the chappie:

It was too good..

I feel sorry for nandini..can't c her crying..bt her wait s gonna b worth it!!!

Abt Manik-Damini convo..Luvly..Monstu turned Majnu Manik..❤️

Manik-DJ-Der talks cant get better than this😎Bt sumwer deep down I want that old DJ-Manik back..

Waiting for d story to unfold!!!!!

PS:Sorry fr d late comment!!!

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Sutapa Sarbabhom

@sutapasarbabhom

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Posted: 9 years ago

#546

fabulos updt
dj n manik convo was so funny
waiting for nandini birthday party
tanx for pm

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ruchi116

@ruchi116

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Posted: 9 years ago

#547

Awesome update poor Mandy cried so much nandu me itne waqt we birthday celebrate nhi kiya hair kahi wo naraj na ho Jaye. Agar ho bhi jayegi to manik jab manayega tab maza aayega.
Update soon

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Swagatika

@sws2

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Posted: 9 years ago

#548

Niceee

Eagerly waiting for the birthday surprise

Thanks for pm

😊

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Sweta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#549

Teaser

Soon it was the time for cake cutting; Manik asked the server to bring in the cake. Soon they wheeled in the huge three - tier princess dresser cake. It was beautifully iced with baby pink color. "do I have to cut this? It's so pretty." Nandini asked innocently inviting laughs from everyone. "yes princess." Manik replied and then she held his hands and they both cut the cake amidst the chorus of happy birthday to you."

Soon she took out a piece to feed only to find both DJ and manik ready for the first bite. "Here we present the sandwich Nandini made by Manik and DJ, may her soul rest in peace." Cabir said on seeing the situation and both DJ and Manik passed deathly glare to him which made him shut up. "Nandini you will feed me first I am the eldest one here." DJ announced Manik smiled and said "Nandini you will feed me first I am the youngest one here." Cabir frowned and said "Manik! Nandini is the youngest one here not you." "I will feed you both together." Nandini said as she saw the tension escalalting. She took two pieces in her hands and feed both of them.