#2 Tum Hi Ho - manan ff (imp. Note pg-136)thread 3 pg-1 - Page 52

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: saithanmayee

awesome update

really loved it

it was indeed shocking

thanks for the pm 😊

sorry for not commenting for the previous part

I am busy with my exams I hope you understand


Thanx... n i can understand dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
Dear seriously very shocking update...
Starting part was amazing...
Um really scare yaar... now let see...
Continue very soon...
Thanks for pm...

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Posted: 9 years ago
AMAZING UPDATE👏
PLZ UPDATE SOON
THANKYOU FOR PM

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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for the pm
Really shocking update! !
Riya's obsession is really shocking!!
She want to marry him that is really sick!!
For nandini manik agreed even!!
Let's see what's next!!
Waiting for next
😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Really a shocking update
Arrggh evil riya
Waiting for the next update
Thnkz 4 the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mayar206

AMAZING UPDATE👏

PLZ UPDATE SOON
THANKYOU FOR PM


Thanx...
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Posted: 9 years ago
it was amazing, shocking update. Please post the next part asap. Can't wait to see what will happen next. Thanks for the pm. Tack care of yourself. Keep smiling 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sammy1920

it was amazing, shocking update. Please post the next part asap. Can't wait to see what will happen next. Thanks for the pm. Tack care of yourself. Keep smiling 😊


Thanx...
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice updt bt again with a shock...😲
how many shocks have in ur stock??😆
waiting fr the next...cont soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
TUM HI HO

Part : 96

Manik is shouting nandini... loudly n crying setting on knees n fab5 n navay reaches there except Alia come n get to shocked to see manik like this n they all sit with manik n ask from him
Cabir ask putting hand on his shoulder "manik... Kya hua SB think hai na " manik looking downward having tear in eyes "nandini... " n manik get up n say " mujhe Jana hoga " mukti ask manik " manik... SB thik toh hai na " n manik tell
everything to them
N everybody get shocked to hear this n manik say "i m going "
Cabir say " manik... we have do something tu agr aise chla jaega toh fir "
Manik says crying "i don't have time cabir... nandini... kis hal hogi pta nhi "
Cabir says " main jata hn but tu vha jkr shddhi krlega "

Mukti says "cabir i have plan "
Navya says having tear in eyes" humhe nandini ki bhut chinta ho rhi hai voh phle hi itni weak hai "
Mukti says " manik... u go n jaise uhne kha vohe kr n we tell u after in msg. " n he about to rush n cabir put hand on his shoulder n say " iss br hum nandini ko kuch nhi hone dege manik.. na babies ko na nandini ko " n manik goes

Cabir says " mukti wht's yr plan" navya says " mukti... bolo " n mukti says " cabir.. tu suno " n mukti tell everything n navya sadly says " kash yeh plan work kare " cabir give her a side hug n say " navya sb thik hoga " mukti says " guyz we don't have time let's go "

**scene shifted to temple **
manik reach there n immediately gets out of the car n see dat no one is dere n a phone call come n it's riya call
Manik pick up the call brust in anger n say " wht the hell do u want ? " n riya say "manik... calm down
U know ki main kya kya kr skti n mujhe tum pr bilkul trust nhi that's why i want to check dat khi u came wid police or not " n manik anger increases more n "riya... "n riya says " don't try to shout on me k vrna u have to pay for this "n manik stops for nandini n riya say i m sending the address come there "n she cuts the call " n manik punch the car n shouts why u doing this " n manik sits in car n tear r not stopping falling n he says " no main tumhai lekr aunga nandini voh bhi bilkul thik "n manik start the car n manik message to cabir about the change of place n manik reaches at that place n it is a big house n manik sees it fully protected by gurds n he get out of car n seeing here n there n little far away from him a car is standing n in that car nandini is sitting n she sees manik from window of car n start beating her tied hand on car n crying badly n only sound is coming from her mouth uhmm... n continously bagging the window n manik is about to see there n nandini now started beating the door with more force n manik about see her but riya came in front of her nandini loose her hope n stop beating on the mirror n closes her eyes n tears fall from her eyes n she crys n she thinks " manik... plz do something yeh ladhki is so bad u don't know manik if u got married wid her na than everything will be distroyed" n she crys by touching her forehead on car n prays that "plz yeh marriage mt hone dena"

Manik shouts " nandini kha hai " n riya says "have some patience manik... phle adr toh ao n she hold her hand n make her come in the villa n manik give angry look to her but he as helpless he can't do anything because of nandini n he reaches inside n he gave him the shervani n says "manik... mujhe pta tum ready hokr nhi aoge so i have arrange all the thinks n he go inside one room n riya call goons n say "nandini ko adr leke ao "

Goons take out nandini from car n holding her come inside n nandini trying to get away from there hold
manik come outside n he stops there n tears start coming out from his eyes n he says slowly nandini... n nandini is standing n goons r standing holding her n her hand r tied n mouth also n nandini also crying n he came toward her n riya was not dere n he comes to her n hold her face n nandini only crying n looking at his eyes n both r having tear of fear of having apart from eachother n also seeing riya condition n than manik is about to beat the goons n riya says " don't dare to dat manik
Manik sochna bhi mt tum yha se nandini ko lekr chle jaoge aur sb thik ho jae "n manik stops n riya says manik... kitni bar btau n now iss glti ki ke liye suffer toh krna padhega vrna u will not understand my power" nandini look shockingly towards riya n riya side away da manik n some goons also hold manik n she go n slap nandini... n manik throw the goons wid all his pressure comes to riya n shouts riya... how dare u n nandini was crying only n she is not able to believe that all this happening n manik throws riya on floor n hold nandini face n remove the tap from her mouth n say " u okay na " n kiss on her face again n again n riya is brusting wid anger
Riya get up n shouts "manik... u done very wrong u will regret for this whole life
Now i will show wht can i do manik mahlotra " she says to goons to hold manik " n goons again hold manik n manik leaves nandini hand n nandini says manik... " n manik says " leave me " n than riya goes to her says " now u see manik... "n manik shockingly looking it riya n manik shouts " don't dare to do anything to nandini " n riya sides away the gooms n hold nandini one arm n say " bhut pyr krtr ho na isse Aisa pyaar mujhse kyo nhi n than she flung nandini on floor n manik shouts " nandini... " n nandini fall in somebody man hand n he control him from falling n manik see him n nandini look upward n see him n he is cabir n nandini says slowly cabir... n he help to stand nandini n goes to riya " just stop all this... " n manik trying hard to get alway from the hold of goons n riya says " tum adr kaise ae " n manik says " seriously riya u think dat i m so fool ki main tumhse shaddhi krne vla tha " n manik give evil smile to her n riya is not understanding wht they r talking about n she say " u can't do anything " n she take the gun out that is hidden in langha n points toward towards nandini n say "i don't care ab jo bhi ho but i will not leave her " n goons also hold cabir n nandini got sacred n than she feels everthing blur around her n than she listen the gun shoot sound n manik shouting her name n she fall down

Scene shifted to hospital

Nandini is lying on hospital bed n she open her eyes slowly n feels somebody holding her hand n see manik sleeping beside her holding her hand n see another side of bed in cradle her babies r playing


n nandini smiles on seeing them tear n tear fall from her that fall on manik face who is sleeping very close to her face n manik immiadiatly wakes up by her tear n he hug her tightly n say "thank gud u wake up " n than nandini also hold him tightly n say slowly "manik.." n manik says " nandini... u scared me a lot "n manik break the hug n nandini about to ask something " ma.." but manik put his finger on lips n say" sh... " n he get up n take one baby in his hand n put on nandini chest n nandini holding n smiling n tear fall from eyes n her happiness is vissible from her eyes n manik come close to her face n kiss on her forehead n both look into eachother eyes deeply


So kaisa lga suprise.. n the pics.. chlo.. now.. i m waiting for yr.. comments..
Which next update do u want.. with the upadate of tum hi ho
1.mujhe teri jarrorat hai
2.khamoshiyaan
Bbye.. tc
Stay blessed
Love Mehak



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Edited by Mehaklovely - 9 years ago

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