#2 Tum Hi Ho - manan ff (imp. Note pg-136)thread 3 pg-1 - Page 12

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Posted: 9 years ago


TUM HI HO

Part : 78

NOTE : GRAB YR TISSUE

Night time

Nandini standing in front of mirror n moving her hand on tummy n manik sitting on couch n doing some work on lappy

Nandini : manik main kitne moti ho gye hn na

Manik : meri mottu chotu nandini

Nandini go toward manik n say manik... u r also calling me motti

Manik getting up n say " nandini.. yeh toh kuch bhi nhi age tum aur bhi motti hogi tb kya hoga "

Nandini : manik.. main kitni ajeeb lagungi (nandini make faces )

Manik pull nandini closer to him holding her waist n say " tb bhi tum mere liye sbse beautifull hi hogi "

Nandini moving her finger on his face n say " oh really manik "

Manik start coming more closer to nandini n say " really "

N he give a cute kiss on her lips n nandini smiles than nandini hold manik face slammed his lips n manik hold nandini waist tightly n pull her more closer to him n than after some they both stops n manik rested his forehead on nandini head n both taking long long breath

After sometime they take the dinner n resting on couch nandini sitting in manik arms
Her head on manik chest

Nandini : manik... ek bt bolu

Manik : hmm...

Nandini : hum na kabhi bhi bacho.. pr pressure nhi dalege kissi bhi bt ka

Manik : haan u r right

Nandini : manik...
Mere mn pta kya kr hai kl subha utho toh mere bache mere sth main ho

Manik : nandini..
Wait toh mujhse bhi nhi ho rha

Nandini : manik yeh humare pyaar ki nishani hoge

Manik : true love

Nandini : manik agr iss br anything happen them toh main jindha nhi rhai paungi

Manik : nandini kissi ko kuch nhi hoga okay

Nandini : hmm...

Nandini : let's go on a night walk

Manik : look at the time
It's 12:00am
Nandini vaise bhi aaj sone main late ho gya hai

Nandini : manik mujhe bilkul bhi need nhi aa rhi
Chlo na plz

Manik : okay..

After sometime they moving on the road holding eachother hand n little bit raindrops also falling on them

Nandini : manik i love u so much

Manik : i love u too my baby doll
Nandini : I'm so lucky to have you as my hubby

Manik : n i m lucky to have you as my wife

N both smile looking into eachother eyes n than suddenly everything get change n somebody hit a rod on manik head n manik shouts aa.. but he didn't leave nandini hand n from other he put on his head n nandini shouts manik... n than one men came n he hold nandini arms n try to snatch her from manik n nandini shouting manik...
Manik try to stop but 2 3 man comes n start bitting him n nandini screming than nandini hand leaves from manik n manik try to control them goons but can't n nandini see that men was adi n he standing holding nandini arm n nandini trying go towards manik n saying "plz adi manik ko kuch mt karo (crying )
Manik..."

manik is trying his best to stop them but can't n than manik faint on road

Nandini :manik...
Plz adi manik ko chodh do main tumhare hath jodhti hn plz

Adi stops them goons n manik lying on road n trying to get up but can't nandini again again shouting manik...
Manik...

adi start taking nandini with him n manik slowly saying nandini.. n trying his best to get up but can't n

Adi taking nandini towards his car n nandini screaming plz adi mujhe manik ke pass jane do plz

Adi touching her face nandini... plz stop saying this
Tum meri ho

Nandini : plz mujhe ek br manik pass jane do
Uski halt bhut khrb hai

Adi : sh...
Kya manik...
Manik...
Lga rkha hai abhi toh maine ushai chodh diya agr tum mujhe preshn karogi na toh main ushai jan se mr dunga

Nandini crying n on the other n manik saying nandini... n calls cabir

Cabir n navya lying on bed n cabir phones rings

Navya : cabir.. itne rt ko kissa ka phn aa rhai hai

Cabir take his phn n see manik name n thinks manik ka itni rt ko phn

Cabir : hello manik...

Manik : tu jldi se mall road pr aaja

Cabir : manik... tu thik toh hai na
Hua kya hai

Navya : kya hua cabir

N cabir puts phn on speaker

Manik : voh nandini ke sth kuch bhi kr skta hai tu jldi aa

Navya : kya hua hai nandini ko

Manik tells everything to them

Cabir : manik tu tension mt le hum abhi aa rhai

N adi push her in the car n nandini fall on car sit n her tummy get hurt by n pain started in her tummy n she start shouting aaa... holding her tummy
N adi sees her n say " nandini main tumhai hurt nhi krna chta tha
I love u nandini tum aisa kyo krti ho

Nandini : aa...
Adi agr mere bacho ko kuch ho gya na i will not leave u

Adi : vaise main in bacho ko abort karva rha tha agr apne aap inhe kuch hogya toh yeh toh aur bhi acha hai na

Nandini : adi.. tum pgl ho gye ho
Aaa...

Adi : nandini tum chinta kyo kr rhi ho
Hum apne bache karenge na

Nandini : pani...
Pani..
Aaa...

Adi thinks nandini ko kuch hona nhi chiye main uske bina kya karunga
Mujhe khi se bhi pani lana padhega

Adi : main pani lekr ata ho

Adi goes to find water n nandini holding belly loudly shouts manik... in pain
N manik listening her voice n he get up n start running to find her n than he see her n go toward her n hold her n nandini : ma..
Ma..nik tum thik toh ho na
(touching her face)
Aa aah...

Manik : nandini...

Nandini : hu humare babies ko kuch nhi hoga na

Manik : nandini kuch nhi hoga...

Manik start the car n nandini shouting aa... aa... n manik quickly driving the car n in b/w holding nandini face n saying nandini kuch nhi hoga n nandini eyes got close

Manik : nandini
Nandini... kya hua

N they reaches hospital n manik holding her enters in hospital n than doc. Puts nandini on stretcher n than manik also got faint n they also take manik.. to ot



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they reaches hospital n manik holding her enters in hospital n than doc. Puts nandini on stretcher n than manik also got faint n they also put manik on strecher
On the other hand n adi reaches n nandini is not there n than he sees cavya arrives there n he hides himself

N they come out of the car

Cabir : yha toh koe bhi nhi hai

Navya : call manik
Mujhe bhut tension ho rhi hai

Cabir : relax navya

Cabir calls manik n doc. Pic the call n say tell him that they r in hospital n than immediately they reaches hospital n waiting outside the ward n doc. Comes out from ward n both get up n ask about nandini

Doc. : yeah she is absolutely f9

Navya : aur babies ?

Doc. : haan haan babies bhi bilkul thik hai

N both cabir n navya take the breath of relief

Cabir : n doc. Manik

Doc. : he is also alright
But some deep wounds are there
This is police case u should infrom the police about this

Cabir : yeah we called the police
Kya hum mil skte unshai

Doc. : u can go n meet manik
Nandini's test r going on
U can meet her after sometime
Cabir n navya enters the manik ward n manik open his eyes

Cabir goes to manik n ask " howz u "

Manik start getting up n start shouting nandini thik hai na aur humre bache

Cabir : manik relax
Nandini aur bache dono bilkul thik hai

Manik gets up n say " i want to meet nandini now "

Cabir : manik...
Tu aram kr teri halt bhut kharab hai

Manik : nhi cabir..
Nhi main ushai dekhe bina nhi rhai skta

N he goes outside n cabir trys to stop him but he don't stop n he can't able to move properly also but he wants too see nandini himself that she is okay or not

N he reaches to nandini ward but doc . Stops him outside n say " tum yha kr rhai tum apne room jao yr condition is not gud "

Manik : doc. I want to meet nandini

Doc. : mil lena abhi tum rest karo
Unke kuch test chl rhai hai
Thodhi der bd mil lena

Doc. Goes

N manik standing still n looking toward nandini ward n cabir comes n put his hand on his shoulder n say "manik don't worry she is f9 "

Manik slowly move backward n sit on chair n cabir also sit with him n navya is standing with them

Manik having tear in his eyes n say why this always happen to us
I can't able to forget her screaming voice her tears

Cabir : manik...
She is f9 n tu rest kr vrna nandini ko tu aur preshn krna chta hai kya

Manik : i will not go from here

Cabir : manik...

Navya : cabir..
Leave na agr manik yhi chta hai toh it's f9 na

After some min. They all r setting adi comes shouting nandini...

Manik gets up n goes to him n holds his collar

Adi : teri himmat kaise hoe yha ane ki

Manik push him on the floor

Adi : main bs itna jana chtu ki nandini kaisi hai

Manik : stop
Agr tune apne muh se nandini ka ek br bhi aur naam liya na then i will not leave u

Adi again get n ask about nandini

N manik start beating him n cabir trys to control him & doc. Comes n say "yeh kya ho rha hai yha yeh hospital hai"

Adi : doc. Nandini kaisi hai

N manik again angerly punch him n police came there n arrest him n adi again again taking nandini name n manik again trys to punch him but cabir controls him
N police arrested him n go

Cabir : manik relax just see yr condition

Manik : kaise relax yr
Cabir..
How

Nurse comes out n manik see her n ask her that if he can meet nandini n nurse allows him

N manik goes inside n sit beside her n hold her n say nandini..
Plz say something i can't see u like this
Dekho mein bilkul thik hn
Kisko kuch nhi hua

N nandini open her eyes n slowly say manik...
N manik hold her hand

N nandini again n start saying manik... manik...

Manik : nandini...
Nandini..
Kya hau

Nandini : manik...
Ushne humhre bache ko bhi mr diya ab tumhai bhi mr denge

Manik : nandini...
Koe kuch nhi krega

Nandini pointing towards the door n saying manik dekho voh aa rha hai n nandini hold manik body tightly n start saying manik he will kill us
He kill our baby

Manik :nandini...
Our babies r f9 (moving his hand on head)

Nandini : u r lying
They kill our baby now u

Manik holds her face n say "nandini relax everything is f9 our babies our f9 "

Nandini is not listening to her n manik hold her hand n put on her tummy n say" feel it they r f9 "

N nandini get relax for a while n look toward manik n manik too..
N doc. Comes with cabir n navya n they comes toward nandini n nandini again start shouting manik... manik...
Yeh tumhai aur humhre bache ko mr denge

N she get up n holds manik n say "manik... they will kill us " n manik trys to control her holding her but nandini screming they will kill us
Manik : nandini...

N nurse give her injection n nandini faint n doc. Ly her on bed

N manik standing still n he is having tear in his eyes by seeing her this condition than he ask the doc.

Manik : doc. Nandini ko kya hua why she behaving so weired
Doc. Come with me

Navya manik n cabir comes with doc. In cabin

Doc. : she is in shock
That's why she is behaving like this

Manik : thik toh ho jaegi na voh
Doc. : yeah time ke sth sb thik ho jaega

Manik again goes to nandini n hold her n say nandini sb thik h
Why r taking so much of tension
Koe humhai alg nhi kr skta
Everything will be f9

N he kiss on nandini forehead
N manik about to go n nandini hold his hand

Nandini : manik...(slowly)

Manik hold her face n say nandini r u okay na

Nandini : hmm...
Manik tum thik ho
I m sorry manik this all my fault
Yeh sb meri vjha se hua
(Start crying )

Manik : sh...
Nandini issmhe tumhari koe glti nhi hai
Suna tumhne

Nandini get up n hug manik tighly n say manik "i m so sorry"



No word say... waiting for yr... comments
Stay Blessed
Love Mehak






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Edited by Mehaklovely - 9 years ago
manik11 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hiee OMG what was that... nice update... continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Really emotional update!
For a moment i thought Nandini lost her children😭
Beautifully written dear!👏
Continue soon...
Thanks for the pm!
Take care😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sanikagokhale

Really emotional update!

For a moment i thought Nandini lost her children😭
Beautifully written dear!👏
Continue soon...
Thanks for the pm!
Take care😃


Thanx... dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
Seriously yr hamesha manan ke sath hi kyu ... adi ne to had par kar di ...
I hope ab sab aage thik hoga .
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nyc update...
Now plz keep manan happy
Bhoth drama hogya
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
OMG... All emotions in one update.
Loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update. ...
Mindblowing. ..amazing. ..
Vry emotional...!!
Ohh god...this adi...I hate him...cant he gt that straight that nandini loves manik. ...!!
I really want him out of manan's life...
Grt wrk. ..keep it up. ..
Bye tc stay blessed. ...!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
I hate adi
I hope now adi is out of manan life
Manan update was nice
And nothing happened to babies
Superb update
Fab update
Loved it
Loved the update
Update the next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for pm
N here I was getting happy that adi chapter is closed
I hope he leaves them alone
They have suffered so much already!
N now even nandu is in shock
Hopefully adi goes away forever sot hat manan can be happy!

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