#4 MANAN FF LOVE IS MY LIFE LINK TO THREAD 5 ON PG 152 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
its been two days bdd.no updates... wat hpnd...


update it soon...
waiting..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART 171 :

RESHMA : arey arey ye aasu kyu hmmm and wipes manik tears

RAJ : tum nahi samjogi reshma chodo

RESHMA : kyaaa matlab

RAJ : ab bichara sagayi karke zindagi bar ke liye bakra banra hain tho aansu tho ayengi hi naa

Manik and mohan smile whole heartedly while reshma hits raj playfully nodding her head

RAJ : vaise manik tu ne kya socha hain matlab sagayi kaha hogi kaise hogi aur

MANIK : papa relax main aapko sab bataonga aur aap please and stops abruptly closing his eyes tightly

KABIR : saale

DHRUV : kuthe

MUKTHI : Kamine

ALIA : how dare you haaa

MANIK : listen guys

KABIR : tu jaa baad main aur kisi aur ko apna kahani suna

MANIK : kabir

MUKTHI : yar why are you even talking to him chelo na ham apne princess ko lekar chelthe hain

RESHMA : kaha

ALIA : bahar hame kaam hain

RAJ : arey nahi do din main sagayi hain tho

MUKTHI : kya sagayi

ALIA : kiski sagayi

DHRUV : nahi nahi

KABIR : ham apne shona ki sagayi aise insan ke sath hone nahi denge

RESHMA : arey chup karo tum log

DHRUV : ham mazak nahi karre hain

ALIA : haan and manik how on earth can u decide everything without even talking to us

RAJ : arey usne ham se hi kuch bath nahi ki hain tho tumse kya karega

MANIK : daddd

KABIR : tu na

RESHMA : bas ab chup ek dam chup

KABIR : kya chup aap

RESHMA : maine kaha na chup

Kabir pouts and looks her while raj giggles seeing his expression

RESHMA : aap has kyu rahe hain

Raj becomes silent while kabir giggles

RESHMA : main sab ko bolri hoon ab thak ka mazak bohuth ho gaya hain aur ab sab serious honge

Everyone looks her silently while she continuous pehli bath koyi bi mere bete ko thang nahi karega

DHRUV : aap karo tho teek ham karo tho not teek ye konsi bath huyi

RESHMA : dhruvvv

MANIK : maa teek hain na chodo aur tum log sab let me make it clear to u sab achanak hua isliye maine kisi se bi kuch nahi kaha so yes parsu manik malhotra aur nandini moorthy ki sagayi hain jise koyi bi nahi rok saktha hain aur jo hogi aur kisi bi haal main bas hogi

Navya, abhi and soha who enter at the same time gets surprised listening this while FAB 4 looks him without blinking their eyes controlling their smile

MANIK : hmmm since nothing is started bohuth sara kaam pada hain which ill explain you in a order because wo sara kaam tum sab log milke hi karoge

All open their mouths in an o while he further continues dad aap log ek list thayar kijiye guests ka so that invitations can be sent easily

RESHMA : aur main

Manik smiles and kissing her temple aap bas rest kijiye aur parlour jake ache se thayar ho jayiye

RAJ : yee looo beta sagayi parsu hain

MANIK : haan tho maa aap do din bi rest kijiye aur parlour jayiye bas

RAJ : haan haan thaki sab confuse ho jaye ki asal main dulhan kon hain aur dulhan ki maa kon

All burst out in laughter while reshma glares raj angrily

ABHI : vaise dulhan hain kaha

NAVYA : dikayi nahi deri hain

MOHAN : nandu nandu

ALIA : babyyy come down naa

KABIR : shonaaa pleaseee

RESHMA : beta jaa thu jake usse bula la

MANIK : hmmm

KABIR : haan haan jaa vaise bi mouke ka intezar kartha rehtha hain

Manik hits him on stomach and quickly runs up

NANDINI ROOM :

Manik locks the door and slowly walks into room.

Knowing where she might be he slowly takes steps forward towards balcony wearing a smile.

As soon as he reaches very close nandu turns and hugs him with great force making him loose his balance.

He somehow manages and stands straight holding her tightly wearing a smile constantly.

MANIK : chupke bathe suna buri adath hain

She doesn't say anything and just stays like that.

He just smiles and happily closes his eyes enjoying her warmth

She kisses his heart making him smile hugely and again rests her head on his heart closing her eyes

MANIK : vaise ab kya kehna hain

She opens her eyes but doesn't say anything

MANIK : nahi matlab thodi der pehle tumne sagayi ke liye na kaha hain tho phir ab

She smiles but immediately hiding it slowly breaks the hug

He raises his eyebrows while she says looking straight into his eyes "abi bi na hi hain"

MANIK : achaaa par jis tharah se tumne mujhe huggg kiyaaa and smiles seeing her smile turning her face blushing and then kair lekin tumhe patha hain na

Nandu turns towards him while he suddenly pulls her close with a jerk and main badi asani se tumhari iss naa ko haan main badal saktha hoon hmmm

She looks down controlling her smile and tries to push him only to get more closer to him

They both share an intense eye lock and she slowly cupping his face brings his face closer to her and kisses his forhead

He closes his eyes feeling her touch while she further kisses his both eyes lovingly one by one

He smiles and only smiles while she further kisses his both cheeks one by one caressing them with utmost love

He slowly opens his eyes and looks her while she too looks him caressing the mole present on his upper lip

She moves deathly close to him and mutters a thank you on his lips without breaking their eye lock while he stands completely lost in her eyes...



Sry sry sryyy ek tho update itni der ke baad kiya aur wo bi ye chotu vala lekin please isse kaam chela lena next update pakka lamba dene ki koshish karungi am really sry bohuth tired thi isliye patha nahi kya likhdi so please maaf kardena and am sending pm to all those who are on my buddy list so please am requesting you once again do buddy me if u want pm aur kisi ko mera pm nahi chahiye ho jo mere buddy list main hain tho thab bi batha dena...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
Awesome update...
Loved it... Sooo cute... Loved Manik n reshma...

Koi baat nhi for the small update... Take rest ...
Conti soon
Will be waiting
😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
u are an amazing writer and continue soon
and u writing part no words to describe dhikh hi gaya ho ga hehe
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Update was nyc...
Waiting fr yur nxt update. ...
Continue soon
Take care. ...!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
congrats on the new thread...

awesome update...

loved it so much...

manan are just too cute...

loved the scene with everyone...pulling and teasing each other...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Update was nice...
Manik convinced all but still he has to wait for his Love's yes...😉but Nandini is also superb na...
Waiting for your update eagerly.. Try to update faster...

Thank you for PM..
Take care...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
Nyc update 😊
Try 2 update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
sweets finally you updated...firstly congratulations for the brand new thread...secondly haapy children's day if you're younger than me...and lastly thanks for the pm...coming to the update...its full on entertaining... manik's confession in previous update and maa paapa's agreement for Manan's engagement its really heart touching... manik and maa's bonding its just mashallah... than entry of fab4 along with navbhi abd their queries to manik and their leg pulling session was too funny...reshma maa's glares and dialogue were mind blowing... oh manik's just ordering everyone... bande mein dham hai boss...oh cutee... manik said maa to just take rest and spend time in parlor... only Mr malhotra can do this...hayee nandu nayi naveli sharmili dulhan... she just hugged him and showered him with all her love to him...superb update Sweets... i enjoyed a lot... continue soon... its not at all chotu part...take care stay blessed
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Congts for new thread😊...
awsome update...
cont soon😛😛...

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