MANAN TS:ITS UR LOVE (Part-3 on page 19)(CONFESSION)(completed) - Page 12

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ChocolatePie14

IT WAS A GOOD REALISATION... LOVED IT... HAPPY DIWALI... LOVE YOU...

Thanks dear And Happy diwali to u too😛
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shanuqureshi

Hey diya ...

Update was awesome ... fantastic...
Finally manan face off ... and very emotional song but i like it..
Very beautifully describe their face off part...
Then manik came to know about abhi... his anger ...
i thought manik abhi ko blue or black na krde... 😆
Finally like finally manik realise his love for nandini...😛
Cabir aur abhi ka plan work kr gaya... too good..
I really love this update dear...
superb work dear keep it up...
waiting for confession part... plz continue soon...
A very happy Diwali diya... enjoy...
Stay blessed and happy..
Take care..
Lots of love..


Thanks inaya
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Kavyashree22

Wow!! Damn!! It was oossaamm!! Loved the update.. And for manik..hehe happy realisation..

Thanks yaar😛
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kimnana

FINALLY CABIR N ABHI MADE HIM REALIZED

HE LOVES HER ...LOVELY WAITING FOR CONFESSION
TY FOR PM
P.S WISHING U HAPPY DIWALI FILLED WITH JOY N HAPPINESS

Thanks ...happy diwali to you too😛
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anjanbapidas

it was awesome update. Finally manik realised what he feels for nandini am so happy with the update thankyou. Continue soon. Thanks for the pm. Tack care.

Thanks dear😛
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: vaishnavigarla

wow awesome update
cabir and abhi rocked finally
they made manik realizes his feelings
waiting for the confession
cont soon

Thanks dear😛
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Cutesanjana1008

Res

unres

i know i'm damn late bt sorry...

super duper amazing update...
the song sequence was too good...

they met after such a long time...
they both are so hurt...

jealousy wala scene...hehe...
finally cabir ne usse samjha diya...akal aa gayi hamare majnu manik ko...😆😆

abhi is too good...he understood him...
waiting for confession...

continue soon


LOVE
SANJANA
Thanks sanjana😛


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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey guys ...Happy diwali ...well right now am totally free ...bcz rituals are over ...that's why I thought to write ...here is ur last update...CONFESSION UPDATE...hope you guys like it ...ENJOY😛

Part-3

Manik smilingly said : yes I love her ...I really do ...one sec. How on the earth am going say her ...I mean that's not easy for her to believe me ...kuch doch manik ...kuch soch ...

Suddenly am idea strikes in his mind and he smiled and left from there ...everyone was happy ...party was in full swing ...nandani was talking to mukti , navya, aliya ...but suddenly she felt something very unusual...she is confused bcz everyone is here ...then what was the feeling ...then she heard him ...her manik ...her one an only love ...

Manik : THIS IS FOR U MY LOVE ...

Nandani pov :

My love ...yes he loves aliya naa ...she looked at Aliya ...who was looking down ...then at manik who was just looking at her...what was happening ...why on the earth ...he is looking at me ...why not aliya ...aayappaa...what's going on ...

Manik knew what she must be thinking ...but he was smiling today ...his smile didn't left from his face not for a second ...he tunrd his guitar ...

Pal, do pal, ki hi kyun hai zindagi
Iss, pyar, ko hai sadiyaan kaafi nahi
Toh khuda se maang lun
Mohalat main ik nayi
Rehna hai bas yahaan
Ab door tujhse jaana nahi
Jo tu mera humdard hai
Jo tu mera humdard hai
Suhaana har dard hai
Jo tu mera humdard hai


(Manik was all the time ...but nandani looked at him with blank expression ...she didn't knew what's going on ...why he is looking at me ...he should be look at Aliya naa ...then why me)

Teri muskurahatein hain taaqat meri
Mujhko inhi se ummeed mili
Chaahe kare koi sitam ye jahaan
Inme hi hai sadaa hifaazat meri
Zindagani badi khoobsurat hui
Jannat ab aur kya hogi kahin
Jo tu mera Humdard hai
Jo tu mera Humdard hai
Suhaana har dard hai
Jo tu mera Humdard hai

(Manik remember how nandani must be having pain
...when he proposed aliya ...bcz of his stupidity ...she cried a lot ...and here Nandani remember all the moments that she spend with him ...but when she got to knew he loves aliya ...how she broke ...a lone tear came from her eyes ...)

Wooo...

Teri dhadkano se hai zindagi meri
Khwahishein teri ab duaaein meri
Kitna anokha bandhan hai ye
Teri meri jaan jo ek hui
Lotunga yahaan tere paas main haan
Waada hai mera mar bhi jaaun kahin
Jo tu mera humdard hai
Jo tu mera humdard hai
Suhaana har dard hai
Jo tu mera humdard hai




hmmm.. humdard hai
hmmm.. humdard hai
hmmm.. humdard hai
hmmm.. humdard hai...

(Manik ended the song and held the Mike in his hands and said)

Manik:Hii guys ...u all knew me ...am manik ...manik malhotra ...main vahi hu jisne 4 saal pehle ...issi jagah par aaliya ko propose kiya tha ...aur aaj main yahi par khada hokar ...tumse maafi maangta hu Aliya ...am sorry aliya ...jo maine kiya unsab ke liye ...I knew u must be very angry ...but still ...still u want my happiness...Aliya am really sorry ...

Aliya smiled and came towards manik and said

Aliya : Manik in these four years ...u never smiled ...u just carried a fake smile ...but u knew today I see that smile ...I saw that manik ...jisse 4 saal pehle maine pyar kiya tha ...manik I always wanted to see that love in ur eyes ...but ...I ...i couldn't ...par aaj mujhe voh pyar dikha ...par voh mere liye nahi ...aur main tumse naaraz nahi hu ...isme hum dono ka fault ha ...I want u to get ur happiness ...u r free manik ...u ...r

Nandani was looking at them confusingly

Nandani pov :
What is going on ...first song and now this ...manik loves someone else ...pat kaun ...aur manik ne yeh song meri taraf dekh kar kyu gaya ...god ...what is happening ...I couldn't understand ...

Manik smiled and walked towards nandani and sit on his knees ...

Manik : Nandani u knew u r my shining star ...u always shine for me ...Whenever I needed u were there ...u brought me out of the darkness ...u knew nandani when you left naa ...u didn't go alone ...u take me with u ...u take my heart ...my soul...my smile with u ...I never smile in these 4 yrs ...am just waiting for that day When you came in my life ...and started shining For me ...like u usually do ...nandani I wanna a ask you something ...will you shine for me for the life time ? Will u love me like I do? Will you marry me Nandani ? Will u want to carry my babies ? Eill u want to grow old with me ?...Nandani I love you ...I really do ...please tell me Nandani will u ...

Nandani was just looking at manik ...she was shocked and happy at the same time ...but then she looked at abhi ...who was looking at her ...no I can't be selfish ...a guy who loves me selflessly ...how can I ditch him ...no I can't ...I just can't ...do that ...I can't be selfish ...am sorry Manik ...I have to do this ...

Nandani : Manik utho ...aur band karo yeh drama ...u don't love me ...u love aliya ...

Manik : No nandani I love you ...when I proposed aliya ...I just like her ...I thought ki pyar toh ho hi jaayega ...par nahi hua ...nandani I ...I love u ...please believe me ...

Nandani shouted : Manik common ...now u said u don't love aliya ...did u even realize what are saying ? U spend 4 yrs ...god damit ...4 yrs ...and u said u just like her ...kal ko toh tum mujhe bhi yeh keh doge ...am sorry nandani u r just mine attraction I love someone else ...no manik malhotra am not like them and my answer is no ...no ...no ...no...

Nandani left from there but manik was just looking at her ...till she disappear ...abhi came forward and patted his shoulder ...

Abhi : don't worry ...I will talk to her ...she loves you ...she didn't accept bcz she didn't want to hurt me ...Don't worry ...

Abhi left from there ...looking for her ...nandani went to the garden and sat on her knees and crying bitterly ...

Nandani :kyu kiya ...kyu kiya aapne mere saath ...kyu aayappaa ...kya main itni buri hu ...aap jaante the main abhi ko hurt nahi kar sakti ...par main yeh dekh kar khush rehti ki mera manik khush ha ...par ab ...ab maa..ni..k...voh mujhse pyar karta ha ...kitni badkismat hu main aaj main apne pyar ko yeh bhi nahi bata sakti ki main usse pyar karti hu ...kyu aayappaa ...kyu ...pehle maa papa ...aur ab manik ...kyu chin lete ho aap mukhse sab kuch ...kya itni buri hu main ...boliye...

Abhi looked at nandani and placed his hand on her shoulder and said

Abhi : Nandani

Nandani looked at him and immediately wipes her tears and said

Nandani : Abhi tum yaha

Abhi : Nandani ...manik loves you ...

Nandani : Abhi please ...

Abhi : Nandani meri baat suno ...manik pyar ksrta ha tumse ...sacha pyar ...kyu tum usse voh sab kaha jo sach nahi ha .
...

Nandani shouted : Toh kya karti main ...bolo kya ...tum ek baat batao kya tum mujhse pyar nahi karte...

Abhi helplessly said: Nandani...mere pyar karne yaa naa katne se koi pharak nahi padta ...farak padta ha toh yeh ki tum kisse pyar karti ho ...nandani please esa mat karo ...esa karne se tum ek nahi ...balki teen teen zindagiyan barabad kar dogi ...please Nandani go and tell him that u too love him ...please go ...

Nandani : what about u?

Abhi : My happiness lies to u Nandani ...I'll be the most happiest person ...if u marry manik ...he truly loves you ...just go ...he is waiting for you ...

Nandani smiled and hugged him and ran from there and reach the corridor where manik was still sitting in his knees ...and lost somewhere ...nandani come and hugged him tightly ...manik was so shocked to react ...

Nandani : Am sorry manik ...am really sorry ...

Manik hugged her back and said : it's okay Nandani if you don't

But nandani cut him in mid and said

Nandani : stupid am sorry bcz I said a lot to u ...but really I didn't mean it ...

Manik : That means

Nandani smiled : yes I will ...I will love to marry you ...I would love to love you ...I would love to carry ur babies ...I would love to grow old with you ...and yes I will shine for you always ...HAMESHA

MANIK smiled and said : HAMESHA

Nandani : HAMESHA

Both hugged each other and manik get ofc his coat and put it into them ...and cupped nandani's face and slowly kissed her ...they kissed each other slowly ...it's not lust it's a promise to be with each other ALWAYS...


THE END!!!


Bas that's it ...guys ...I hope you guys like it ...Happy diwali guys ...I hope this diwali brings a lot of happiness in ur life ...I hope guys this is upto ur Expectations ...
Okay guys bye
Love you all
Keep loving
Keep smiling
Keep enjoying
And
Keep shining For Ur loved ones
Love
Diya😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi dear the story is ended happy ending finally and dear happy diwali to u
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome story
Loved it
Continue soon
Happy Diwali
And have a safe Diwali too
Take care
:)

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