MaNan TS: Innocence (COMPLETED wd BANNER). - Page 48

Originally posted by: Palchinn

Ohh this update.. is far far and more above my expectations 😳
This is like WOW.. ! 😉 You nailed it girl !!

I actually thought this one to hav MaNan confession with some emotional ending..
How on earth i forgot.. That its you who is the writer 😃 there has to be something unexpected 😉

This Manik i tell you.. Really.. As Nandini said .. How on earth can some one be so stupid?!! 🤣
A lovable Idiot he is 😉

Nandini 🤣 you actually were complaining about Manik and his staff in front of Manik.. 🤣 This I call is real Innocence 😛

And Manik was already all set with the ring 😉 & how can we miss the famous Nandini's punch !! 😉

I just loved it.. You can actually believe me by this lengthy comment of mine 🤣

And no way this is ur last update.. I want Mr. Rockstar vala FF to be continued once you are done with your exams !!!

All the very best !! Stay blessed 😊

Originally posted by: Sm0405

Omg ... This so awesome nd very interesting ... Though it was the last part bt I loved it very much ...

U know my battisi was in full flash mode ... Love everything frm the strt to end ... Specially tht verbal fight between MaNan ... Nd nd nd also Nandini's description abt Malhotra industry ...

Omg when she said abt Cabir I jst burst out laughing ... Really loved it ...

So finally everything is sorted between MaNan ... Nd they confessed ... Finally they are MaNan now ... Also Manik got a taste of Nandini's punch ... Nd seriously Manik did tht to divert her mind ... Lyk seriously ...

I really loved this update very much ... So our Manik arranged a birthday party fr Nandini ... Nd Nandini's expressions after knowing tht Malhotra industry belongs to him ... It was really priceless ...

Thank u soo much fr writing this awesome story ... U seriously penned it superbly ... I jst can't stop smiling after reading this ...

Waiting fr u to continue ur ff ... Hope u continue soon ... Thank u again for your writing ...