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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update..please don't stop the story midway..continue and give a Happy ending😊The confession was a variety👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
Great update dear
Loved ur story a lot
Nandu confession was just mind blowing
Plzzz pm me ur next updtae plzz 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fantastic update...all the gang helping nandini and her confession and Maniks reaction to it is just awesome and the first kiss after confession full of love followed by the teasing of our innocent nandini and manik is getting naughtier with each passing day...that kiss is damn hot and now what will happen waiting for the next update please continue soon:)

I know the show is ending but many are continuing their stories I hope and wish you continue this story this is one of my favorites please do continue the story :)
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its avery interesting story
i today itself come to on this and i read full in one go
every part have magic
continue soon
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Part 14 D

He pulled her with a jerk that she smashed on his chest.
"You have to kiss me... On my lips..." He went close to her mouth and said seductively.
She put her hand on her mouth and make aw out of it.
"What... You don't want to kiss me... " he was watching her facial expressions and rollinghis tongue inside his cheek.
"Maine aisa tou Nahi kaha..." Again it slipped out of her mouth.
"Matlab you want to kiss me..." He bend to her height and asked with excitement.
"Nahi... Woh... I..." The words where struck in her throat,not ready to come out.
"Pehle decide,kar lo ki tum mujhe kiss Karna chahti ho ya Nahi..." He was enjoying a lot teasing her.
"Woh... Actually... Li... Lips pe... Kiss... Karna zaroori hai Kya..." She bend her eyes down looking on his heart and asked.
" Haan... Kahi aur ki gunjaayesh nahi hai..." Manik point blankly replied.
" but aapne kar diya na..." She again was impulsive in answering.
'Aiyyoo... Aiyyappa... Aap mujhe Rok Nahi sakte na... Mere mooh mein jo aa raha hai... Main bole jaa rahi hoon...' Nandini thought
"Tou Kya Nahi Karna chahiye tha..." He whispered lifting her chin with his fingers.
"Woh tou aapka right hai..." She very innocently told her and he was bowled again on her
Innocence.
"Jaise mera tum par right hai na... Waise hi I want you to understand that tumhara bhi
Mujh par utna hi right hai... I want you to be open with me... Aaand... Do the things thatI do with you..." Manik said in a serious tone.
"But main kaise kar sakti hoon... Main ladki hoon and... Aur aap ladke ho... Farak hai..."
Nandini was being damn naive that Manik wants to just gobble her up right here but he was controlling his desires.
"Tou Kya hua... Main tumhara hone waala pati hoon... Two days mein tum officially meri wife aur main tumhara husband ho jaaunga... So I can do what ever I want to do with youand you can do what ever you want to do with me... Ok" he was enjoying this. conversation with a smirk on his face.
"Still... Sharam tou aati hai naa... And jab aap itne paas hote ho tou mujhe aur ziyada Sharam aati hai..." Nandini's cheeks started turning red again.
"Yaar...iss Sharam ke chakkar mein mera tou bahut nukhsaan hone waala hai... Kuch Karna padega iss Sharam Ko hatane ke liye..."he said studying her.
"Kya..." She asked without thing.
"Yeh..." Saying that he bend down and gave an open mouth kiss on her right cheek and
Than
"Aur yeh bhi..." Saying it he kissed her another cheek.
She clutched his kurta by his waist and closed her eyes. She has goosebumps on her body by his sudden act.
He moved back and saw her.
"Ab issi tarha aankhein band rakhoogi tou I will not stop kissing you.
She open her eyes slowly.
"Tou bolo will you kiss me... On my lips or not... " he asked with a demand.
"Main... I... " Nandini was stammering.
"Guys we need to go... Sab aap dono Ko pooch rahe hai..." Navya Came and asked them to come.
"Ya we are coming just give us 1 minute..." Manik told her and she left.
"Yeh mutt samajhna ke Navya ki wajah se tum bach gayi... I won't spare you... Kiss tou tumhe Karna hi padega..." He grinned...
She straightens herself and said.
"Theek hai... I'll do it...but pehle aap kuch kha lijiye... Than I'll do where ever you want me to..." She said a little hesitantly.
"Really... Tum sach keh rahi ho... Back up tou Nahi karogi na..." He nik was all excited.
"Nahi karungi..." She smiled shyly at him.
"Ok I trust you... But main ziyada Nahi khaunga... We'll eat after Our performance together... Tab tak I'll eat some fruits..." He said.
She got excited and was walking to,leave.
He grab her wrist and pulled her to him with a jerk that her back collided on his big broad chest. He trace his fingers on her hand from the fingers to her shoulders and held her shoulders.
"Apne hone waale pati se itna Nahi sharmate... Main tumhari puri Sharam khatam kar doonga you just wait and watch..." He whispered near her ears and kissed under it
"And one more thing apne lipsper kuch laga lo Bahut red ho Gaye hai..." He said huskily.
Which gave her shivers to her body before letting her go.
She ran inside the house to do the touch up. And he smiled standing there.
He came to the rest of the group with a smile dancing on his lips where everyone was waiting for them.
Watching him coming alone Navya asked
"Where is Nandini..."
"Woh fresh hone gayi hai..." Manik answered.
"Tou uske aane tak yahin per wait karte hain" Navya said
After sometime Nandini came outand was smiling to herself thinking about the kiss and talk happened between her and Manik.
"Yeh apne mein aap kyun muskura rahi ho behna..." Navya asked giving her a bump on her shoulder.
" Kuch nahi..." She replied being all shy.
"So every thing fine now... Bhai tou bade khush lag rahe hai..."
Mukti asked her getting very happy for her.
Nandini hugged her tight and said
"Thank you so much Mukti you really helped a lot today... Every Thing is fine now..." She said hiding the challenge thing from
Her as this is a very personal thing To discuss with any body.
"Waise your tomato red cheeks are the proof.." Mukti teased her.
Manik is watching all this standing by them with a smile on his face and feeling happy seeing the bond that is creating between them.
As they went near the garden Rishab was already on stage waiting to announce their arrival.
"And here comes our dulha and dulhan with their friends... Let's give a welcoming applaud for ...them" and everybody clapped for them.
" thanks Mukti Dii for the wonderful idea of antakshiri.. It was really fun and the plus point was hamare family members ne bhi participate kiya..." Rishab said
"Coming to our next performance of the evening I would like to call Dhruv bhiaya and Aliya Dii on stage to show their talent..."
Every body got settled and Dhruv and Aliya went on stage for their turn
Dhruv started singing with a jestute for Aliya.
Mashallah Maashallah woh hoo ho...
Mashallah Maashallah Chehra hai Masha'Allah
Naino pe naino ka pehra hai mashallah
Tujhko churaya hai, paaya hai ye jahaan

O habibi, mashallah antashaqla azimullah
O habibi mashallah yashauq aaini miliaai hai
O habibi mashallah roopzabarbat ganini
Badganini badganini badganini taaiho

Jalta hai jal jaaye
Jalta hai jal jaaye pighal jaaye zamaana
Main tujhse, tu mujhse bas itna fasaana
Aliya was doing all the move moving her hips rolling and giving drops to her shoulders and chest in all possible ways plus singing
Teri yaariyan dildariyaan sun jaaniyan
Mili mila mujhe milana

Mashallah Maashallah...

Sholon mein sharara hai
Arey! Sholon mein sharara hai
Taaron mein sitaara
Kudrat ne fursat se banaya mera yaara
Dhruv was lifting her by holding her waist and spinning her in the air she balancing her body with the support of his shoulders.
Teri chaahatein meri raahatein
Hain ibaadatein, tu mila, mili mujhe Khudaai

Mashallah Maashallah...
As being a very versatile dancer Dhruv did perfect justice with his dance moves with the help of Aliya.
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When they were done every body cheered for them. And they were smiling heartily with the response.
"Well well well.that was one energetic performance which makes all of us awake.. Thanks for that both of you..."
" and last but not the least dulha and dulhan ke chacha and Chachi ki taraf se ek Bahut hi cute sa act ... Coz these two couples are not that good of a dancers... But because the love of their children they want to do something... So give them a big hand..."
Both the chachas and chachis were excited but they want to dance on the ground instead of stage. So the space was made for them and they started to move on the beats
Maahi Ve Maahi Ve
That's The Way Maahi Ve
Tere Maathe Jhumar Damke
Tere Kanno Baali Chamke Hai Re
Maahi Ve
Tere Haatho Kangana Khanke
Tere Pairo Payal Chanke Hai Re
Maahi Ve
Naino Se Bole Rabba Rabba
Mann Mein Dole Rabba Rabba
Amrit Ghole Rabba Rabba
Tu Soniye
Rishab also joined them in their dancing parts.
Jind Maahi Ve Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve
Everybody Sing Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve
That's The Way Maahi Ve
O Tere Aankhen Kali Kali
Tera Gora Gora Mukhdha, Hai Re
Maahi Ve
Teri Rangat Jaise Sona
Tu Chaand Ka Jaise Tukda Hai Re
Maahi Ve
Tere Gaal Gulabi Rabba Rabba
Chaal Sharabi Rabba Rabba
Dil Ki Kharabi Rabba Rabba
Tu Soniye
Jind Maahi Ve ... Aaja Mahi Ve ...Navya came and joined them and started singing. Barse Rangini Kaliyan Hai Mehki Bhini Bhini. Baje Mann Mein Halke Halke Shehnai Re. Jitne Hai Taare Aanchal Mein Aa Gaye Sare. Dil Ne Jaise Hi Li Angdayee Re Again Rishab sang and also dance. Tu Jo Aayee Sajhke Mehndi Rachke. Chal Bachke Oh Soniye. Dil Kitno Ka Khaye Dhajke Oh Soniye. Jind Maahi Ve ... Aaja Mahi Ve ...(2)
This time Amms came to Nandini and put a hand on her chin and lift it and sang with her moist eyes.
Chanda Meri Chanda Tujhe Kaise Mein Yeh Samjaoon
Mujhe Lagti Hai Tu Kitni Pyaari Re
Khusiyan Jitni Hai Sab Dhoondh Ke Laoon
Teri Doli Ke Sang Kar Do Sari Re Nandini hugged and tear drops started to fall from her eyes getting emotional. Cabir and Dhruv joined and dragged Nandini by her hands in the middle and sang. Tu Jo Aayee ... Oh Soniye
Jind Maahi Ve ... Aaja Mahi Ve ...
Tere Maathe ... Tu Soniye
Jind Maahi Ve, Jind Maahi Ve ... Aaja Mahi Ve ...All n all it was a family pack performance and everyone enjoyed it.. Now the last performance was of Manik and Nandini. The lights were gone dim and the colorful lights were turned on.
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Part 14D continued "Here comes our dulha and dulhan... I don't need to say anything about them... They look exactly like a prince and princess of the night... So go ahead Dii and jeeju the stage is all yours." Rishab said before leaving the stage for them. Manik and Nandini both were standing in the middle of the stage facing each other and the music started. He ask for her right hand and she kept it in his. He put it on his shoulder and he took her left hands in his left and started gliding with the music. Pee Loon Tere Neelay Neelay Nainon Se Shabnam
Pee Loon Tere Geelay Geelay Hoto Ki Sargam
Pee Loon Hai Peenay Ka Mausam
Tere Sang Ishq Taari Hai
Tere Sang Ik Khumari Hai
Tere Sang Chain Bhi Mujhko
Tere Sang Bekraari Hai
Tere Sang Ishq Taari Hai
Tere Sang Ik Khumari Hai
Tere Sang Chain Bhi Mujhko
Tere Sang Bekraari Hai
Tere Bin Jee Nahi Lagda, Tere Bin Jee Nahi Sakda
Tujhpe Hai Haare Maine Vaare Do Jahan, Kurbaan, Meharbaan, Ke Main Toh Kurbaan
Sun Le Zara, Tera KurbaanWhile making her spin holding her fingers he let her go around with an ease. After that he hold her elbows and pulled her hard she balanced herself by holding his shoulders.
Her heart started pounding against his chest and cheeks turned Crimson red by his closeness. He sang again.
Hosh Mein Rahun Kyun Aaj Main
Tu Meri Baahon Mein Simti Hai, Mujh Mein Samayi Hai Yun
Jis Tarah Ki Koi Hum Nadi, Tu Mere Seenay Mein Chupti Hai Sagar Tumhara Main Hoon
Pee Loon Teri Dheemi Dheemi Lehron Ki Cham Cham
Pee Loon Teri Saundi Saundi Saanson Ko Har Dum
Pee Loon Hai Peenay Ka Mausam
Tere Sang Ishq Taari Hai
Tere Sang Ik Khumari Hai
Tere Sang Chain Bhi Mujhko
Tere Sang Bekraari Hai
Tere Sang Ishq Taari Hai
Tere Sang Ik Khumari Hai
Tere Sang Chain Bhi Mujhko
Tere Sang Bekraari Hai The rhythm of their bodies were in sync and even. And they we're intoxicating each otherwith their proximity. Their body language was communicating with one another with a warmth and affection. They continued their movements Shaam Ko Milun Jo Main Tujhe
Toh Bura Subah Na Jaane Tu Kuch Maan Jaati Hai Yeh
Har Lamha, Har Gadi Har Pehar
Hi Teri Yaadon Se Tadpa Ke Mujhko Jalati Hai Yeh
Pee Loon Main Dheere Dheere Jalne Ka Yeh Gumm
Pee Loon Inn Gore Gore Haanthon Se Hum Dum
Pee Loon Hai Peenay Ka Mausam
Tere Sang Ishq Taari Hai
Tere Sang Ik Khumari Hai
Tere Sang Chain Bhi Mujhko
Tere Sang Bekraari Hai
Tere Sang Ishq Taari Hai
Tere Sang Ik Khumari Hai
Tere Sang Chain Bhi Mujhko
Tere Sang Bekraari Hai
Tere Bin Jee Nahi Lagda, Tere Bin Jee Nahi Sakda
Tujhpe Hai Haare Maine Vaare Do Jahan, Kurbaan, Meharbaan, Ke Main Toh Kurbaan
Sun Le Zara, Tera KurbaanIn the end he moved his hands on her bare waist and pulled her more closer so that. she can be comfortable in his embrace. She glide her arms around his waist and held him tight putting her head on his heart... And she closed her eyes feeling his heart beat..
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Part 14D. Continued...The whole crowd started cheering for them Cabir Mukti Aliya and Dhruv and Navya came on the stage and hugged them without letting them break their trance. Cabir started playing drums and Mukti and Aliya took on their instruments and Dhruv held on to his guitar. Nandini and Navya were about to go down from the stage but Manik hold both of their hands and indicated them to be here. And The fab5 started their bang on music. Manik started singing looking at Nandini.
Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai
Dhadkane Meri Sun,
Tujhko Main Kar Loon Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun.
Zindgi Ki Shakh Se Loon Kuchh Hasin Pal Le Chun
Tujhko Main Kar Loo Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi DhunCabir sang looking at Navya.Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai
Dhadkane Meri Sun
Tujhko Main Kar Loon Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun
Zindgi Ki Shakh Se Loon Kuchh Hasin Pal Le Chun
Tujhko Main Kar Loo Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun Manik continued Jo Bhi Jitne Pal Jeeyu
Unhe Tere Sang Jeeyu
Jo Bhi Kal Ho Ab Tera Use Tere Sang Jeeyu
Jo Bhi Saanse Main Bharoo Unhe Tere Sang Bharoo
Chahe Jo Hona Rasta Use Tere Sang Chalu Dhruv sang looking at Aliya through her side views.

Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai
Dhadkane Meri Sun
Tujhko Main Kar Loo Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi DhunManik was keeping constant eye contact with Nandini not letting her blink her eyes. And continued singing.

Mujhko De Tu Mit Jaane
Ab Khudse Dil Mil Jaane
Kyu Hai Yeh Itna Fasla...
Lamhe Yeh Phir Naa Aane
Inko Tu Naa Le Jaane
Tu Mujh Pe Khudko De Loota...
Tujhe Tujhse Tod Loo Kahi Khudse Jod Loo
Mere Jism O Jaan Main Aa Teri Khusboo Odh Loo
He continued again. Nandini's eyes get moist understanding the words of the song.
Jo Bhi Saanse Main Bharoo Unhe Tere Sang Bharoo
Chahe Jo Hona Rasta Use Tere Sang Chalu
Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai
Dhadkane Meri Sun
Tujhko Main Kar Loo Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun
Nandini was standing there on the stage getting emotional by his words. She didn't want to let the tears flow from her eyes. She was overwhelmed by the dept of the song.
Bahoon Main De Bas Jaane. Sine Main De Chhup JaaneTujh Bin Main Jaaunga Kaha
Tujhse He Mujhe Ko Paane Yaado K Woh Nazrane
Ek Jinpe Haq Ho Bas Mera

Teri Yaado Main Rahoo
Tere Khwabo Main Jagoo
Mujhe Doondhe Jab Koi
Teri Aankho Main MiluHe was literally pleading with his words to her. And she not able to control her tears and Feelings ran towards him and hugged her by his waist making a tight grip on his back. Without thinking of where she is and how many people is around them. She hide her face in his chest. He smiled and took her in his embrace. Cabir continued the song. Jo Bhi Saanse Main Bharoo
Unhe Tere Sang Bharoo
Chahe Joho Rasta Use Tere Sang Chalu

Dil Ibadat Kar Raha Hai
Dhadkane Meri Sun
Tujhko Main Kar Loo Hasil Lagi Hai Yahi Dhun
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aww.. So cute..
Nandini getting all shy type..hehe
Kiss om lips... Lol majnumanik...
Cute performance of sol..
Waiting fr manan's performance 😆

Wow... Wht a performance..mind-blowing...
Maniks song fr nandu.. Aww.. Nandu ws so captivated tht she jst hugged him..aww
Awesome update 😆
U HAVE TO CONTINUE PLS
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After the song was done the garden was echoing with the claps and applaud and all of the crowd was cheering for them. Nandini break the trance and moved away from him getting shy and blushing at the same time. Manik was smiling all the time. "Hmmm so she is opening up... Not bad " he thought to himself. All the guest started to take the leave and congratulate them on Their performances. In the end only Malhotra's and Murthy's were left and were chilling on the chairs. Nandini was asking Manik to eat something with her eyes. He did not give a heed to her as he wants what he asked for first. Nyonika was talking to Narendra about something so everybody's concentration diverted towards her. "Narendra bhai Saab aapse ek request karni thi... If you don't mind." She asked him. "Arey Bhabi aap sharminda kar rahi hai... Aap boliye Kya baat hai." Narendra said. "Nandini beti Abhi tak hamare ghar Nahi aayi hai... Main chahti Hoon ki woh pehle beti ban kar apne ghar mein khadam rakhe... Do din baad tou usse aana hi hai naye rishte banane.. Tou sab se pehle... I want her to enter the house as my daughter.. agar aap ijazath de tou can she come tomorrow at any time with all of you..." She asked very politely. "Iss mein meri permission ki Kya zaroorath hai aap hi ki beti hai aap jab chahe usse le jaa sakti hai..." Narendra said "Tou theek hai..tomorrow morning around 11 or 12 I'll send Manik or Dhruv the pick you guys up.." She confirmed. "Bhabi how about Sirf Nandini hi agar aayi tou... Kyun ki Kal haldi and mehndi hai to ghar per bahut saare Kaam hai...tou Thoda difficult ho jaayega sab ka aana...Navya join ho jaayegi... Please don't mind..." He also requested. "Koi baat Nahi... I can understand... Shaadi ka ghar hai... Kaam bahut Honge. Theek hai phir hum log ab nikalte hai.." Asking the permission to leave they exchanged their byes and good nights to each other. when every body was settled in their cars only Manik and Cabir was left as Manik came in his own BMW. He received a txt. He took out his phone to check it. PLEASE MEET ME BEFORE YOU LEAVE. The txt was from Nandini. He smiled. "Mom dad Cabir has to pick up,some stuff from his home so you guys leave we'll be coming a little later..."Manik told his parents. " I do.. When did I say that... Mujhe kyun nahi pata ki mujhe Kuch saaman pick Karna hai.." Cabir was blabbering hearing Manik.. Manik elbowed him and jestured him to keep quiet. "Yeh main hi kyun phansta hoon hamesha..." He murmured to himself.They all left and Manik turned to look at Nandini she smiled at Manik and turned to walk in side. Manik and Cabir sat in the car and drove out of the parking and Manik stopped the car. "Ok spill it out Kya chakkar hai..."Cabir looked at him and asked."Nothing yaar I have to meet Nandini before leaving... So I'm waiting for her msg.." Manik coolly answers



.End of part 14D So how's it give your feed back and response with lots of commentsI'm so sorry to keep you all waiting. I have my finals going on.It's all scattered in this two weeks. But don't worry I'll update. As the show is coming to an end on December 31st do you guys want me to continue this story. If you guys want that I will definitely continue but if I don't get response and reviews than it will not be motivating enough to write.So please lemme know if I continue or not.Thank you so much for your love and support. And I read all yourcomments it means a lot to me and it encourages me. So THANK YOU once again.
Edited by Redcrystal - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
First of all
Its a request to All the writers

Plz plz plz do continue with Ur ffs

Yes d show is ending

Nt anyways the stories u write r fiction


N nt related to the real Show's plot Xpt for d characters

V enjoy reading Ur stuff bcoz v luv dese characters especially manan

N dat will remain forever

So plz dnt discontinue


Now coming to the update

It is wonderful

Thankfully she's opening up

Eagerly waiting for the next update

N thanxx for d pm

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