MANAN FF DO DIL EK JAAN LINK TO THREAD 2 ADDED ON PG 1 - Page 17

Originally posted by: SIAZAHEED.1

i found ur story nw.. ns start reading..

i jst loved the dialogue.. very much naughty 1//😃😉

""Get ready to shiver in the hands of most naughtiest husband" and I trembled badly blushing horribly...""

lovelyy...😊

Originally posted by: dua_arafat

It was hot and nice
the way he was teasing her and removing her jewellery was awsum
Enjoyed their romantic moments 😳
I like the romance you wrote and the way you wrote
Beautifully written
Manik bhi wapis naughty ho gaya 😆
Ab nai jane de ga...
Take care
Stay blessed
Love
Dua...

Originally posted by: manancraze

This is not for yaar...aisi intense moment ko cliff hanger bana dia...

Anyways coming to the update...

OMG... Nandini k sath sath even my breath also hitched...😳.I m blushing...☺️.

Manik... My dear naughty pie...😳.

Romance was blissful... Loved their intense moment...

Totally well written...👏.

Don't need to edit it all... I think we all r mature enough to handle this kinda scenes... It's completely OK...

Cont soon.

Take care.😛

super hot update...
update was mind blowing as always...
the way manik was teasing her... n d way she blushes..
his dialogues were superb ... Like I want to eat ur chubby cheeks... aww super cute...
plz update next part soon...
waiting... n loved ur update...
thanks for d pm...

stay blessed... 😊

Sry 4 late cmnt...

it was awsum honeyyy update nxt soon luv yaaa

hot nd romantic... not vulgar...

Loving it

read all parts in one go...
amazing...
beautifully penned...
... so romantic N hot...
...manan...