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Cooldude101

@Cooldude101

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#121

This be love❤️
I would not be doing enough justice to your master piece by appreciating it in words, because its amazingness is somehing beyond words could describe.
Continue soon, it is an absolute pleasure to read your story

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sharon.babu

@sharon.babu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#122

awesome update...

loved it so much...

loved the cops scene...confiscating their guitars...hilarious...

nandu and her F bombs and very surprising...i never imagined nandu to swear this much...

her stepmom seems so rude and selfish...who doesn't like nandu cause she isn't her daughter and wants her to be looked down in society and takes advantage of the fact that she can do everything cause her father just stays quiet when they argue with each other about everything...

hope manan one day just kiss and show the society so they shut their mouths...so that they never open again...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

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sonia1000

@sonia1000

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Posted: 9 years ago

#123

Can you please update twice a day lol..because it's impossible to wait for next part..The way story is heading is just awesome..please update soon

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qamarkhan87

@qamarkhan87

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Posted: 9 years ago

#124

Nice update..

Harshad and manan convo hahaha

An the f word never imagined nandu being so bold

And cop scene was amazing guitars as machine guns hahahahahaa and they runaway

Her step mom is so rude

Continue soon

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Tishyy

@Tishyy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#125

Simply superb
Kudos to u gal

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Sid

@BrightNSparkle

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Posted: 9 years ago

#126

The face off MaNan and harshad was nice... Oh aryaman also came there... Oh the cop scene was nice...

The final convo of MaNan was too good...

Thanks for the update

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sahasimren

@sahasimren

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Posted: 9 years ago

#127

I loved the last part of the chapter.

It made me smile really wide :)

It was amazing.

Post the next update soon please.

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@MaNanholapeople

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#128

Wow just loved it really all the parts to harshad scene to Manan scene all of them and i just wish this story to be a book so that i would know what comes after that no no not a book but a fat novel. :D

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Lizbeth

@Lizbeth

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Posted: 9 years ago

#129

Yaaayieee.. Its suprbb.. Amazing lyk awsm. I toh luvd it to d core.
Frm d vry frst, mahhn i luv dat song. My MJ's Beat it.. Fav song.
Yaar ds aaryamn ,, z gonna cum btw my manan.
Harshad harshad..,, I enjoyd Harshad Nandini tashan.. Suprbb. Manik malhotra bhi kam nai haii.. The mst funny part ws, nandini lredy broke hs teeth.. Lyk really.. ROFL ..
Awww dese two r soo cute .. D way manik made her smile n ol.. Amazing..